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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Fairy--

Ohhh Maan Crying ...jaggy to too sob sob ...

Nice Update ..
Ab yeah dono fight kyo kar rhe hai ...Waiting for next update



thanx dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

awsem update poor maanmaan and his dad emotional conversation but in precap ye jhagda kyun do next soon






thanx dear😊
omg!!!dont cry that much dear😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
updating...
who want update raise ur hands😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
yes m here... chlo update do
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: divya22

yes m here... chlo update do



give me 5 minutes dear
btw did u raise ur hand😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1



give me 5 minutes dear
btw did u raise ur hand😆😆



yes i raised ma hand... u dont believe me then cum to my home n see...my hands r still up
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: divya22



yes i raised ma hand... u dont believe me then cum to my home n see...my hands r still up



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Posted: 13 years ago
Guys iam so so sorry power chali gayi aur mera pura update gaya..iam postng ths frm mobile
wil be back in few min sorry again
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Posted: 13 years ago


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DOSTI YA PYAAR

PART-9

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Geet looked at maan with tensed expressions..dad smiled and assured her that he'll take care of maan..geet nodded and left the place half heartedly…

Next day morning:

Maan opened his eyes and found himself in his dad's lap who slept there leaning towards the wall..yes, dad sat there whole night with maan on his lap..maan got up and looked here and there…he then looked at his papa who is still sleeping…"omg papa poori raat aise hi sogaye.."[omg!!papa was sleeping like this for whole night]

Maan felt bad for his dad as he was the reason for that…also he knows very well that his dad feels more pain than him whenever he see maan in pain..he picked his mom's photo which is beside him and caressed it…"mama…iam sorry..i know u hate my tears but kya karu…hmm.. I would have not cried like that..papa ko kitna bura laga hoga…iam a stupid…kuch bhi karne se pehle ek baar bhi nahi sochta hoon…I think rishi was right..i cant understand anyone's emotions…becoz I don't have anyone in….he left the sentence incomplete as tears already made their way to his cheeks showing his pain..he closed his eyes in pain also to control his tears…he instantly got up and rushed out when as he remebered rishi's words again…

After few minutes…

Geet and karan entered KM as they know that maan needs them…they first went to maan's room but didn't find maan there…they even searched in dad's room and surprised as there is neither dad nor maan in the room..they quickly made their way to toy room .geet opened the door just to find dad sleeping there in sitting position and maan's mom photo is present there where maan left it..karan and geet were confused as dad is alone in the room…they went near him to wake him up…

Geet:uncle..aap yahi sogaye the..

[uncle..u slept here??]

Dad:ha beta pata hi nahi chala…

Karan:aur maan kaha hai?

[where is maan?]

Dad:ha…he must be there in his room..

"no uncle..he is not there..even ur room is empty"said karan worriedly..

"hmm..i know he must be there in gym"said geet confidentally…

"uncle..aap jaakar fresh hojayiye….hum maan ko lekar aathe hai"said geet smiling at him..dad smiled and nodded..

Geet was right maan is in gym…he cant able to forget rishi's words and he felt that he is right…

Tumhe kya pata??tumhari na koi behen hai ya maa…😡

[how can u know??u don't have sis or mom in ur life]

Rishi's words are echoing in his ears and increasing his pain…he is feeling this pain for the first time as no one said such type of words to maan..he know that he don't have mom but no one till now gave him chance to realise that…his dad loved him more than anyone..his friends and their family loved him..he is totally a pampered guy..so he is feeling like someone stabbed him whenever he remember"tumhari zindagi mein koi nahi hai…no mom….he is hurting himself to remove the pain in his heart…



[hayeee mona started drooling over maan😳😆]


Geet and karan are shocked when they saw maan in anger and hurting himself...





"u cant understand anyone's emotions"maan eyes turned blood red and he screamed out of his frustation and pain…geet and karan already had tears in his eyes and they are shocked when they saw maan lifting a fire stick and performing act with it…




Geet was about to run to maan but karan stopped her holding her wrist..he took geet out from there…

Geet:karan what are u doing??we should stop him..o idiot apne aap ko pain de raha hai…

Karan:ha I know…and u know maan very well..o itni asaani se kuch bhi nahi bhoolta…geet listen we should not talk anything about previous day's incident with maan….warna maan ka gussa aur bad jayega..we should cheer up his mind but not in emotional way samji..saying so he wiped her tears…

"be happy infront of him and behave normally as if nothing is happened..ok"

Geet smiled and nodded..both made their way to gym again where maan is still busy in thoughts..his body is already sweating badly and he is already panting…



Karan:ofoo…dude kitna workout karoge tum..mujse zyada strong banna hai kya??said karan showing his muscles…

Maan looked at them with anger filled eyes actually he is not angry on them but on himself for unknown reason…rishi's words filled his mind and heart with anger and pain..

Geet laughed out loud.."ha ha ha..tum aur strong..mein hi kafi hoon tumhe peetne ke liye..ha ha ..tum aur strong"teased geet pressing his muscles…

[ha ha ha..u n strong..iam enough alone to beat u….ha ha..u r strong]

But there is no effect on maan…he was about to lift the fire stick again but geet quickly held his hand and literally dragged him..

