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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome upate
so maan finally confessed his love
continue soon



thank u so much abi...
hmm finally...after a long wait...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ar-n-only-ar



Awesome update... really in luv wid dis ff...
"jaan" haaye 😍

btw wanted to know is dis ur 1st ff??
If u hve written more pls give m e d link of those ff or ss...
Thanx 4 d lovely update... :-)



thank u thank u so much dear...
hmm so dreamy word JAAN...

yeah dear there is one complete ss, another ff and some os
here is the link...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54860417
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24

Beautiful update dear...

Maaneet moments r so romantic...
Thanks for the pm ...



thanks a lot dear...
pic is so nice..thanks for it..
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Posted: 13 years ago



part-47



Maan-what happened? Why are you crying jaan….? She looked at him while crying hearing the word JAAN… she blushed at the word….JAAN…. but he didn't understand why she is crying suddenly….. she was fine just while ago and now she is crying badly… maan is continuously asking to her that what happened? why are you crying? But no reply.. she is crying… maan is so much worried… so much concern he has for her now… why are you crying? Please don't cry na… maan said.. . his voice choked while asking to her continuously…. He just hugged her immediately… cocooned her in his embrace forgetting all the barriers just crushed her fragile body in his strong arms…. After a while her cry went in low hiccups then her sobbing went in low whimpers…. Then she stopped crying but hug him resting her head on his heart place listening his heart beats which are beating rapidly seeing her condition.. he was just panicked suddenly and she was not replying but now his heart beats became a little normal feeling her calmness… after a while she broke out the hug and looked down feeling his gaze on her…. She can feel the heat of his intense gaze on hers…. She just set her flicks behind her ears… maan held her by her shoulders…

Maan-geet look at me… maan said to her with his softened voice… made her feel safe.. made her feel that now he will not shout on her…. She looked at him blinking her lashes couple of times which are wet due to crying….

Maan-why were you crying? He asked the straight question t her…. This time he don't want any misunderstanding between them…. She shook her head in no… nothing happened but maan is no where to listen her….. maan took her hand in his and asked again..kya hua jaan? She looked at him..in his eyes… he is s worried for her… he all wants only her well being …. She covered his hand with her other hand and kissed his hand…. Maan aap kabhi mujhe chhodke to nahi jaayenge na…. ?she looked at him hopefully… a fresh tears made their way in her eyes… he smiled at her.. he knew that she has a fear if he again went away leaving her behind… he move towards her little and kissed on her forehead….


Kabhi nahi…. Hamesha tumhare paas rahunga…. Maan said to her…. Sachi. She just asked like a kid .. and he replied like a mom replied to her child…. Muchi…. She hugged him immediately…. Achha tumne mujhe bataya nahi why were you crying? Maan asked her again…while caressing her head lovingly hoping that she will answer to him…. She broke out the hug and looked at him while playing with the buttons of his shirt…. Wo..wo I was scared…. And looked down…. Kyu geet? Did you saw any bad dream? Maan asked to her…. Wo… I was scared if you leave me again? I can't live without you maan… never…. She looked in his eyes showing her love for him...though she didn't confess her love to him but her love express in her every act… in her gestures… in her talks…everything she did, love express in that….jo nahi kahi thi dil ki baat…..aakhir wo zubaan par aa hi gayi….. I am sorry jaan… I also can't live without you.. I'll never leave you again…never ever…. Maan wiped her tears and again kissed on her forehead…. Just then their romantic broke out by the nurse who entered in the room without knocking…both suddenly back out from the hug feeling embarrassed …. Geet looked down and maan asked when I'll take her home? After half an hour..we are preparing discharge papers… nurse replied to maan….

Maan-ok….and looked at geet who is looking at the needle which is in her wrist's skin….maan hoping that she will calm down..don't create any drama… (last time you guys remember geet's drama she created in hospital when dadi admitted in the hospital)….

Nurse-excuse me…… these belongings are yours….we got these thing when we are checking her…. And she handed those things to geet….. she took her belongings from the nurse and nurse left from there…. Then geet took the taweez from them and rest belongings rest on her side… maan looked at her in curiosity…. Maan pehle promise me you will never leave me again while hugging him holding the taweez in her hand….


