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Hey guyzz hie...Wel i knw i hav 2 update my ss n my ff bt u kna na mere xamz he so update in june n sry fr dat..Well study karte karte bahot bore ho gayi thi n was feeling restles... U knw na mood swings in teenage..So thot of writing sumthng n came up wid dis...Well dis vl hav more parts 2 it..Till den njoy d 1st part..N ha sry cnt pm ny1 coz m updating thru cell vl try 2 send pm's if possible..Sry fr ny typo errors n itz nt vry attractive so sry fr dat 2..Dis 1's fr u meow, poppy n sweetu...

PART 1

The phone rings...
A boy picks it up..
On d oder end is a girl..
BOY:- hey baby... Watz up..
GIRL:- dnt u feel itz been ages v met!!!... It seems u hav gt so busy wid ur stuff dat u totally hav forgotten u hav a gf u knw..
BOY:- no jaan aisa nahi he.. U knw na shoot kitna hectic hota he.. Pura din me vahi rehata hu d3 k set pe aur fhir after d shoot m totally exhausted... I get bak home n slp..
GIRL:- leave it amar... U hav changed.. Dis is nt dat amar wich was my best frnd 6 yrs bak.. I knw ur busy bt cnt u juzz remove sum 1 hour fr me...!!.. Ur useless amar..
Ya ryt itz kunwar amarjeet singh aka rey..
KAS:- Are CHARLIE...suno to...Bt she has already hung up...Ohh god..!! Ye mere saath hi kyu hota he... Help..
'oyee kya hua.. Kyu god ko pareshan kar raha he apne fhaltu k bak bak se..'he looks bak..
KAS:- aree dekh na yaar fhir jhagda... Bolti he tym nahi deta.. Kaise samjhau ise me kitna kaam karta hu fhaltu ka time pass nahi...
Hands d person his phone n says..
Tu hi isase baat kar ab... Mujhase jyaada tera sunti he vo...
D person takes d phone n cls charlie..
Charlie:- amar i dnt wanna talk 2 u.. Do hell wid ur self..

Person:- oye darling chil kar me hu..

Charlie:- oops!!!!.. Sry 'SHAKTI'... Tuje pata he na ye amar kaisa he..

SHAKTI:- hmm acchi tarah se pata he kitna buddhu he vo... Dnt wry vo tujhe kal date pe leke jaa raha he... Ab tu gussa chod de aur smile..

Charlie:- wow.. Date.. Really...
Cnt believe k amar date pe mujhe lolz..

SHakti:- ab mujhe pata he usko khudka dimaag he nahi bt kabhi kavar chal jata he.. Afterall he loves u dear..

Charlie:- aww.. Ur such a swthrt shaks.. N u knw i love u fr dat..

Shakti:- love u 2 dear.. Chal hum badme baat karte he il tel him 2 cl u hmm..

Charlie:- okk.. Thnkz.. Cya tc..

Shakti:- cya..

N dey hung up..

KAS:- ye saku bai mene kab kaha me use date pe leke ja raha hu...

Shakti:- abhi abhi to mene kaha.. Mene kaha kya aur tune kaha kya baat to ek hi he na jaaneman..


KAS:- tu pagal he sacchi me.. Kya hoga mera tere bina..

Shakti:- oo thnkz.. Wel i knw mere bina tera kuch nhi hoga.. Kya karega be tu jab me NEWYORK jaungi..
I hope tumlogoka brk up na ho jaye coz me to nahi hongi tumlogo ki sulah karne ke liye fhir..

KAS:- chod na kyu baar baar yaad dilati reheti he k tu D3 chod k ja rahi he..

Shakti:- aww...!! Kunwar... Il miss u.. N hugs him..

KAS:- il miss u 2 saku bai..
Chal aaj tera shoot ka last day hena.. Jaldi se shoot khatam karke baaki k gang k saath bahar jaate he..

Shakti:hmm - gud idea.. Chal..

K guyz here's d 1st part...
Do hit d like button n let me knw wedr i should cont or nt hmm...
Love nj...

