HUM TUMPE MARTEIN HAIN - A ManVeer FF (I.I.L)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Khamma ghani to all my lovely people

So,kaise ho aaj tum sabh'haan haan pata hai,akash wapas aaya hai,who bhi hero-giri avtar mein,aur kitne acche ho sakte hai aaj hum sabh. Atleast iss baat ka shukar manao ke kal ke precap kemutabik panauti aaj hi aakar nahi tapta ( u know who I'm talking about,naam leke mood phirse apna kharaab nahi karna chahti)

So,I'm back with one of my another "What if? 's"

IN THIS INSTALLMENT,THE QUESTION IS WHAT IF m HAD NOT HEARD THE PART WHERE J SAID TO UDAY: "APNE PYAR KE LIYE TUMNE EK KHUN KIYA,TOH APNE PYAR KO PAANE KE LIYE HUMNE EK KHUN KARR DIYA" SOMETHING LIKE that.

Iss os ko parne se pehle plzz sabh recent kuch episodes ko apne dimaagse nikaal do, u'll feel better reading it then,trust me.

Toh phir chale wapas, hamaari yuvraani-sa ke rajya-abhisheikh wale dinn???


(Manyata's POV)

"GODD!! I cant breathe!!!" I thought "Aur kaun hai jo mujhe aise hila raha hai??...plzz,mujhe hilaana bandh karo!!" I prayed silently,half-way through consciousness.

"Yuvraani-sa ki jai ho'" I think I heard someone say. Jai?? Was it her voice?? I amn't sure. I remembered biting into the apple J had given her,then nothing'

If the voice was J's,then she was there with me.Then she could see my condition. SO why wasn't J doing anything.Why wasn't she getting help?? What was going on??

Wait a minute..J had given me the apple,right?? What was in the apple?? What HAD J done to me?

Suddenly I felt someone rubbing her hand then,she heard another voice:

"Uttho Manyata uttho" Udayveer,was it Udayveer??

"Get up you!!"

Yes,it was definitely Uday's voice,but is was he shaking my face?? Already my chest's hurting soo much. It is already breaking my bones to breathe only.


I feel him shift,then felt myself getting lifted.Maybe Uday is making me sit up,holding her in that position,I tohught.This somehow lessened the pressure I was feeling,and now I could atleast breathe more easily,and hear things clearly.

"Utth Princess uttho!!!" I heard him vaguely,but couldn't reply. And why was he sounding like that?,I wondered. Something in his tone bothered me.Ver much.

Uday sounded somewhat, vulnerable.

Exactly,that was the word!! Which made it more confusing!! The word "vulnerable" wasn't made for Yuvraj Udayveer Singh!! What could have happened that he sounded so frail?? So horrified??

"Tum Hume iss tarah chor karr nahi ja sakti.Suna tumne??"

What???!!! This as about me???This was actually about ME??Uday sounded so much worried,so much desperate because of my condition??? Was I even awake?.

And why did it bother me SO much?Why did vulnerability,this weakness in Uday's voice trouble me.Why did I feel compelled to remove it?? Why?

"Iss tarah tum humme horke nahi jaa sakti!!!!!manyata tum aise j se harr nahi maan sakti ho"

He's right,I thought. "Haan Uday." I tried to say,but I couldn't move a muscle. "Main J se haar nahi manungi!!" I thought.

"Uday ke awaaz mei itna dard kyun hai??" I wondered. "Aur iss baatse mujhe ITNA farq kyun parr rahan hai???" I had no answer to my questions.

"Manyata tumhe wapas aana hi hoga!! Humaare liye aana hoga"

"Haan Uday,' I think,hoping somehow he would hear my thoughts. "mai wapas aungi,tumhare liye aungi." "Wait a minute!!Uday ke liye mai wapas aana chahti hoon?" I questioned herself. "Mai Uday ke liye jeena chahti hoon? Uday ke liye?"

"Apni aankhon kholo Manyata!! MANYATA APNI AANKHEN KHOLO!!!"

