WE ARE FRIENDS [MG FF] PART5PAGE 13 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely start waiting for u to start...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start sruthi
waiting for the story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THS IS GOOD YEAHHH KEEP GOING ITS BEAUTIFUL YAAR 🤗❤️🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love the character intros and I'm glad you're using other characters that are familiar to us 😊 Cant wait to read it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz update soon...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting dear...
cont soon and pm me...
have sent the buddy invite...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice cs dear
waiting for you to update
and please add me to ur pm list

thanks for the PM remya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi. Thanks for your comments and likes. I didn't expect this much responces for my CS. All thanks to my darlig Remya chechi ( Remya pillai) for her encouragements and helps. And here I'm wishing a very happy b'day to her. Now comes to my 1st part of my 1st FF, I'm not good in both English and Hindi. Kindly avoid my mistakes.

Part1

A beautiful morning of Mumbai. Beginning of another restless day for the people in Mumbai. A beautiful house. Here in the upstairs, in a big room, in a king size bed. Oh someone is lying there. ?! Blanket covered his/her face too. Who it will be?

Downstairs

Someone: "Savitha where are you? I'm getting late for the office".

S: Coming

[ Here comes Savitha w/o Mr. Rajveer Khurana. Savitha enters the room and helps her husband in getting ready]

R: Mrs. Khurana, our Jr.Khurana kahan hei? Aaj uska pehla din hena office mein? Wo ready hogaya kya? Ya phir "lazy king" abhi tak so rahe ho?

S: oho mr. Khuarana, kyu itna gussa kar rahe ho? Mein jaakar dekhlungi. Aap jaldi jaayiye. Varna aap late hojayenge.

R: teek he. Bye.

[He leaves. And she goes to upstairs finding "the prince" sleeping. Yes that's none other than our hero]

S:OMG, Maan beta, its your first day in your office right? And you ar going to be late from the very 1st day![She slowly removes the blanket only to find our prince charming sleeping like a baby. She slowly caressed his hair and said] Look, it's already 7.00am

[Maan immediately got up]

M: what?! Omg aaj gym nahi jaa paoge[in his mind "shit I'll miss reema aur rekha!!!!"]

S: it's ok beta. Jaldi tayyar ho jao. I'll wait for you in the breakfast table.

[she kissed his forehead and goto downstairs.

Here Maan get ready and checked himself numerous times, even though he knew that he is just perfect! He too went to breakfast table & found that Mr.Khurana is missing.]

M: maa, aaj papa kahan hei?

S: he left for office early. He has an urgent meeting with his clients. If you joined our company, you papa shouldn't work like this, in this age.

M: Maaa, please don't bring this topic again. I want to be independent!

S: yeh. And I don't know why your father seems to be really happy in your decision that you want to be independent! But I'm not. Anyways if you both are happy I don't want to say anything.

[ Do you think Maan want to be independent? Of course not! Even though he says like this to the world the actual reason is something else. i.e., if he joins his father's office his eyes will only on the hot girls there. And if that caught by his father he is gone for sure. Even though he is a flirt, he acts like a gentleman in front of his parents.]

Maan went to office in his BMW. While driving he got a call''.

Precap: Entry of Armaan, Nupur and Mayank.

Here is the first part. Is it fine? it's a small one. I'm really nervous. Plz do comment. Waiting for your Suggestions and corrections.

Edited by sruthigeet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Thanx a lot dear.. Lots of Hugs and Kisses..!🤗
Loved the start...
Loved to c maan in a new avatar...
so maan's family s unaware of his asli roop 😆
Reema aur rekha!!! hey babaji..!yeh maan bhi na..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
part 1
nice part...
cont soon dear...

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