For pm's add nj_swaron to ur buddy list...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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INDEX
PART 1 - PAGE 1
PART 2- PAGE 1
for pm's add nj_swaron to ur buddy list plz..
Edited by namratajadhav - 13 years ago
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Part 2

After the shoot evry1 went fr partying..

Evry1 enjoyed a lot..

Shan:- shaks v gonno mich u loads yaar..!!!!.. N he hugged her..

She hugged him bak..

Shak:- vl mich u 2 tannu.. Ur d bestest brother ny1 cn hav..

Ya shaks tannu ko bro manti thi..

Vicky:- aww..!!... Saali huggy use aur mujhe kya?..

Shak:- awww...!!.. Tu bhi aaja n she took him in a tight hug..

This hugging n sobbing part was carrying on meanwhile amar was juzz sitting n staring at all this..

Amar(thinkin to himself):- hmm miss to me bhi bahot karne valu hu tujhe saku bai.. Pata nahi ab mera kya hoga widout u.. Gosh.. After DID u hav bcum an integral n imp part of my lyf. N itne din v hav been 2gedr dat i nvr gav this a thot k widout u in it hw my lyf vl b. Lolz i hav my gf den 2 i dnt knw mera kya hoga..

While thinking dis even he dint knw hw a lone tear escaped his eyes.. He quickly wiped it off. No1 noticed bt hw vl dis go unnoticed by shakti.. (D perfect arsha bonding ryt)..

She quickly went 2 him and as if she heard each n evry word frm his mind she said..

Shaks:- abe kunwar tu itna tension kyu leta he me kya frever k liye nahi ja rahi 3 months k baad aa rahi hu. N dnt wry apni frndshp hamesha aise hi rahegi.. Aur mujhe pata he tera kuch nahi hoga mere bina.. N she hugged him tightly.. Lyk she was hugging a small baby.. Her baby.. Coz she cared a lot abt him..

Note:- abhi tak ye dono ek dusre k liye kuch feel nahi karte ok.

Deir partying ended n dey all left. As always amar dropped shaks home n he went home.

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Frm d nxt day shoot started bt widout shaks...

She got busy wid her stuff shooting fr pritam pyaare.. Her guest appearance vala dance wid karan tacker n in her lyf..

Amar gt busy wid his shooting..

Nw charlie used 2 visit him on d sets frequently.. Mostly all d tym..

Bt nw amar was a disturbed always coz he had started missing shaks vry badly.

This wasnt going unnoticed by charlie ofcourse. Bt y was he disturbed this she couldnt make out.

Nw d day came wen shaks was to leave to NewYork dats d 19th of may...

All d3 guyz planned 2 visit shaks on 18th nyt to bid her farewell...including charlie n amar too..

All went 2 shaks place wid farewell gifts n cake n lots more stuff 2 party at night..

Shaks was alone at home dat day coz all oders had gone 2 some function n she dint go coz her flight was d nxt day so she wanted little tym fr packing n stuff..although she was packing frm 3 months bt u knw girls are girls nvr satisfied..lolz...

Shaks heard d bell ring at 9.30pm.. She casually went 2 open d door...

N she saw are d3 idiots standing der. All were grinnin widely bt none uttered a word coz u knw na jaise kriya hyper thi vaise apni saku bai bhi hyper hi ho jaati ye scene pe. D nxt instance shaks was still at d door n evry1 rushed inside widout even saying a hie 2 her..lolz...as if shaks wasnt standing der only...

Shaks pouted 'kabhi nahi sudarenge'...

She closed d door n went inside 2 witness a fish market instead of her house..

Plastic bags shattered all around al d stuff removed frm dem n all were doing deir respective stuff of arraning eatables cakes gifts aside drinks..etc..

On seeing dis she thot to herself wid her open mouth in a o shape. Was i dreaming a sec b4 or m i dreaming nw...

She stood der until evry1 finished deir work n demselves sat on d couch in peace..

At last kunwar spoke wid a wide grin..