"Tum iss tarah apne Halkat-Vedhe ko chor karr nahi jaa sakti!!!Suna tumne??!!! Kyunki'.Kyunki I love you damn it!! I LOVE YOU"

I went still,my mind went blank. What did Uday say???What did he just SAY??


Uday loves me?? He actually loves me???

This was shocking,but more shocking was the fact that I wasn't angry at this,or upset.Infact,I was, surprisingly,happy'.i was actually feeling Happy??

I feel Uday's arms wrap around me. He was hugging me.

I feel something different.I feel like blushing!!?? And I feel more happy?? What has happened to me??

"I love you princess" I thought his voice broke,was he crying?? And why do I,of all feel like crying out of joy??

Uday gave her another me,and I felt the pressure on her chest release.I chocked.

"Princess?" I feel him release her as I try to open my heavy lids.

"Princess??" My head's throbbing.My vision's clouded. He was rubbing my back now,and I felt better. The pain was no longer there. And I was glad that he was holding me. Uday made me drink water,taking care just like a mother would do to her unwell child.

"Princess?"

I looked up at his face,and was sure that I never ever wanted to see that look on his face.Wierdly,this terrified expression scared me more than his shaking voice.

He hugged me again,tightly.Again I felt that sudden rush of happiness.What was wrong with me?? Had I gone crazy after the apple?

"Thank God tum wapas aa gayi princess" He said.

"Hum jaante hai ke iss waqt tum kamzor mehsus karr rahi ho" he said softly, "parr humme rajya-abhisheikh ke liye chalna hi hoga! Kyunki mohurt nikla jaa raha hai Princess.We have to go."

I tried to nod,don't know how much I managed.He was right,I did feel beaten. But he was right about the Coronation.I have to go. I'll not let anyone take what is rightfully mine. Today, I will be crowned,Haan nahi toh!!!


So guys,kya khayal hai???Agar aisa huya hota toh kaisa hota??😊
and plzzz relax, Manveer will happen.Haan thora waqt zaroor lagega,but im sure,the creatives cannot be THAT dumb,can they???

And also,koi villains pe itna dhyan thori hi deta hai.I mean,come on!!! Uday ke character pe unn logon ne itna invest kiya hai (time,brains,designer outfits,etc. etc.) i dont think ke yeh log woh sabh waste karenge. So chill,agar zyada gussa aye toh disprin khaake so jao😉😉.
A good sleep always reduces stress,I TELL YOU😆😆😆.

And plzz comment,so that i can improve my writings😳😳😊.
Tata :):)😳😳😳

take good care😳 luv u all 😉😊😊.

Oyshee


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its just awesome.continue soon n pm me if u can.
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Its just awesome.continue soon n pm me if u can.[/QUOTE

thanks for liking it😊, it means a lot really😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oyshee sweet heart, this was sooo darn good :D
I sooo wished that something like this could have happened then ...
Amazing Concept ... Absolutely loved it and I'm being honest !
Girl you're gifted with a writing talent, do PM me whenever you write :D xxx
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Originally posted by: Add123

Oyshee sweet heart, this was sooo darn good :D

I sooo wished that something like this could have happened then ...
Amazing Concept ... Absolutely loved it and I'm being honest !
Girl you're gifted with a writing talent, do PM me whenever you write :D xxx



thanks for liking it😉😛😊😊. hope all of you will like chap2😊😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i wish this happend in real deama and you know why i enjoyed it the most i could feel everything or see it and i saw the whole sequence as it is happening in dekha ek khwab. very good.
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Awwwiiieee... Its just aweeesome...😊
continue soon...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay guys, a big


to all of you for liking my OS 😳😳😳, and commenting😳. trust me,it means a lot😊😊.

So, this is the pm list for all of you who wants to get informed whenever i update this OS:

princessjia03,
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Add123,
Zaynmohin,
AKlover101,
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princessnia,
bubly420,
sonam4980,
-JEHAN-,
Tuli.Luvs.Uday,
Gowri05,
akshi_t,
BlueRobbin,
princess_T,
Amibaiju,
lilybabes,

UdaynArnavRmine.

