~~Unspoken Destiny~~ #1

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey ppl...!!! wasuup...??? im sooo exicted..!!! finally my first ff...!!! yipee...!!! hav ben waiting frm ages fr this...!!! finally gt it... thanx to Dazzling_Smile... Dedicatin this to u...

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The worst or the best night of my life... no idea!!!! evrything around me seemed lost... shattered.. i had no hope in anythng.. i was busy starin at the moon.. *sigh* the moon was there standing alone in the empty sky.. just like i was... empty and alone frm inside and as well as outside... jus den mom rushed in informin me dat she had to go to hr office as sum1 had calld her informin abt a fire... this brought me a small 'rey' of hope... wait... REY!!! how i wish i could just bury myself, my sorrows, pain, grief, everythin in his loving and strong arms thn and there... UGH!!!!!!!! mom quickly left my room closing the door... tht was the moment i was waiting for.. i broke down.. i couldnt control myself anymore.. hw cud i? i was no more the stronger one.. i felt like i was d weakest being in d universe... wasnt i?? i had broken d trust of my mom not once bt twice... i had formed a team of my own... MY TEAM...who depended cumpletely on me... now it was der turn to gt backstabbed... yes thats rite... BACKSTABBED... wasnt i gettin perfect in that...??? UGH..,.!! how badly i was hatin myself... first my mom... den my team... den d rest of my group d DAZZLERS... n last bt never evr d least... my line-cutter, chabilal, REY... OUCH...!!! Did i even hav d rite to call him mine??? i dint no...

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SO... hwz it...???

please shower all ur jhootas, chappals, comments compliments, anything and everything...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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res
unres..

i loved it mish..
i totally loved it
but for God Sake isse typical rone dhone wala mat banana..
i loved the way u describe everything...
muwaaah thx u soo much for dedicating it to me..
and yeah i more thing..
jaldi update nhi kiya to u will face strikes so ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ...loved it very much
great start
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start:):)
Do continue and pls pm me..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wat res???? Unwaaahhh...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rhu90

Plzzz continue...


Ya I will definitely if I get a Gud response n thnx a lot fr liking n commenting...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesum wrk mish...!!! Luvd it alot...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmm cool!! its a nice concept.. pls do continue dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_arsha


awesome ...loved it very much

great start
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon and pm me


Thanx a lot dear... Was waitin frm long to strt dis... Will update soon if I gt a Gud response... N I'll definitely send u d pm...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaba3003

Awesome start:):)
Do continue and pls pm me..


Thanx a lot dear... Will surely pm u...

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