"dekho maan ke dole shole..khud ko dekho marasmus patient ki tarah rehthe ho"

[look at maan's muscles.…and u just look like a marasmus patient]

Karan glares at geet for which geet makes cute faces as if asking for sorry..maan didn't payed any attention to them and just stood there panting…


Karan:accha!!ruk abhi batata hoon..said karan and twisted geet's ear..geet is expecting maan to save her as maan always saves her from karan whenever karan twists her ear when she teases him..


"karan…"said maan..geet and karan looked at him smiling widely and waiting for him to speak something…

"and geet…I now why u guys are doing this..but plz iam not in mood now..just leave me alone"said maan and about to turn but geet held his arm….


"kyun college nahi jaana hai kya??"asked geet

[don't u want to go to college??]

"geet plz…go from here.."said maan turning his face…

"accha!!phir se bunk maarne ka irada hai…but listen iam not going to leave u…arey 1 month mein hamare final exams hai aur tum…nahi..nahi..tumhe chalna hi padega..kyun karan"said geet and winked to tell something…

[oh u want to bunk the class again..no way iam not going to leave..we have final exams in a month and u want to bunk the classes..noway…u have to come..right karan]

"ha maan…umm..wo u have to solve that problem in class na"said karan not knowing what to say…geet glared and hit her forehead with her palm..

Karan:now chalo..we are late already said karan and dragged maan with him…


They pushed maan in to washroom who was adamant to do anything they say..they irritated him by shouting his name again n again and asking him to come out soon..they kept his dress,watch,shoes everything ready so that he can get ready soon..and books are already with them so not to worry about his college bag…maan came out irked and threw towel on bed…geet and karan stood in front of him with crossed arms at the same time smiling like jokers…"now what??"asked maan…

Geet:aise hi college aaoge kya??maan track suit mein college jana allowed nahi hai…😆so plz wear this "said geet n handovers dress to him…maan almost grabbed it from her..geet stood there smiling for which maan glared at her…

"ab kya??"asked maan irritatingly…

Geet nodded in no…"u change it"said geet…

Maan:pehle tum bahar toh jao..

[u go out first]

[guys I know he can change in wash room but I intentinally wrote it😆]

Geet:oh..sorry sorry…and moved from there…she noticed that karan is also following her…she stopped him at door..


"oye stupid..tum kyun bahar aarahe ho..tum ladki ho kya??tum agar maan ko chod kar bahar aaoge na o aise hi baita rahega..kya pata darwaza band kardiya toh.."

[stupid..why are u moving out…u r not a girl na..if u leave him alone he'll sit there simply…who knows he may lock him inside]


Karan nodded as if he invented something..geet slapped on his head and went out warning him to help maan to get ready for college..

They finally suceeded in their attempt and started to college…for a change karan drove the car and maan sat beside him…however,he is not mood to do anything..geet and karan are continuosly trying to cheer him with their silly jokes but maan kept mum all the while..they reached the college finally…geet and karan stepped down and noticed that maan is still sitting there lost in his thoughts…geet went to him and knocked the glass which brought maan out of his thoughts…he looked here and there and realised that they reached college….geet opened the door and asked"ab tumhe invitation dena padega utharne ke liye..utro jaldi"

[u need an invitation to step out from the car?]

Maan glared at her for which she gave silly smile..he silently stepped out and walked with them..karan and geet are still trying to talk something or the other with him but maan just answered as hmm or nodded…they both are discussing their plans in whispering tone..whenever maan saw them they gave stupid smiles to him…everyone in the college were surprised and worried for maan as he is not even replying to their wishes..he is a pampered guy even in college with huge fan following..he used to wish everyone including sweeper and peon but today they saw different maan and not all happy with him..they know the reason behind it as everyone witnessed the previous evening's incident…suddenly an idea clicked in geet's mind..she literally pulled karan's ear as he is taller than her and whispered something in his ears whilst maan is few steps forward from them..karan smiled and both shared hi-5..geet and karan ran to diff directions and informed their plan to other students..everyone smiled and showed thumsup to them..geet quickly ran to maan saying.."omg!!kaha gayi...it was there…kaha hai?"maan looked at her confusingly…


"ha geet…it was there..ok let's search"said karan and started looking here and there…they searched plant pots,classrooms etc etc while maan is looking at them confusingly…he totally forgot what he is thinking few min ago…"ofoo..kaha doondu?"said geet..meanwhile,maan observed that everyone is running here and there searching for something again n again..he stood there like alein and looked at them amusingly…karan and geet ran here and there..they almost completed searching every place around them…both came running near maan who stood still confused looking here and there and thinking what happened to his friends today…"mila??"[did u get it??]asked geet…

"no!!"said karan…


Geet:ok let me check in my hand bag…and she started checking but made sad face and nodded in no..karan checked his pockets n he did the same..geet ran to maan and started checking his shirt pocket where as karan checked his pant as if he is a theif…maan felt ticklish and jumped.."oh stop it"maan shouted…


Geet and karan stood there making baby faces.."tell me what are u people searching for??and that too this seriously..and what all these people r searching for.."asked maan seriously…


"umm..wo…it is very cute"said geet still making baby face..

"sweet too"said karan..

"cute and sweet…what??"maan asked irritatingly….

"tumhari smile"both said in unsion in low tone…

Maan who was expecting them to tell something looked at them amusingly..finally a smile crept on his lips..he nodded in disbelief looking at them..karan and geet jumped like kids shouting"yayyy"as if a kid won running race…

Precap:

Maan:ha tum kuch nahi samajti…

Geet whose eyes already filled said😭"ha mein kuch nahi samajti" and ran from there

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