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if i've missed anyone by mistake,plzzz inform me by any ways you want😉. i'll add your name(s) to the list 😊😊⭐️
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Edited by ARMaaneetAbhiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good Morning to all😊. Aaj kaise ho sabh??? Enjoying the weekend???😆
Just joking,i know you're not. I'm not either😉. Waiting desperately for Monday to come,so i can get my daily dose of manveer 😳,though not at all interested for the Akash/Aryan(whatever)scenes.

Okay,so here's part 2 of
IS IT LOVE??


😳😳😳


( Manyata's POV )
Udayveer helped me get off the bed and we made our way out of the room towards the ceremony. He held my hand as we walked side by side. Slowly as we descended the stairs ( i just couldn't walk fast enough,due to the kindness of the apple i had just almost swallowed😕). But I couldn't complain. Surprisingly, I was enjoying this 'hand-in-hand" walk with Uday, I don't know why.

Well,I'll think about that later,I thought. My mind was already too much occupied. But it wasn't occupied by me trying to get down the stairs in one piece.No. I wasn't worried about that. I knew Uday wouldn't let me fall, or get hurt😳. I wasn't even thinking about rushing to the coronation. Actually, my concentration was locked onto Uday's face.

I don't know why,but I just couldn't get my eyes off him!!! I thanked God silently for not making Uday look at me at the moment,coz then I'd had to look away from him,which i didn't want to really (and it really isn't in my character to get caught staring at my best friend).

But is he just your? a voice inside my head asked me as we were nearing the main entrance to the Mahal. Of-course he is,how silly a question,I told myself. He has always stood by my side at all times,supporting me even at my stupidest behaviors.Even when I had turned idiotically against Daadi-Sahb, whom he respected above all. He is my BEST friend,I told myself.

But is he just a "Friend" of yours?? That unknown voice asked me again,confusing me. What do you mean? i asked myself.

Oblivious to my internal debate,Uday walked by me,holding me,supporting me as i trotted forward,my legs wobbly. Although he still had a very faint line of worry in his face (which secretly made me glad,becoz it was for me,I knew that😳😳), he held his head high in pride,in dignity.How DID he manage that??? I'd have to learn that from him.To stay calm in any situation. After-all, I was going to be made "Yuvrani", I should know how to control my emotions infront of my people, I thought. Only then I'll be able to sort their problems and help them out.😊😊

I heard someone announce my arrival, and I knew I had finally reached. My destination. The place where my dreams would come true⭐️⭐️⭐️. I looked at Uday and he smiled at me,and together we looked forward.

I could see Daadi-Sahb beaming at me.Ma was smiling too,she looked really happy. Maharaj-ji looked a bit surprised.maybe becoz Uday was bringing me like this,holding my hand.After-all, i was supposed to make this journey all alone. Vijay bhai and Unnati were also looking very happy as they smiled seeing me come.

Strangely,the thought that I was approaching Daadi-Sahb and Maharaj-ji holding Uday's had made me blush.This was weird!!! I had never felt like this before,even when baba had seen me with Akash.

And if he wasn't holding me hand,I would have surely halted. I was shocked...astounded!!! Never in my life had I seen SUCH A CROWD. More overwhelming was the fact that they had gathered here for me.😳😳 My people,as Uday had said that day. Yes...he was right!! This was mine. This love,this adoration, this respect was all for me. And thinking that I was running away from it!! How silly had I been, finally i stared to realise as Daadi-Sahb reached out for me and hugged me as we got up.

"Aajse yeh raaj-gaggi,Devgargh ka yeh taqt,aapki amaanat hai Manyata😳😊." Daadi-Shab told me.

"Beti Manyata😊' Guru-ji gestured 'hamaare saath ayeeye😊" Daadi-Sahb made me sit at the throne. The throne that i was destined to take.The throne that I had tried to escape from. The throne that I had also fought for. The throne that was mine from the day I was born.

