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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: muraadlovesdd

r u going to update

plz update karo aur maaneet ko milda do waiting for BQ also


yeah I will
but idk when
bq update is hopefully 2marow...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
this is so confusing.. is Geet going to take vicky with her.. i mean if she does wudn't Maan be keeping tag of wawt vicky is doing going and all
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
awesome update
i am happy for Geet that she got true friends
Maan was having some emotions when it is about Geet
oh God!!!! He found her what will happen now??
i just hope by the time he reaches her she has left for london
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
iska next update kab milega...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Chapter 27

Past:
Geet sat on the floor tired and hungry...she was in charge of cleaning the whole mansion...whenever she moped the floor Maan would purposely come with dirty shoes making mess all over again...Dadima tried talking to him but it was like talking to the wall..he would often tell Dadima to leave the house if she didn't like his rules but she knew that Dadima only stayed back because of her...she was glad to have little bit of hope in her life...but that hope is vanishing little by little as each day passes.

Vicky never called home after he was taken away only that he is in London to never come back until Maan feels he is ready...There was no one of her own that she can call say its hers...Her dad went away when she was little leaving just her and her mom and then God took her away as well leaving her alone...she had hoped that Maan would change one day but he went too far...wherever he is right now its too late to reform...her heart is filled with hatred for him...more then how she felt for her father..wherever he may be...

She saw Maan walking in stopping right in front of him...

"Its lunch time..why isn't the table set yet?"

Geet: woh...

Maan: two minutes...you have two minutes to set the table...

She quickly gets up doing whatever she was told...she knew if she defied him or was any late than he would give her punishment..she wasn't afraid of his punishment at all but the kind of punishment he planed on giving her disgusts her...she rather take a beating then to deal with his touch...him kissing and touching her in the places where he has no right on her anymore...she saw Dadima looking at her helplessly Geet gives her a reassuring smile but she herself didn't know what this unpredictable monster would do next.

She stood little bit farther from where Maan was sitting while he ate the food she made. He looks at her as soon as he took a bite..she didn't make any eye contact kept her head down hating his face and his presence.

"What is this you have made?"

"Pesto Pasta..." (Geet said...)

"hmm next time I want a name card of all the food that's kept on the table...to make it easier for me...understand?" (she nodes her head yes)

Daidma: Maan that is enough...look at her state..she is your wife for god's sake

Maan: That she is so as a obedient wife its her duty to look after the house and her husband...and I believe that is exactly what she is doing..am I wrong Dadima?

Dadima: One day you will regret your actions..mark my words! (she gets up from the table with anger...Maan watches her leave...he puts his foot on the chair in front of him...)

Maan: Message my feet while I eat...(he looks at her from the corner of his eyes while eating dinner...he snaps his fingers motioning her to come...she sits on the floor slowly messaging his feet...) harder...

She nodes her head yes...Maan looks at her waiting for her to say something but she kept quiet...her silence was bothering him...he wanted her to yell or defy his orders but she never once said a word about any of his demands however ridicules they were...he snatches his foot away from her in anger while standing up..

Geet: Is this all?

Maan (faces her with anger...he steps toward her while she moves back without looking at him...he corners her against the wall) Why aren't you talking? (She just stood there not looking at him with him more mad..he tangles his fingers in her hair pulling it back forcing her to look at him...she smirks seeing him like this...) Answer my question..

Geet: Peasants are not allowed to talk in front of their masters...(she yells when he holds her hair even tighter...)

"Maan let her go...(Dadima comes from behind forcing him to let go of Geet...he lets go of her while walking away...Geet hugs Dadima crying her heart out...) Its okay..I will make sure you don't endure this anymore..enough is enough..I will end what my tyrant son started...he will change one day with or without you

Geet: What do you mean?

Dadima; its better if you leave...run away from here...start your own life again

Geet (looks at her shocked) what are you saying? I..uh...

Dadima: I know that is what you wanted to do since you came here...now you got the opportunity...don't tell me where you are going just leave..leave this miserable life, this monster..forget everything..

Geet: what about you?

Dadima: What about me? I have lived my life and I will die happy knowing that I didn't let history repeat itself...

Geet: But.

Dadima: But nothing...Maan doesn't have any servants in the house which is good...you would just need to get passed the guards and I will help you..if he can't respect you as a wife then he has no right to have you in his life...

Geet packed her bags for London...her new destination where she will start a new life with her kid and Vicky..."Babaji please give me enough strength to do this...I will always be greatful to Meera and Yash for helping me out so much...I couldn't have asked for better friends and support..Babaji please don't let anything bad happen...let this journey start off with great happiness..i dont know why I am getting this fear inside me..the same fear that I used to have in front of him...

(she puts her hand on top of her stomach) what will happen when he finds me? I can't run away for ever how can I? What will he to my kid? No No...I can't let him be around my kid..I don't want him to turn my kid like him..ruthless and arrogant..instead I will teach him values that my mom taught me..how to be Independent, strong and caring...

She finishes doing all the packing..she looks at the phone..."should I call Dadima to see how she is doing? It has been so long since I have talked to her..I wonder what Maan did to Dadima..is she safe? Did he hurt her?"

Slowly she takes the phone in her hand...her hands were beginning to sweat a little..."what if he picks up? no no..he won't..he lets all the servants do everything for him..." one by one she dials the number...as soon as she heard it ring she hung up the phone...she jumps when she heard her doorbell ring...she wipes the sweat off her face to open it..

"it must be Yash and Meera..."
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"Damn it how long is it going to take to fix the car?" (Maan stood on the road while his driver checks the car..smoke was coming out from the engine...)

"Sir it will take time..."

"I want results you hear..." (he calls another car to come..."I should've known this was going to happen...nothing is going the way I want anymore ever since Geet left..but that won't be for too long...I will have her...)

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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Amazing update...
Plz update next part sooner...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Awesome👍🏼👍🏼
So that is how she escaped from him..
I hope Maan doesn't get to her before Yash and Meera
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
hope its meera and yash and not maan loved the update poor geet he had her like worst than a servant loved the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Grrr Maan is the kamina of all kaminaas lol!!Poor Geet was made to work so much! Yet she was tortured so much that she hated his touch!
One he wants her obedience and then expects her defiance!
Glad Daadima helped her! But it seems her missing didnt affect him at all!
Hope its Yash Meera
cont soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
can maan meet geet or she left fr london...so dadima helped her to run away...

awesome n beautiful update...


loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

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