1st ff on maaneet SIRF MERE LIYE THREAD 1 (link 2) - Page 61

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n superb update
loved maaneet's moment
n how mini made armaan to understand the love
update soon

thnx for the pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 49

She kissed him in passion, some time later they broke apart,,, maan nuzzles in the crook of her neck, playing with her finger….

Geet: maan,,,

Maan: hmm?

Geet: niche chale? Sab intezar kar rahe honge….

Maan: mujhe nahi jana….

Geet: maan pls na,, chaliye na, its already 10…. He sighed and agreed to her,,, geet gets up and covered herself in the bedsheet…. Maan narrow his eyes,,,

Maan: geet tum hamesha aise sharmati ho jaise main tumhe pehli baar aise dekh raha hu….her face become red due to blush…. she looked at his eyes, and then looks away when she saw maan was coming close to her… he comes close and put his finger under her chin,, kya huya geet? Tum itna kyun sharmati ho mujhse? He was coming close….

Geet: maan….

Maan: hmm?

Geet: mujhe fresh hona hain…..

Maan: hmm to?

Geet: mujhe jane dijiye….

Maan: maine tumhe kab pakda hain geet? She looked at him and saw he is quite far from her she tried to move but he comes close,, she is now between him and the wall…

Geet: maan aap aisa kyun kar rahe ho? Why u r teasing me? She made a cute face,,, he can eat her alive,,

Maan: but maine,,

Geet: mujhe paata hain apne kuch nahi kiya,,, aap kabhi kuch karte kaha ho bas mujhe aise dekhke najane kya kya karte ho,,, he raise his one eye… she gulped to see his smirk,,, she just pushed him and ran to the bathroom…

Maan shouted : are geet main kya karta hu ye to batati jao,,,

Geet too shouted while banging the wash room door... aap ko pata hain aap kya kya karte ho…. He laughed a loud….

Maan got a call from the head quarters,,, he have to repot there urgently… as some problem is going around in a important rally…. He have to be there to give protection to the minister…. He goes to freshen up in her bathroom….. after sometime geet comes out from from the bathroom and was relieved to see there is no sign of maan… she gently wiped her hair and goes to her room….. maan comes out from the wash room,,, wearing a jeans and wrapping a towel on his shoulder…. She froze on her track,, maan saw geet's flushing cheeks in the mirror,, as his back was facing her…. She looked here and there,,, he smirks,, and walked up to her….. geet tried to run away but he hold her waist and pulled her towards him,,, her back thump on his rock solid chest…… and whisper in her ear…

Maan: abb kaha jaogi geet….

Geet: maan apko hamesha saitani kyun sujhti hain? he nuzzles close to her shoulder….

Maan: geet main saitani kaha karta hu,,, main to kabhi kuch nahi karta, he said with a deadly smirk,,, she felt helpless…. He lick the skin and she closed her eyes and that time his phone buzz with a loud ring…. She jerk his hand,, he let go off her he he picked up the phn frustratingly,

Maan: who is this?

Adi: maan tu kaha hain? jaldi aja,, yaha kuch na kuch to hone wala hain,,, I m suspecting some,,, kuch na kuch gadbad hoga,, jaldi aaja..

Maan: ok, aadi I m coming,,, he is all serious now,,,,

Geet: maan kahi ja rahe aap? Maan walked wupto his room and she followed him,,

Maan: geet ek rally me minister ko protection dena hain,, he is very important for us….she knew he is very responsible for to his duty,,, she choose his dress and kept it on the bed….. he saw this and feel proud of her,,, he cupped his face… I m sorry jaan, mujhe pata hain ye din hume sath rehna chahiye, aur kal hamari sangeet hain, aaj kitne kaam the, but,

Geet: sath rehne ke liye sari zindegi padhi hain maan, abhi u need to go for our country na? I m proud of u maan, aur mujhe pata hain aap sab thik karke jaldi mere pass ayoge,, she smiled… maan kissed her forehead and goes to change the dress mean while geet comes down to make his breakfast…. Everyone in the hall looks at her with sorry face as they knew she would be sad for previous night…(least they know what she is feeling)

Armaan riddhima and all the other friends were there also…. Armaan wanted ot talk to geet but she straightly enter the kitchen making food for him….. and that time nandini enter the hall….

Nandini: hii everyone…

Piya: are tum nandini ho na?

Abhay: tum thi kaha nandini? Engagement me nahi dekha tumhe,,, but geet ne kaha tum agayi thi but,,

Nandini: wo main kuch kaam se bahar gayi thi aur traffic me fas gayi thi aur jab tak main wapis aayi dekha maan jijaji geet didi pe gussa kar rahe the, to main bina bataye apne kamre me chali gayi, she was sounding unconvincing…. But that time maan comes down from the stairs,,, everyone attention goes to him….. he is looking normal….

Bindiya: maan mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hain…..

Maan: bindiya I m really getting late,, please wapis aake baat karunga….. he was heading towards the main door when geet called him…

Geet: maan ek min,, he turn to see she was running with a plate…. Pehle ye kha lijiye…. Aur ye apka lunch le jaiye….

Maan : geet mujhe late ho raha hain, but she forcefully enter a bite of paratha in his mouth….

