gohem/raji ff- kya mast hai life

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am an active member on PR forum, but i occasionaly catch up sathiya and i admire GoHem jodi. at present i am writing an ArVi ff called ego v/s ego, but this idea came in my mind and i thought of writing an ff on sathiya couple. please do tell me if i should continue or not.

PART 1

Rocking phase-life ka

14th may 2012

Life is always thrilling and full of excitements. It has its shares of ups and down, who kehte hai na kabhi khushi kabhi ghum. Ji ha bilkul waise hi. In life there comes a phase which is eagerly awaited by us. In my life that phase has started just now''''''..but before that Maine apne dosto se pucha which is the best time in your life and the replies goes

Tinu- whenever I came first in the class. (Seriously, uff kya karu is tinu ka always the geek boy🤓)

Dimpy- when mamma makes cheese pizza for me once in a month (yeh ladki aur iska obsession khane se, pure 99 kg Ki hogayi hai)

I think mere friends aur relatives ke life mein, small happiness is counted as the best moment. The same goes for me, but when it comes to rocking phase it has to be today. Yes today the 14th of May- my 18th birthday. And to top it all I got an admission at Imperial College for Arts urf ICA- the best college in Ahmedabad. After 2 days I will be leaving Baroda, my parents and friends, I will be embarking a journey to fulfil my goals and live the moment. For 18 years I was dependent on my ma-papa, but after two days I will be embracing my new life which will be full of new friends, new atmosphere, new experience along with dher sara ashirwad and pyar from ma-papa. College life is the best life, and so the best phase in my life. Ahmedabad mein aa rahi hooo.

XXX😊

__________________________________________The clock struck 12, as soon as she placed her pen down and closed her diary. She smiled as she heard the knob of her door open. The first to always wish her were her parents and today was no different. An elderly couple entered the room and smiled at their young daughter who was sitting on her bed with eyes close and hands extended as if asking for gifts.

"Happy birthday gudiya", said the man in his mid-forties. He placed the gift in his daughter's hand and kissed her forehead and engulfed her in his protective arms. His wife, who was on the verge of crying on seeing the father-daughter moment, went and hugged both of them.

"mumma papa, you both are crushing me, and please no crying please", the girl said making a childish face which made her parents chuckle a bit.

"thik hai GOPI, today no crying", saying so her parents left the room and advised her to sleep as it was past 12.

Gopi Naresh Soni, was the only daughter of Naresh and Uttara Soni and a resident of sarangpur a small town in Baroda, she was the apple of their eyes. All her wishes were fulfilled even before she could ask for it. She was a very pretty girl, her big brown dove eyes as deep as a see, her lips like rose petals, her cheeks red like strawberry, and her white milky skin soft like a feather. She was beauty with brain and sanskar, always first in school and always active to take part in puja and religious function. She was the jaan of the whole town, bringing smile in the lives of people and was fondly called as pari by everyone.

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The story is about Gopi soni a young and carefree girl who is all set to leave her small town and friends and start her excursion to the big city of Ahmedabad. It's the story of a girl who wants to live her life to the fullest, and explore the world that is beyond her parent's protective shell. She wants to break free the shell and accept changes without losing herself in the chamak-dhamak of the big city and without losing her parents sanskar.

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do tell me if i should continue it or no. this was just a glimpse of my story, will introduce the characters in my next part. if you want me to continue with the story do comment and hit the like button. i at least want 5 comments if you want me to continue
i dont have any friends on sathiya forum so if anyone is interested in the story and wants PM pls send me a buddy request.
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INDEX
part 1- page 1
part 2/character sketch - page3
part3 - page 5
part 4 - page 7
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i m in the library and i got ur pm
finally after my last night lecture you wrote it😆
good part😊
do continue and write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please continue, it will be a pleasant change from current track...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kafa

Please continue, it will be a pleasant change from current track...

thank u dear
but i think due to no friends on this forum no one will read my ff
but good that u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really interesting.loved it.plz do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing start cant wait tooo read the next part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...kash...

i m in the library and i got ur pm

finally after my last night lecture you wrote it😆
good part😊
do continue and write more

thank u sis
ur lecture did affect me😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kafa

Please continue, it will be a pleasant change from current track...

thnks dear
glad u loved it😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rsk16

really interesting.loved it.plz do continue

thnks dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: X.Sisi94

Amazing start cant wait tooo read the next part!

thnks dear will update soon

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