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Posted: 13 years ago
theu update was amazing as always...maan is sooo nyc and caring...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
loved how geet went on n on n on about maan
n that cheapo rishi what does he think of himself to tell about maan like that
n loved how maan defended aadi n geet defended maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...
awesome...
loved the way geet admire and love maan so much...
waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... i loved this part... 👏

i wonder is this only friendship?????😕

loved the caring nature of maan towards his friends...

oh rishi's words hurt me too😭

geet took the charge and kya sunaayaa hai...wow 👏

loved that scene

but maan kahan gaya????😕

i hope he listened whatever geet said to rishi...

glad rishi ki sis ne aa ke baat clear ki ...😊

thnx for pm

am very bad nowadays ... can't read all pmzzz 😭

continue soon

love rose😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
..dear...😛
4 Pming me..😛.
ur updates r just ,
& ...😃
really ...😳
u done a dear..👏👏.
... dear
keep the job up dear..👏..
keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
PLZ ADD "monachweetie" TO UR BUDDY LIST IF U WANT PM'S FROM ME'

DOSTI YA PYAAR

part-8

first of all sorry for late update friends..me not feeling well..down with viral fever😭 so plz bear with my pakav update😭😭 and sorry for not coloring..dont hav patience now😭😭

Geet:ab samaj mein aaya koun hero hai aur koun zero…and from now..dont u dare to say anything about maan…warna mujse bura koi nahi hoga….

"chalo maan" said geet and turned to see there is no maan…

Geet:maan…karan maan kaha hai???

They searched almost every where in all the classrooms but he is no where..geet's tension increased more when she don't find maan in canteen his most fav place..whenever maan is in bad mood it is the place he used to come..she then went to library but failed to find him as he is not there even in library…her eyes already filled with tears and they finally rushed out when she don't find maan even in play ground..the only place left for her to search..even karan and harika failed to figure him…

Geet:where are u maan?? Said Who already started sobbing…

Karan hugged her to console her…

"don't worry geet…maan mil jayega..chalo we'll go home..he would have left to home"said karan…

Geet saw raju(peon) passing the way and called him..

Geet:raju..tumne maan ko kahi dekha hai?

[raju..did u see maan anywhere??]

Raju:ha didi..jagda ho raha tha na tab chala gaya..pata nahi kyun maan bhaiyya ro raha tha..mein ne baat karne ki koshish ki par wo toh chup chap chala gaya…

[ha sis..i saw him going out…do not why but he was crying??i tried to talk with him but he left silently]

Geet:karan chalo jaldi..maan ghar gaya hoga..

[karan..let's go..maan would have gone to home]

They reached maan's home just to find that maan is not there at home..no one have any information about him..nakul was busy with his work so he didn't notice maan….meanwhile,maan's dad arrived there and confused to see geet crying also karan looking tensed…

Geet rushed to him and hugged him..

Geet:uncle pata nahi maan kaha chala gaya..

Dad:beta ye kya keh rahi ho..maan tum logo ke saath nahi tha??

Geet nodded while crying..then she narrated the whole happening that took place in college..

Dad:oh god!!where he would have gone…I know he must be crying…said with sad voice…

They searched again in the whole house but he still no where…they even checked in gym area but still they didn't find him there…dad felt tensed now..all are thinking what to do and where they should search for maan.."toy room"geet and dad said at the same time..

Toy room consists maan's child hood toys and all the things related to his mom…so they estimated that maan might have gone to that room..wheneever maan remembers his mom he used to spend the time in that room so they guessed that maan would be there in the room and they were right…they opened the door just to find maan sitting irregularly hugging his mom's photo..tears were making their way to his cheeks continously but he made no sound while crying…..

Dad rushed to maan instantly and kneeled down before him where geet,karan and karika followed him…."maan"dad said in low voice caressing his hair…

Maan looked at his dad with tears and hugged him tightly like a baby…

"papa..mama kyun chod kar chali gayi mujhe??" asked maan while crying…

Dad said nothing but felt like some one is peircing his heart with sharp needles…maan never asked this question to him..he missed his mom a lot but he never revealed it either to him or anyone..he buried his pains inside him and lived happily and today his bravest son is crying like a baby asking for his mom…he always loved him a lot and tried to fullfil every thing he needed…he even tried to fill his mom's kami by loving him as much as he can but he thought he failed to do it…he simply hugged maan back whilst tears flowed down his eyes…he kissed his son's hair who hugged him tightly…

"papa…mere paas koi nahi hai..mama bhi..mein akela hoon…mein kuch nahi jaantha hoon…I cant understand any one's emotions as I don't have mom to teach me how to understand others and how to behave..why papa??why I don't have anyone in my life"asked maan still hugging his dad…pain is clearly audible in his voice…

Geet karan and harika who already were in tears felt like some one snatched their breath especially geet..they cant able to see their best friend their maan who always makes others smile..who always stands for them whenever they want him even without any pleading…they felt very bad when they saw maan in that worst condition…geet ran out who failed to endure this condition of her maan,her best friend who only know to smile..she know that he is emotional from inside but never wanted this..so she ran out without being able to control her tears…karan also is in the same condition ao he also left the room followed by harika…

"no beta not like that..ur papa is there with u na.."said dad to console maan…

"no papa iam alone"said maan…

"no maan..u r not alone..me,geet karan sab hai na tumhare saath..aur kisne kaha ki mama tumhare paas nahi hai…mama hamesha hamare saath thi aur rahegi..o upar se sab dekthi hai..na beta aisa nahi kehthe..my maan is strong na..they how can u cry like this..no beta stop crying now"said dad and wiped maan's tears…

"beta o stupid fellow ke baato ko lekar kyun apne aapko takleef de rahe ho??dont care his words who himseld don't know anything and he is alone even after having everyone…beta he don't know what is the imp of mother and her love even after having her in his life but my maan knows how to love everyone and how to bring smile on everyone's face..so how can u say that my maan don't know anything..and ha don't u dare to say that u are alone..u hav ur papa…and do do mama's who loves u more than their daughter and son(refering to karan and geet's mom)..beta ur mama is seeing everything from there..now don't cry..otherwise she'll kill me for letting her laadla cry…plz beta apni mama ke liye"

Maan gave weak smile to him who were listening to him patiently..dad kissed maan's forehead and said"that's like my maan..keep smiling always"

Maan smiled again and instantly placed his head on his papa's lap holding his hand tight..dad caressed his hair…

After few minutes geet and karan entered the room and saw maan sleeping peacefully on his dad's lap..geet smiled when she saw maan sleeping forgetting his pain….karan and geet went and sat beside them…get caressed maan's hair….karan too smiled at him..

Geet:uncle maan…

"beat he's fine…tum log ghar jao..i'll handle"said dad with a smile..

Karan:but uncle how can we leave maan like this..

"beta dnt worry..i'll take care of him and u people now na that maan wont talk with anyone now..waise bhi he's sleeping now..u don't worry beta..karan geet ko ghar chod do bahuth der hogayi hai"said dad..

Geet looked at maan with tensed expressions..dad smiled at her and assured her that he'll take care of him..geet nodded and finally left the place half heartedly….

Precap:

Maaneet's jagda(quarrel)😭

Hope u guys like it..if not sorry guys😭

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Love..

-mona😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
Mona u made me cry re.. i hate u for this.. for making me cry.. awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohhh loved it yaar...
Maan crying...me also crying...sob sob... Maans dad is sooo good n loves him sooo much... Maan was saying all those things like a small child...
Poor he... Precap maaneet jagda bt kyu???
N yes do tk care of urself... No need to stress urself...get well soon
Edited by divya22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update emotional also😭

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