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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420


🤣 you now you are the only one left whom loves this maan wah this is called unconditional love🤣



ab wt cn i do yaar
love is blind na...😆
Edited by tiakashyap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
uff aag dono taraf brabar hai..😉😉😉😉

wah geet phle akele mai kiss nhi diya nd ab sbke samne chi chi babaji...😆😆😆😆

nd maan uff tumse yeh umeed nhi thi cheek pe kiss pe khush ho gye dats nt like my maan.😳😳😆

hayee sam j j
u know wt i lv j part
mujko logo ko jlte dkhna mai bhut mza aata hai🤣🤣

oops stupid mel
schi wrng timng yaar
kha rok diya wnt 2 c geets' exprssn 😈
cont sooonnn



😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update..
chalo sameera bhi aagayi
thx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome yar
kya timing hai end karne ki😡
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohh, thnk god maan ki image is bettr than bfore😉. But u never knw wht is in *evil Mel's* dimaag.😈🤣 And geet is in soo much love wid maan. Uff she's jst hopeless. And yeh kya! Sameera kamini idhar bh aa gaye😡... Nw wonder what else happens in d party nw. And maan ne yeh kya bol diya😲??????????? Oooh poor geet😭. Lovely update di. Thnx for PM. Lov ya.🤗
-LUV Anyaa😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

uff aag dono taraf brabar hai..😉

wah geet phle akele mai kiss nhi diya nd ab sbke samne chi chi babaji...😆

nd maan uff tumse yeh umeed nhi thi cheek pe kiss pe khush ho gye dats nt like my maan.😳😳😆

hayee sam j j
u know wt i lv j part
mujko logo ko jlte dkhna mai bhut mza aata hai🤣🤣

oops stupid mel
schi wrng timng yaar
kha rok diya wnt 2 c geets' exprssn 😈
cont sooonnn



😳


😆 kya hai na your maan gets lately very fast happy😆
haww you called me stupid😡\
btw me updating
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

Ohh, thnk god maan ki image is bettr than bfore😉. But u never knw wht is in *evil Mel's* dimaag.😈🤣 And geet is in soo much love wid maan. Uff she's jst hopeless. And yeh kya! Sameera kamini idhar bh aa gaye😡... Nw wonder what else happens in d party nw. And maan ne yeh kya bol diya😲??????????? Oooh poor geet😭. Lovely update di. Thnx for PM. Lov ya.🤗

-LUV Anyaa😳


there is no fun without sameera choti😈
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 5

Maal smiled he hugged her even more tighter. He started caressing her hair.

M:No I won't let you go. you're mine

geet smiled she was liking it.

G:Hmmm

Sameera was hating all this she couldn't take it anymore she needed to end it right now.

S:So Maan is this your new keep, toy.

Maan whom was lost in the hug. answered with Hmmm. Geet pushed Maan away. Maan was shocked. His anger raised.

M:Geet what's wrong whit you what the hell are you doing

Tears formed in geet's eyes. Sameera smirked she liked the way things where going.Time to become ex-girlfriend darling she thought.

G:I am your keep that's what you think about me Maan. How long can you think about me.Your such a arrogant man. I can't believe I fell for you.

Maan's anger was on his peak. He raised his hand but stopped himself. Geet was shocked.

G:Hit me Maan why did you stop. I am not but a toy to you so why did you stop.
M: Shut up Geet.How dare you talk to me like this huh. You now how I am. I am Maan singh Khurana and you such a stupid girl have the courage to talk to me like that. And your putting fake allegations on me How dare you. You should thank me that I spended oh sorry wasted my time with you.

More teares fell from geet's eyes.

G:Oh I am so sorry Mr. Maan singh Khurana to waste you time.

Having said that she turned around and ran away from there.

Sameera smirked job done she thought.

A:Maan why did you behave like that
S:What do you mean adi didn't you see how that girl was talking to Maan
A:Any respectfull girl would he called her a keep and toy
M:What the hell adi when did I call her that.
A:Sameera
S:What Sameera Adi Maan is
A:Ek minute Sameera let me talk
S:A
M:Wait let him speak

Sameera finally got quite. But she was feeling nervous.

A:Sameera asked you is she your new keep,toy and you said hmmm.
M:When
A:When you where hugging her

Maan rememberd ow No he thought.

M:Sameera what's wrong with you what kind of question is that
S:maan she didn't look you type so I asked what I thought maybe your just palying around and Maan
M:Shut up Sameera I have no time for all this.

Maan ran out of the disc. He drove to geet house.

When Geet ran out the disc. She kept running she didn't now where she was going.

Main toh jiya na mara
Hai ve das main ki kara

Dil jude bina hi tut gaye hath mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne
Baar baar rod akhiyan tainu jo na vekh sakiyan
Khole aaye aaj kudrat ne
Kataan main ki ve din teri soth tere bin
Main toh jiya na mara

She kept running untill she got tired. She reached a beach and fell on her knees. She started crying more and more.

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna

JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna


She rememberd how Maan talked to her, He said he had wasted his time on her. She was just a stupid girl he was right she was. She didn't now whom he was but as a crazy person she was behind him. Yeah love was indeed blind, dumb, stupid and deaf. And still this heart beated for him.

Hai to yeh kyun hota hai
Jab yeh dil rota hai
Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
Jag suna lage

She kept on thinking what happened and kept on crying. She didn't notice that it had started raining. She was completely drained but she didn't fell anything she kept crying.Until she fainted

Roothi rothi sari raatein
Fikhe fikhe sare din
Virani si Virani hai
Tanhai si tanhai hai
Aur ek hum hai pyaar ke bin
Har Palchin

Maan reached Geet's home. He rang the bell but no one openend he kept ringing the bell. After a good 15 minutes he presumed she was not home. It had started to rain so he ran to his car. He called on her mobile but no one picked up. Maan didn't now what this feeling was that he was feeling right now but he didn't like it. He called Adi and told him to search geet at **** area and he would search her at **** area. he also told him to tell Romeo and Manisha to start searching Geet at different area's. maan drove like a mad Man. he went from to one place to another. He kept calling the guys to now where geet was.

On the other side Sameera was hating the way maan was searching geet. Everything was going perfect why did that stupid Adi have to open his mouth. She was furious. She would get rid of geet.No matter what.

Maan got out of his car he looked around. When his eyes went to geet whom was lying on the beach totally drained. His heart pained. His heart never pained that was a weird feeling he fell for the first time. he ran towards her. Seeing her lying lifeless on the beach broke something inside him. he went on his knees. He picked her up and drove to the hospital without thinking.


Oef guys I stopped now on the right time na or not tell mel😆

part 6
Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yayayayayayayayayayay!!!
Me first..
Wow..This was awesome...Ugh That sameera is a b***h😡
How can she???GRRR////...😡😡
OMG!!
Maan is falling for Geet unknowingly
Edited by SallyAmanda - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww The insolent Jerk Maan!!!

LOVE YOU MEL…😳
A Big walaa hug…😳

Thank you...
Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago

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