Geet asked to maan…. Haan baba I'll never leave you…. Maan replied…while caressing her head lovingly….

Maan-ye kya hai geet? He is looking at taweez….geet smiled at him and looked again at taweez remembering the maulvi's words… you know maan, today I met a baba in dargaah….he said that i will get my love soon and i got it… I am very happy…. She confessed her love unknowingly…calling him as her love…. He is overwhelmed…. Bina kahe hi sab keh diya…. Aisi hai maan ki geet….…. He has so much love for her in his eyes and he is looking at her with those eyes… and she is feeling also the love in his eyes...…. Just caressing the taweez and again remember the words of maulvi baba….. again said to maan…. And you know maan he also said that when I met with my love I made him wear this…he said that we'll never get separate after wearing this…


Kahi unkahi adhoori si thi jo dil ki baatein,

Aakhir unko unki manzil mil hi gayi….

a smile crept on his lips…. Seeing the immense love for him she has…!! Maan ko shabdo ki jarurat nahi hai geet ka pyaar pehchanne ke liye..bas kabhi-2 haalaat aise ho jate hai jo dekhkar bhi nahi dekh pate… he was very guilty for left her like this…aur waise bhi shabdo me kya rakha hai… ehsaas to dil se mehsoos kiya jata hai….

Geet-maan mai chahti hu ye ki aap ye taweez pehne..mere liye…. She showed him the taweez which is in her palm….


He looked at that for a moment…. Maan took the tawaaz from her hand and looked at it…



Maan-tumhare liye kuch bhi geet…. She smiled widely hearing his words that tumhare liye kuch bhi geet… maan bend his neck a little in front of her and she understood that what he wants…. She took the taweez in her hands made him wear in his neck…


he is just looking at her… she has so much believe in all this then how can he denied her..aur waise bhi abhi maan ne kaha tumhare liye kuch bhi geet…. Maan looked at taweez which is in his neck and hold it in his hand….


Iss taweez ne aaj hamein bandha hai geet….maan said…. Aur aaj ke baad hamesha baandhe rakhega…. Geet replied to him looking straight in his eyes….. maan forward his hand in front of her taking promise from her that we'll always be together….


Vaada…. Maan asked….. she nodded and replied..vaada…. and gave her hand in his..hold his hand for a life long…..


Maan asked hamesha ke liye? She goy some fresh tears in her eyes but because of so much happiness….. she replied immediately…hamesha ke liye……


geet ab se zindagi ki har subah tumse shuru hogi aur har raat se tumpar khatam… maan said to her….. she looked at him lovingly feeling the depth of his words…. Ab se zndagi ki har subah aapse shuru hogi ar har raat aap par khatam….. geet replied to maan…. And both hugged to each other again….


I love you geet….i really love you…. Mai bata nahi sakta ki mai tumse kitna pyaar karta hu….. shabd kam pad jayenge maan… aapki aankein bahut hai ye baatein batane ke liye….. and she kissed on his cheek….



Kabhi-2 ehsaas ka jatene ke liye shanbdo ki jarurat nahi hoti…

bas aankkhein hi kafi hoti hia unhe mehsoos karne ke liye…

And hid her face in his chest for hiding her blushing face from him but maan knew..he can sense her every gesture….. maan kissed on her head and embraced her fully in his strong arms….

(geet's side….)

Khawaabo me thaw o khayalo me tha,

Har dum har pal meri saanso me tha,

Dunndha karti thi jiska yaha waha,

Wo meri chhoti si duniya me shaamil tha,

Na jaane kaise jud gayi hum dono ki zindagi,

Ek anjana chehra ban gaya zindagi….

(a little try by me……)

I'll never ever leave you geet … and this is MAAN SINGH KHURANA's PROMISE… maan said to geet….. thank you so much maan meri zindagi me aane ke liye….. geet replied to maan while hugging to each other….. just then doc came there for her final check up….. both broke out the hug and doc remove the needle from her wrist but she didn't realize that needle is came out…. Wo to bas apne pyaar ke rang me rangi huyi thi…. Jo uski zindagi ban chuka hai…..

Doc-mr. khurana..she is fine now… just make sure that she will eat properly now onwards…. Maan nodded and geet made a puppy face..she knew maan will burst on her why she was not having anything….but now she is so much happy… if he will angry on her then it's ok…. No problem… she is al ready for taking his anger….