Guru-ji came forward and started the rituals. Everyone was either beaming,or smiling 😳; they looked genuinely happy for me,save one. But right now, I did not want to go there. There was a greater,much larger turmoil ragging inside me.

My sole reason for wanting to become the heiress was to get power. A power strong enough to help me find him. But now,suddenly, at the exact moment when I was sooo near my goal, i felt my motivation get lost. Yes,I still wanted to become the Yuvrani very much,but in my desire to get my right,I could no longer find the arch to find him. He was no where in my thought, in my mind. He should have been,right?? Afterall I was doing all this just for him,wasn't I??

But was I?? that same voice asked me again. What was I doing??? It asked me. Fighting with my own family for whom?? The person who had abandoned me at the first sight of difficulty?? Had Daad-Sahb not asked for just 3 months from him?? Was it that much?? He claimed to have loved me. A love that lost its patience at the first obstacle. WHAT WAS I DOING??

But what about you?? My heart asked me.You also thought you loved him right?? But then why had you not thought about him at all for the past couple of days?? why was your mind always thinking about Uday instead of worrying for Akash?? Did I love him at all??

As guru-ji took the crown in his hand,I looked at Uday. He was beaming,his face was was alight😳,his eyes glowed like a shinning beacon⭐️⭐️⭐️.

He was happy. Happy becoz of me. Happy for me.
Why did my heart always warm up whenever I thought about him?? And why did I think about him SO much in the first place? Why did I always thin what he would think,or say whenever i did anything?? Why did I always need his support,when I knew i could do anything all alone and needed no one. why did I always want him by my side?? Why did I always want to be with him?? Why was I possessive of him?? Why did I get jealous when he even looked at another girl??Why did I hate it whenever J flirted with him?? Why did I blush when Vijay Bhai teased my with him??

Uday loved me.Why did this fact not bother me?? Why was I not upset at him,or angry?? Why didn't it affect my friendship?? And WHY was I HAPPY about it?? I was being crowned.It was the most important day of my life.But why wasn't my mind over this.Why were all my senses locked on Uday??

Why did my heat gallop when he smiled at me?
Why did his vulnerable voice scare me?? Why did his looking so happy at my achievement make my day?? Why was I feeling like jumping into his arms right now?? Why did I want to become Yuvrani so that finally I could match him.Atleast be capable of him of standing next to him. Now he wouldn't have to feel embarrassed because of me😳😳.
Wait a sec.!! What was happening to me??

So may questions erupted together in my mind but I had no answers.

I could not hear guns being fired,or the noise of the trumpets that sounded as Guru-ji placed the crown atop my head.I did not hear my people applaud as I was finally crowned.I did not notice my family's happy faces.

I looked at Uday and he smiled at me😳.Our eyes locked and suddenly,at that instant, all my unspoken questions were answered.
This realisation did not weigh me down.
There was no guilt,no regret. Because I realised I had known it all along. I was just too stubborn to accept it. I felt light now,as if the greatest burden had been removed from top of my head.

I could no longer deny it.It was running through me.Swelling,surging inside me,over-powering my thinking,taking over all my senses.

As his eyes (slightly confused and curious) silently asked me what was up, i hoped he could hear my thoughts which only echoed my feelings

Yes...I do.I love you too Uday 😳😳. I love you.
❤️
❤️❤️❤️❤️

So,what do you think guys??? how was it???
plzzz rate and comment😉😉😉, i love reading each and every one of them😳😳.

and hey,a friend of mind has like literally "begged" me to change this OS into an FF,and I want to know what U all think?? should I change it into an FF?? plzz reply..😳😳😳

Till we meet next time,bye-bye,tata and stay well😳😳😳.
May Allah bless us all and give us the strength to bear Aryan 😉. Hey, I did not bash any character or actor,so u cant go complaining to anyone. I Have Clearly NOT insulted annnyyyooonnneee 😉😉.

Oyshee 😳😳😳

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Edited by ARMaaneetAbhiya - 13 years ago
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Amazing!! Love it!!! Pls continue and pm me when u update next.

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