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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear.. Geet is so cute.. Teddy pe soti hai..Maan is like na chahate hue bhi usake sath bahta jata hai.. too good.. Maan won't keep himself away from his beautiful & innocent wife.. waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome concept! Loving it absolutely =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Our geet is so innocent i just luv her for it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww that was amazing update
love this innocent geet so much and angery maan😆
i know soon geet gona change him with his innocence behavior😊
con..soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
interasting precap pls pls update soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is so innocent part
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Posted: 13 years ago
sooo cute... loved the update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
u know, somewhere i prefer finished ffs ,cause u can read it all in one go...Dont u agree?(Respect)
Seriously dying to read more...i really loved ur concept.continue soon...with best wishes,
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww that was awesome update...
loved it to the core...
geet is so innocent...
omg... maan dont know what to do and he is so helpless with his innocent princess...
me loving this...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi All,
If you all have not guessed yet "Innocent Love" is a You Never know - Season 2 with new look, new Maan and Geet. Story will be different but it will here and there have the flavor of you never know.
--Anu
Part 4
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In the evening when Maan came back' he saw everyone was busy with Geet and she was in center talking lost in her own world. Maan just ignored the whole scene and left for his room.

But Just after he reached his room everyone heard his loud voice'.

"GEET'.. Come upstairs immediatly" His angry voice came'.

Geet had a plate in her hand which flew somewhere as she heard his loud voice' She immediately ran upstairs though every told her not to run that way'.

She stopped on the door half slipping as she was running and Maan was there who caught her and made her stand straight'.

He showed her their room' "What the hell is all this?? " he shouted at her. Before anyone could come and save her he pulled her in the room and closed the room'

Geet was just looking at his angry face' her throat was almost dry after running and rest after seeing his anger'

He got frustrated with no answer'. "Speak" he said loudly and she almost jump with this..

Geet who have never faced this kind of anger did not know what to say, voice was almost not coming out from her mouth'. Getting frustrated with no answer he himself said

"How dare you fill up my room with these soft toys" and with his one movement some of the teddy's which she had decorated near window fell down'. Ohhh they were her dear ones' she wanted to go and pick them up but did not dare seeing his anger'.

"And where are my Cactus'. Do you have any idea how I have collected those' and you replaced my special Cactuses with these silly toys'"

Geet wanted to speak but her voice was not helping her'. He snapped his finger and said

"10 mints' just 10 mints I give you' all these should be gone from this room and I will send Nikhil ' tell him whre have you placed my cactus he will bring them back"

At last she tried to raise her hand to speak something' "Jee woo" "Not a single word' I will be back in 10 mits'. Since she has come in my life' pagal ker diya hai mujhe"

Geet stayed there for few seconds still replaying in her mind what he had said but soon came to sense'

"Geet bas 10 mints you have'. But which room should I put my toys to kaha hee nahi'." She wanted to go downstairs and ask someone for help but seeing him there dropped that idea' she went to check the nearby rooms'. One room looked like a female room, she speedily started removing all her soft teddys with heavy heart to other room' she had placed her Rosy on bed' it took her so much will power to put her Rosy away from her bed'. All her way to other room she said sorry to Rosy' while placing her in other room she said

"I am married now' you have to understand Rosy' please don't cry at night"

She was done before 10mints

While down at hall Raj, his father was very upset with Maan

"Is this the way you talk with your new bride'"

"New bride, really' uskee harkateen dekhi hain, pagal ker rakha hai mujhe'"

"Maan bachee hai abhi'" Dadima tried to sooth him'.

"Exactly my point' Bachee hai to shadi kyun kerwai'. I just hope I soon finish this week with her and then I am off to London'"

"Maan she is your wife and you are taking her with you'."

"are you serious Dad' no way I am taking her there now' " Maan had not imagined that he have to take her London now' he was not mentally ready for it but no one would listen' at last he said

"who is interested in sending her get her tickets done." So the responsibility was given to Viccky.

15 mints has passed , Geet was in her room waiting for Maan.

"Dusta' Nahi nahi pure Dusta Danav hai' he want to replace my soft toys with his cactus'. Dushta dana'" She ate her last word as he entered.

But Maan was not yet done as he was already pissed of with continuous call from her friends whole day and when he had seen the Teddys all around his room his temper just bursted.

He showed her his cell phone'. "This.. who did you ask before giving number to your friends'."

"Jee aapka cell tha to maine" she said in low voice

"Tou what'. Whole day I have been attending you calls' and all stupid calls' how dare you give my number to everyone '. Puchna bhi jaroori nahi samjha' do you have any idea how busy I was and your calls"

He threw his mobile in bed and as if speaking to himself but yet not in very low voice'

"Dimag kharab ker diya hai mera" Geet feeling his anger was praying to her Babji

"Babaji'. Yeh bohut naraz hai'. Kya karoon. Kiska kiska phone aaya tha yeh bhi nahi bataya"

Then she got some idea and she went to the fridge in the room and got a glass of cold water and went in front of him'.

Least did he wanted any interference from her this moment'his anger unexpectedly rose, he took the glass from and threw whole glass along with water on the ground' the glass broke and Geet got very nervous ' again she was experiencing this all for the first time'. Dadima who was passing by heard the sound and came running'

Geet in fear moved back and suddenly "Aaa" she shouted and evryones eyes went on her foot which was bleeding'.