Doc-mr. khurana… you have to complete some formalities.. so please can you come with me?

Maan-ok doc… then he turned to geet resting his hand on her delicate cheek….. I'll be back..till then you take rest…ok… she nodded and maan gone for formalities…. He went to the reception and asked about the discharge papers…. And nurse asked him about the relation he has with the patient? Maan went blank for the moment…what to said but then replied that I am her husband…. (neha wondering that how fast maan is going.. just now he was confessing his love and now husband…. Maan babu slow down..nahi to romance gaya dustbin me…. ) then maan signed the papers…. And went back to his jaan… but what he saw she is sleeping peacefully…..


an unknown peace on her face.. no tension…. No restlessness…. Everything gone out… she has suffered a lot in past 2-3 days… first she was angry on him then realizing her love for him then he went to Mumbai… then the some kind of restlessness in her…. Knowing the truth…. And then a fear inside her for losing him…. But now everything is fine.. their misunderstandings has sort out.. she has no fear of losing him now… she found her love… not any restlessness in her… a refreshment in her…. After seeing her sleeping peacefully….a relaxing

Smile formed on maan's lips….


Now he is also in so much peace after getting her back in his life… his life became colorful after having her in his life…. MAAN SINGH KHURANA, a rough tough man who has no feelings, no emotions but today he was feared to losing his life..his jaan…. She awoke the some new emotions in him which he never knew that those emotions are exist in him or not…. She came in his life just like a miracle happen… he still remember when he saw her first in the park smiling and playing with kids & puppies… suddenly a small smile crept on his face…. Who always has a firm stern face but that day he was smiling…..when first time he saw in her eyes when both rolled down in the grass on the park when maan saved her from falling down..that was the best moment for him… in that moment he saw her very close to him.. felt her in his arms….

(maan's side..)

Namumkin tha jo MAAN SINGH KHURANA ke liye,

Mumkin kar dikhaya uski halki si muskaan ne,

Dekha jo pehli bar uski aankho mein,

To laga shayda yahi wo ,

Jo shaamil hogi meri zindagi mein…

(a little try by me……)

He went near her and sat beside her o the bed…. He took her hand in his and kissed it…. She felt his presence and woke up…. And found him near her…. She smiled and tried to sat up but maan stopped her and helped her….

Maan-geet…change your clothes… we have to go home… she smiled… and stood up with the help of maan and maan took her to the washroom… she went inside and maan stood outside…. (maan babu..don't think like that…. Wink wink…. Shaadi ke baad jana andar….aaarrraaam se…… hehehe… neha is going to be naughty…. lol)

Precap



Tell me friends hows it?

waiting for your response...

PMs at night...

again sorry for not giving according to the precap...actually i forgot that taweez wala scene and ur guess gave me some thoughts about this update... The credit of this update goes to all of you because of your sweet-2 comments and because of your guessing… this track came in my mind… otherwise…. Maine to kuch aur hi socha tha…… so please always do comments like this…..and give me new-2 ideas….. friends..tell me are you liking me writing style I mean I am not so much good in expressing the emotions but I am trying my best.. hope it is going well….?

All hindi dialogue baazi written by me….hehehe… that is my first try.. 😊so thoda jhel lena….. jayada pakaya to nahi na maine apni tuti futi shayari se?😆

How many of you think that i am going a Little bit slow in this ff? if you want then I can go fast with this ff and I'll finish this in around 10 parts...but if you thinks that my speed is ok then tell me…..finally i have done it...uff how many pics are there... oh god... i think 15-16...me wondering... !!!!!! gals..this is so long update so please me want a little long comments... and one req from my side... at-least do comment with 1-2 lines... ek word se i am unable to reach your thinking about my story...please...




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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update..
Without any magical words she expressed her love...
Maan completely removed the fear geet had for him..
Loved the small poem by you dear..
I think nw the confession part has gone to atleast 3 parts..
I want the story to b in next phase with more maaneet moments..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb confession so dreamy made me remember geet days
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part
long comment latter i will write
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Posted: 13 years ago
superrb and i love reading ur ffs
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Posted: 13 years ago
just loved it..
liked the way maan assured geet
thx for pm

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