'Saku bai bet na yaar apna hi ghar samaj sharma mat aur ha plz mu band karle varna makhiya ghuss jayengi'..

On dis shaks came bak 2 d real world n thot.. Ya m nt dreaming matlab... These idiots r here fr sure.. N closed her mouth..

Shantanu:- "SHOOT"

of course he knew wats is going on in her mind..

Shak:- ' ohhh nyc u all atlast realised m here in dis house dat 2 my house..'

wid fake anger on her face..

Kunwar stood n came to her n cupping her face in his hand..

Ofcourse skau v knw dat n v all r here fr u.. To bid u farewell..

Watever fake anger shaks was showing turned into a 32 teeth vala badavala smile n she hugged kunwar tightly..

Ohhh u people r d bestest frnds ny1 cn have..

Charlie:- ofcourse v r coz itz u whose frnds v people r dear... N she went n hugged shaks 2..

Shaks bcame super duper happy n lyk a small kid she ran to d group n hugged evry1..

Shaks pouted lyk a small kid :- ' vo kya tha.. Tumlog darvaje se mujhe notice kiye bina ya merese baat kiye bina andhar ghus gaye aur pura adha ghanta me vaha khadi thi tobhi merese kisne baat nahi ki huh..'

Sneha:- oohh chry baby!! Actually humlog super excited the na tujhe suprise karne k liye to tu hyper honese pehele humlogone preparation karna strt kar diya ab tere pass bahot tym he ab ho sakti he tu hyper..

All strtd laughin on dis..

Shaks wid a baby face went near shan n said.. Dekho na mujhe kaise bol rahe he sab..

Kunwar:- ha ha ab ye tere hi side se bolega na ahesan fharamos..

Shan:- oye behan he meri khabardaar ise kuch kaha to..

Shaks:- showing him d tongue n thumb lyk showing thenga.. Ooo...lll... Hehe dekh dekh...my bestest bro..

N ha khabardaar mere bro ko kuch kaha to...

Kunwar:- aila bahi behen mil gaye aur mujhe bhul gaye dono bhi.. Huh.. Folded his hands n went d stood near d window..

Shaks assured evry1 dat she'l handle him n went near him n all strtd doing masti n fun..

Shaks went near him aur uske gale me hath daal k..

U knw kunwar dat u r n vl b my bestest frnd frever na.. N she placed a peck on his cheeks... Ab ek peck k baad thodi kunwar vl b angry nymre.. He smiled n took her into d hug n samjha n kaise hug hogi leaning on shoulder types jaha both can talk ok.

Kunwar:- saku il miss u yaar... U dnt knw mene kitna miss kiya tujhe itne dino se.. Man hi nahi lagta tha shoot me... Vrinda thik he bt shaks yane kriya kriya he yaar... Me kriya aur shaks dono ko bahot miss karta hu yaar..

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nxt update wen i get well sry.. tc... 😊

Edited by namratajadhav - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cntinue dude totally a diff stry well wait 4 next 1
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome...loved it..u potrayed arsha friendship very well..pm me d next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nj do continue it .
Will give u comments only after reading it fully.

Thanks for the pm.
Continue soon.



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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was fab
u should contd
waiting eagerly or next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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An os with a difference - luvd what I read - will wait for th next part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry nam muje abi kuj nahi bolna ... u know charlie ...😡

so abi k liye con. soon ...
next update k baad kuj bolu gi ...
keep it up ...
best of luck for exam ...
update fast ok ...
keep it up
but i like arsha chit chat that was osam for me
but charlie not again ...
m waiting for next update 💔
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*Res*

**Unres**


Fantastic OS..


Loved it..


Esp. d new way of dis OS..


Amar n Shakti best friends..N charlie his GF.


But Im sure u wil set d story ryt n give a proper ending.


Shaks is so cute yaar...how she managed him.


Charlie as usual Dumbo gal according to me...


I hate her lyk hell..


But, waiting for Amar n Shaks to feel for each other n then Love...


Kuch Kuch Hota Hain...title is too gud.


Love u tons..<3<3


Thanks for dis OS.



Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago

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