Geet: bhukhe pet nahi jaate maan,,, maan was thinking ye ladki meri koi baat nahi manti ulta apni har baat manwa leti hain…. before he gulped the bite geet force some more in his mouth,,, he tried to say or move but geet didn't let him,, that was quite funny scene,, they were standing at the entrance of the house and dadima saw them and smiled,,, she thought someone is there to take care of him…. Armaan looked at maan with angry face where riddhima smiled and looked at armaan tried to make him understand their love …. He look away…. After some more feeding maan held her hand tightly…

Maan: bas jaan, aur nahi,,

Geet: but

Maan: nooo….

Geet: ok to ye lunch box le jaiye….

Maan rolled his eyes and gave threatening look to everyone who were giggling, they instantly stop their smile…. He cupped geet face and kissed her forehead,,,

Maan: main jaldi ayunga…. Love u..

Geet: me too….

After his exit,, everyone looked at her like she has two head….

Geet: aap sab mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho?

Nandini: didi,,, kal jijaji ne itna kuch apko kaha aur aap,,, but geet said

Geet: kal job hi huya wo mere aur maan k bich ki baat hain,, and I don't want anyone's else interfering in that… she is right she doesn't have to reason or give clarification to anyone of their personal matter……

Riddhima: we are happy that everything is fine between u guys, she hugged her and geet blush a little,,, riddhima teases her a bit… waise geet maan ne tumhe manaya kaise? Geet's face become red in shy and piya join riddhima to tease her more………..

The rally was coordinated as per maan's instruction… it was held for a bill that newly passed by the government ,, but it is against of the lower class farmer as that was they will losses their money and they can't get any share of profit,,, but it was a good deal for the high class business mans,, as they will gain profit but they have showed the chart according to the benefit of the lower classes and government passed that bill without any fuss but later when the truth revealed it was an blow to the hole state, as the farmer went to strike and there is so much violence in every corner… and that reach delhi also although it was not a direct case of here,, but the minister ,MR KANTILAAL one of the good politician wanted to help the farmer and that way the country which is going on fire will be at peace….. he held an ANSHAN for them to change the bill by the government and then the rally was suppose to help them,,, but now some of the corrupt politician didn't want to change it as their bank account got some blank check from the business mans,,, so they tried to stop the ANSHAN and went up to mr kantilaal,,, at first they their to be reasonable but when failed they offered him bribe also,,, but mr kantilaal didn't move from his decision…. So now maan and aadi is the incharge of his protection as they can harm him,, he has became danger for them….

Maan called aadi to tell him the exact position….

Maan: aadi what happen, sab thik hain na?

Aadi: maan mujhe kuch admi pe shak hain, kantilaal ka most trust worthy ladka ramesh gayab hogaya hain kal se,,,, aur abhi kuch naye member aaye hain,,, I have full doubt on them….

Maan: nazar rakh unpe,,, sabko check kiya?

Aadi: hmm kisi ke pass kuch nahi hain…

Maan: hmm….

Armaan: geet tu thik to hain na?

Geet: ha armaan, main bilkul thik hu, mujhe kya hoga?

Armaan: kal raat, maan ne wo sab…

Geet: armaan maan ne job hi kaha wo gusse me kaha aur main unhe janti hu, wo mujhse bohot pyar kare hian,,, itna ke main kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti thi….. aur main bhi unse bohot pyar karti hu…. They were in the terries,,, armaan wanted to confirm that she is ok and that too from her only, and now he can see she is happy with maan and he doesn't want anything else apart from her happiness…. After geet left riddhima comes there…

Riddhima: I hope abb tumhari sari tesion dur hogayi… he tried to walk away…. But riddhima held his hand….please armaan,,, geet usse bohot pyar karti hain,,, she felt he is numb,,, she comes infront of him, his head was low, one single drop comes out from his eyes,,, he hugged her…

Both stayed in that position until the tears of the sky soaked them completely hide their sorrow in each other……

Geet tried to call maan but his phone is unreachable,,,daadima tried to divert her attention…

Dadima: geet bte, apke mahendi k liye humne kuch kapre aur khandani jewelry rakkha hain, aap unme se kuch choose kar lijiye aap kya pahenna chahti hain….

Geet: dadima aap hi select kar dijiye na, waise bhi mujhe jewelries me koi khash choice nahi hain…

Sid: chaliye daadima hum apki madad karte hain,,, he is a funny guy and always entertain everyone… he cracks jokes and everyone laughed their heart out,,, geet got busy in their talk when someone switches on the tv and there news flash,,,

There is a heavy bomb explodes in the eastern area where a very important rally was held,,, but as a great effort of maan singh khurana Mr kantilaal is saved from it…… geet eyes instantly goes to the sscreen,,, but there was some guns shot,, some internal sources reveals that may be some bullet was shot to ACP Maan singh khurana as well….. geet's whole world crashed down underneath of her…..

Precap: what do u think guys?

Thank u for all teh love u showered guys,, love ur all comment sooo muach...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous n like the way geet has answered nandini too good i hope ki maan ko kuch na hua ho continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Supreb update!!
Hw do u feeling nw Tich...??
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
hope nothing happened to maan
do continue soon

thnx for the pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
just hope nothing happened to maan...
looking forward to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lvd it
bt i hope mere maan theek ho...
babaji😊😊

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