Maan and Dadima both ran to her' she closed her eyes and automatically held Maan's shoulder'. Tears flowing down'. Dadima looked at Maan with questioning eyes'.

"Dadima, I will talk to you later' aap jaiye main dekhta hoon" but Dadima did not move

"Please dadima" she at last left giving him the look that he will need to answer.

Maan scooped Geet in his arms making Geet forget all her pain and getting lost in him. He made her sit on the bed' and took her feet to ckeck on it.

He was feeling guilty as it all happened due to his anger. Maan did not usually get this angry but not able to digest this marriage and then Geet's acts has blown away the proportion of his mind. She was bringing out the worst in him by her childish and unexpected acts.

He touched the glass piece on her foot lightly but that heightened the pain "Aaa-aa" tears came falling down her cheeks.

"Is it hurting a lot'." He asked in concern.Geet did not say anything' one side she was in pain and the boold coming out from her foot was scaring her but still all this was pushed little behind by her mind or say heart she was more concentrating on his concern' and his hands care fully holding her foot.

"Just be sitted' I will get it out" that scared Geet "No No please nahi'. It will hurt a lot'"

"Don't' cry like a baby'. Close your eyes and trust on me" That was enough for Geet' he said trust me' it all sounded so pleasant' after so much of shouting his concerned words were like music in her ears and just his words were making butterflies in her belly. She closed her eyes and gave her whole self to him' In any other case Geet would not even let anyone touch that part' she was so scared of blood and pain but here things were different' Maan was there asking for her trust'. How can she not give'.

He kept on talking while her eyes were closed'.

He kept repeating "It won't hurt at all'." Geet with closed eyes was just concentrating on his concerned words and movements of his fingers on her blooded foot. She was all lost in him when he said

"Open your eyes'.it's out" It was then when Geet saw how big the glass piece was, then she realized how much it must have hurt her when he took it out she shouted'. "aaa-aaa"

He immediately placed his palm tight on her lips' "Chup Bilkul chup'. It's already out'"

"Out' but how much it must have hurt'" she started imagining her pain and crying'

"You are hopeless' just be sitted here aur chalne ke koshis bhi mat kerna" he said and went to bring the first aid box and she stayed on bed like an obedient student' she was again all lost in his concern'.

He first tried to stop the blood, then applied the anticeptic and then bandaged it'. All this while Geet was just lost in her hubby'. Busy admiring him'his face how they were moving' how his expressions were changing and how his hands were working. She was so lost not realizing when he got up and brought the medicine in front of her with glass of water'

"Now take it'. I am not your servent and you are not any princess to me' samjhi tum" this got her back' she immediately took medicine from him and gulped' her heart smiling like crazy..

That night Geet got dinner on bed and whole family one by one came to ask her what had happened' seeing maan's anger in the evening everyone was sure he was the reason behind but how could Geet complain about her Maan'.

First he was her Maan and She was his'. What happens between them she will never let anyone know' however childish she is, Maan was too personal for her. secondly, he had taken care of her' she was still in that world so how can she even imagine to utter a word against him.

"We both held the glass at same time, then left it at same time' bas"

With the effect of pain killer Geet had drifted to sleep before Maan came in.

He saw her sleeping peacefully '. "so peacefully she is sleeping after bringing storm to my life' just two days I have been with her and not a single breadth of releife I have'" he was about to sit down on bed when he remembered the morning how she was upon him'

He brought her Rosy and made it comfortable near her'. it was just to save him.

It was around 3am that Maan hears a sob and he wakes up and switches his lights on to see Geet crying'

"What happened' abb kya hua tumhe'. "

He got irritated with no answer' "Have you decided to make my life a hell' now tell me damit what is the issue" he said little loudly' he was again loosing his patience with her

"Bohut dard ho raha hai'" She saidMaan immediately took her feet and he felt her skin was burning'

"You have a high fever" he said touching her fore head' "Just be calm and don't cry'. I think we should consult doctor now' main bulata hoon abhi'"

He then made some calls and his friend who was a Doctor came to check her'. Again Geet got lost in him' his concern'

When doctor and Maan are concerned about her fever she is prying to babaji

"Babaji' dil ke kitne acche hain na' mera khyal bhi rakhte hain' bass inka gussa' Babaji bas woo theek kerdo' aur haan babaji' mujhse pyar bhi kerwa do'" she stopped

"Aur haan'. Mere Teddys se bhi.. aur gift dena bhi yaad rahe" and her list was going on with the changes she wished on him when doctor left and she was still lost.

"So did you hear what doctor said'. Take your medicines regularly and complete bed rest for two days'. I don't want anymore hassle now' and yes, I am doing all this because it was my mistake' samjhi tum "

"Ji" was only she could utter'. And he was about to sleep when she said

"You did not give me my gift" ' Maan was like he will kill her' after so much hassle she remembers her gift'

"Before my anger shoots up go to sleep' we will talk in the morning"

Next to be continued

Precap 1: Geet takes promise from Maan

Precap 2:"Everyone goes to Switzerland for Honeymoon, why are we going to London " she thinks

Part 5

Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago

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