ways to friendship..frm a sis to a lovr

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Guyz..dis iz my very first ss ya os ya ff I don't kno wch it iz jst I love maneet stories written by u all'to tl de truth I hve nvr watchd any of de shows of geet..bt aftr reading maneet stories frm u guyz..i was inspired to write..lol..to tl de truth itz my first first story to be written'to start with lyk all maeet love stories'itz de same bt a did a ltl bit diffrnt,..hop u guyz lyk it..waise guyz im noo hindi person..i don't kno hindi..i jst learnt de sub in skool..so any mistake plz say so..

Character sketch:

Savitri Devi .(dadi ma)..

woman of her word.with family aspects,respect,well a dadi ma hu wuld dream to have.,,.she z a person who moves wid generation.but as well tradition wen it comes to society and her household..but tries to understand dis new generation'but to her dimay understanding dem means ..way to her budaapa (<wink>to her shez jst in her teens)and yea she loves annoyin her child and her grandchildren..

Abhinav Singh Khurana(dad)

MD of khurana Constructions (KC)loves his family very much.well u culd say he was jolly'nd yea fun loving'and yea big tym workaholic..

Anjali Singh Khurana(mom)

MD of khurana Constructions (KC)loves his family very much.well u culd say he was jolly'nd yea fun loving'and yea big tym workaholic..

Anjali Singh Khurana(mom):

Mother of de 3., caring.,housewife.,

Maan Singh khurana(Msk)

Strict,bossy,stern.well u culd say he was a jack wid no play but only work,he loves studyn nvr lyk to play,hot temperd-gussa tho uska naak per hamesha rahtha hai.itz lyk angr is campn inside him.but loves his fa,ily very mch..for some reasons hate geet(u will soon know).to him his parentz r his god.

Dev Singh Khurana(dev)

Fun,jolly-easy going person,but respects his eldr bro ,smart

Anwesha Singh Khurana(annie)

To her hr brothrs r hr worl.she nvr consults hr mom nd dad itz alyz hr bors.any complaint frm our annie baby.,her first choice wuld be maan.

But was common among the 3 childrn were dat dey lovd der parents nd der papa nd mama,dadi ma to death.to dem dey were their world



Now to the Handas

Mohinder Handa(papa)

MD of Handa Industries,.jolly,fun lovin fathr

Rano handa(mama)

Housewife,loves maan more dan hr own children,carin mom,nd yea wenevr a fyt occurs b/w geet nd maan.rano alys sides maan ,nd dis irritate geet.,but noo worries mom iz alyz on her side if mama iz nt der.

Brijendr Handa-(veerji)

Eldst son of Rano nd Mohindr .loves annoyin his sis geet,bt loves his sis vey mch too,

Geet Handa

She iz cheeky,stubborn,tomboy,innocent,but true in heart.her family thinks especially maan,nd veerji dat she was less human nd more a monkey,bcz naughtiness iz her first nature.her bothr alwyz makes fun of hr sayin she was found in a forest rathr dan a hospital frm a family of monkeys.she loves annoyin maan .loves hr mom more dan mama,she cant think a day widout dese ppl..same goes wide m..if she iz nt der der house seems lyk some ashram..wid silent treatment <laughs>

Geet's friends

Meera,uttra,pinky,dev nd annie

Maan's friends

Adi.hameer.yash nd pari

Ps- guys geet's friends nd maan's frnds kno each udr nd they r common frmds

Oh yea geet"s mama nd papa nd maan"s mom nd dad r childhood frends actually they married der childhood sweethrts.so in a sense der childr r also bst buddies.each kno de udr frm birth.geets mama bore geet at de same tym maans mom bore annie nd dev..

part-2(prt 1 was intro)

currently at de hosptl

Maan(4 yrs)-maan's pov-kya ho raha hai-mama ko andhar kyu le chale.wo kithne thakleef mainthe.poor mama she was cryin..no u culd say shoutin wid pain..oh veerji a raha hai..

Veerji-(6yrs)-maan kya soch raha hai.?mama ke bare main na.?kuch nahi honga use.,wo teek hai.,waise thumko patha hai .hame ek chotti bahen aa rahi hai.wow'kithna awesum hai na..ek chotti behen..

Maan-kya chotti behen..mujhe nahi chahiye chotti.moti behen..mujhe ek bhai chahiye..behen nahi..waise mein mama ko kehke aatha hu ki mujhe ek bhai chahiye behen nahi..

Veerji-rukh ..mere bhai'mama ab room mein hai waise mujhe patha hai ladki hi aane wali hai

Maan-nahi ladka

Verji-ladki

Maan-ladka

Just den dad nd papa came

Dad-wats wid de noise boys.?rmbr dis iz a hosptl.u cant make noise ovr here,nywyz wats de topic this tym 4 wch u guys r fytn.

Maan-dekhena dad veerji keh raha hai ladki aayegha..mujhe behen nahi chahiye..i need a bro

Papa-but maan ladka ya ladki kya farak padtha hai..waise thumhe veerji hai na..ab thumhe behen chahiye..

Maan_no ..noo no bhai chahiye..

Mom-kya maan ..zidd chodo..,okay lets make a peace..if mama gives birth to a gal ..i'm here naa'I'm sure meri twins se ek ladka zaroor hoga..even bettr..agar thum lucky ho tho dono ladke hi hoga..ab khush..

Maan(thinking)-hmm'waise ey bhura plan nahi hai..wow'do bhai'no..no'mamma ko ladka hi hoga'I know it..

Maan-no mom ladka hi chahiye'I hate galz..they r soo yuk'always cryn,complaining..,I hate girls in my class always teachr ..teachr .he did dat..he is doin dat'complainboxes'wat if this grl baby is also lyk dat..

Just den a nurse came out of the room

Nurse-congrtas..bhaisaab..

Papa-wow..thanks nurse'is my wife nd child okay

Nurse-yea ,,don't worry both r okay 'you can go see hr..

Papa-thanks nurse

All entr .papa goes beside rano..

Papa-rano hamari bacha kaha hai..

Rano-wo nurse lekhar gayi hai .for cleanin..will be bak in 5..i guess

Just den nurse comes in with the baby

Precap..maan meetin the baby..

Maan-mama mujhe lagtha hai nurse ne galath baby uttakar le aye..?

Guyz plz comment on it soo dat..i can update de nxt part..dat iz if u lykd it only..and yea if any mistake,,ya anything plz open up nd say..it helps mee

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Posted: 13 years ago
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guyz plz comment karo naa....pleeej...bahuth bechen ho raha hai...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tanq..ur de first one to comment...😃..happy
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY AWSOME FF.PLZ ADD ME ON UR PM LIST DEAR
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaarabia

tanq..ur de first one to comment...😃..happy

you know what you can do to get more readers...you put a more promising title 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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btw
what's ur good name?
and why you're dp is so scary:?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start
loved the character sketch n parts
precap seems funny
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome yaar wow lya start hai
loved it continue soon yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: music_girl

btw

what's ur good name?
and why you're dp is so scary:?

hey ...lol..my dp😃...lovd de way u said it scary.😛.noo worries i'm noo goth😉..😛.well itz sumthin i had for a while lovd de galz eyes..😳so i jst kept it as my dp..nd oh yea..my name iz Suhaa..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome yaar wow lya start hai

loved it continue soon yaar

thanks yaar.😃..yea..i will update de nxt part soon..

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