FF-Ishq Hai Yeh-Maaneet#2-pt 73-pg-106-may 15 - Page 52

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi gals...sorry for being late...

sorry sorry sorry...

Part 74

Maan worriedly pushed open the door and finally he entered in and was shocked to see the state of the room. His eyes hurriedly searched for geet.

There she is sitting on the bed hugging her knees and her head rested on her knees. Probably she is crying. she wore her blue night shirt type dress.

The whole room was a mess. All the things were thrown on the floor and mirror was broken and the flower was then cloths everything shattered on the floor.

Maan immediately ran to geet and touched her on her hands which were wrapped around her kness. Geet jerked instantly and maan assured her "geet…don't be afraid it me….maan"

"maan go away" geet cried.

He was shocked but still he went near her "geet listen love"

"maan I said go away" geet shouted.

Maan tried to control geet but she kept on shouting and throwing things at him. Maan lost his patience and shouted "chup….bilkul chup"

Geet scared at his tone and stopped there. he quietly picked her up and walked to his room while geet just kept quite and cried silently.

He made her lay on his bed and went back to close the door. As he turned back to return he saw her curling into a ball on the bed and crying. He went and sat beside her silently.

"geet…" maan tried to touch her but she pushed his hand away.

"geet…kya hua jaan…tu aisa kyun kar rahi ho…plz batav" maan again tried to touched her but she pushed yet again.

"no maan don't touch me….mein aapki laayak nahi hoon" geet cried.

"yeh tum kaisi baate kar rahi ho geet" now maan is understanding wat she is going through a bit.

"mein aap ki laayak nahi hoon maan….aap bahut ache ho…..aap ko mujhse zyaada achi ladki milegi….i don't deserve u maan" geet cried yet again.

"chup geet…bilkul chup…tu soch bhi kaise sakthe ho ki mein aur dusri ladki….."maan sighed "nahi geet….yeh maan tumhara hoon aur tum meri ho….bas…..geet ki maan aur maan ki geet"

"nahi maan…nahi" geet said.

"pehle yeh batav tumhe aisa kyun laga kit um mere laayak nahi ho" maan asked.

"maan…uss rahul…he he….he kissed me…he…." Geet cried unable to form sentences further and maan silenced her by keeping a finger on her lips. Geet instantly looked at him surprised.

"u r my angel geet….my princess….angel is always pure don't u know that geet" with that maan took geet's lips in her and geet stiffened a bit.

Maan know its hard to break geet's shell as he know he already did it before and for maan now its an easy task. He tried to deepen the kiss but geet is not allowing him to enter her mouth so he harshly bit and lip and she realized a gasp. Maan took this as chanced and deepened the kiss after some time he parted due to lack of breath.

He knows still his geet is not out of the shell…he knows today he should do more than just a kiss.

He is determined today….whether it's wrong…but still he wanna do it to bring his geet back….he want to make her trust him…trust their love…he wanted to submit to her….submit his everything to her….she should know….he is hers and only hers…..

Maan made her lay on the bed holding her sholders and looked into her eyes…geet looked at him and she saw the love in his eyes…but today a new emotion is there….more than love….his eyes are dark…passion and desire are oozing out….she understood whats coming next.

Maan again kissed her this time with full love and carving for her is quite visible in his kiss. She neither kissed him back nor rejected him. She just lay there. maan parted from her lips and started to kiss her neck and bit her there she moaned out "maan".

Maan looked at her and she nodded her head in no.

Maan smiled at her and assured her with his eyes. geet lowered her eyes and maan's hand went near her shirt to unbutton it. Geet caught his hand and nodded a no again.

This time maan left her and turned his back to her.

Geet cried and hugged him from behind. Maan turned back and geet hugged him instantly.

"trust me geet….i love u…..i m always urs geet just urs" maan said and geet hugged him more tightly.

Maan brought her out of hug and geet placed her lips on his. At first he was surprised but later he kissed her back. Maan made her lay on the bed again started to undress her while geet 's hands went to maan's shirt and she undid his buttons keeping equal to maan. Maan kissed his neck and then her collar bone while geet's hand roamed all over maan's upper body.

The night turned into passionate one and both became one.

Precap: next morning


sorry gals...i dunno how to write romance...sorry if i dint reach ur levels...but next time i will try to write romance in another os or something like that...but for now...sorryyy

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Posted: 13 years ago
Im so gld you posted dear was missing your updates! Loved how maan took care of geet making her feel loved!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part dear
wow so maaneet become one
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update..
So maan wanted geet to trust him without insecurity..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow dear
they make love
great dear...ossum part
waiting for the next part dear
pls update soon dea
cant wait more
want to see the next morning dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome ek to itne din ke baad update vo bhi itna chota pls write next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...hope geets insecurities r gone now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem maan taking her out of shell maneet became one its chapter 74 correct it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
loved it
they he took care of her
they become one
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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