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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry For so much Delay Guys i was busy with Exams and SAT's prep just Eat my head off and end up with a state where i don't get innovative.Nevermind i m so sorry for inconvinience and Thanks for wonderful support to me i haven't ever imagined this responce i own u all for this 🤗 😳and also you all kept asking for update😆😆.Here is installment_1 no PM because i will give update tommorow also so Just if someone get to check😆 he/she can read this part's installment or Will PM after updating tommorow😉Sorry for Typos's😃😉



PART 2-Picking Up the Pieces

She was heartbroken ,dejected by the bitter truth that She lost him, haziness surrounded her Vision tear brimmed eyes ,she Broked on ground as a fatal body ,a body without life crying her heart out. Her Doom was to fight for her life, and now for him ,again. She battled her life for him who was the only reason for sharajneet standing here live, But this reason was Dead ,She died seeing him in this state his red eyes,and the pain he was going through how can it be hidden from her, She can read his eyes ,His every emotions which his eyes for all time put the picture of his thoughts ,his anguish and agony. She don't have any identity to prove herself his shona.Neither she can tell her parents about Her and Swayam nor she has Kria,her bestest friend who was out for her Higher qualifications in Dance ,which was her passion and mine too . The beautiful feel was Dance,Which brought her and her Swayam together.Picking up the pieces of her hearts ,which was broken.she decisively Got up wiping her tear with only Resolution ,she will live for him ,she will make him smile ,she was known she was the reason for his Suffering,which unknowingly and unwillingly she has given him,She sat under the same tree Where they use to sit Together,Feeling beauty of the pleasant yet tempting feel which they were undergoing through earlier where they were Together she was re-living her beautiful days she spent with him,knowingly if she didn't get him back then she has to live with these moment which a beauty of Love Which was a new life to him and her , She was feeling the similar ache, a twinge in her heart she remembered how during her dance practices if just a small Hurt makes him so worried,It was clearly seen on his face ,Now what he's suffering through it and it is Just felt by me,He was dieing without her,This simple thought makes her Brokenhearted with feel of loss, What if she lose him again ,what if he takes any wrong step?

**

Sitting in a corner in Music Room with his Guitar,the only things that were flashing was that Girls face whom he collided with , every thing in his mind ends up with a Question mark! Why was she crying? How I feel a link up , a Resemblance ?But to whom? Why that Girl looks like my shona , Just a Difference of Face and little similar dressing?

Noo noo ,She can't be my shona .Never.! ,Swayam thought denying his a vagueness

As soon as Reh entered swayam lost in lane of his thought he Got worried,He was just unable to see his best buddy in such situation,he has seen swayam breaking infront of him,In weighed down with memories of her he was complete shattered.

Swayam just focus buddy , Which world You are in these day?? Reh questioned

We know Your missing her you can't live without her , but till when its 6 month already ??,Reality is bitter swayam but inevitabe ,You have to accept it.

A lone tear escaped From his Eyes, Regaining all his strength he focused on his Guitar practice ,He has accepted the fate with a hope ignited which is bleak aspect of his life, which he know will be fruitless.Yet he willing can't accept her to be dead.

**

She was a New girl now ,but her heart was same that beats for one person,She was known whatever may be ,how strong she could be ,if ever he will talk to her she would never be able to control her emotion ,she wouldn't be able to Hide herfeeling which was so strong for him.Yet she was very well known what will her next step.

It was 5 days for her in the college ,She have got many new friends who were actually her besties,Yet this has proved her back that her friends were one in a million who are simply sweethearts never let anyone be alone ,They were amicable and Kind hearted.Yet something was amiss nad that was very well known to her,She was a complete new girl ,Her dressing ,her hairstyle and everythings make her look different from sharanjeet ,yet today also many a times her acent and way to mixing up clearly seems to like her before,then to she was trying her level best to Not let anybody get that she was Sharajeet ,and now Sharon.

Today was a Ray of hope for her,if she gets selected in College cluster Singing with Dancing couple solo auditions and he will be opposite to him.Happiness was flashing with the tears of happiness paving there ways from her Greenish beautiful big round ogles .With a positive attitude on face, and faith.

**

Five days Of a new girl in the college ,He was just unaware of her name,Yet unknown feeling have engulfed him all around,Though he had convinced himself of that girl to be Stranger then to he finds himself so in sticky situation,Heart says To know her,Mind says How can he do this to his shona. Thinking of another girl except her shona was just a Sin and this time his Mind overpowers his heart Already.Yet he wants to Clearout his illusions ,Which were unreal for him, But real with some undefined Feel which was difficult for himself to figure out.

Everyday he observes, girl use to sit under same tree at corner where he and his shona use to sit,The place where hardly people sits ,she use to sit there many a times he have seen her lost and in some kind of Painful situation,yet he never tried to Get to know who is she?Many a times he has observed her glancing him continuously ,her eyes seems as if he knows her,Just a round beautiful greenish ogles And ever speaking which was way to her Thought and Feelings,Thinking this he felt deep desire to talk to her, and her feeling same longing was reflective on her eyes

**

It was sharon's trun to Dance and Sing ,And as she was a Just passionate towards dance and can sing well and good she got selected opposite him For the clusters solo ,She was happy as Destiny has given her one more chance to get her dreamz which she saw for her with him get fulfilled,A chance to live her life As earlier ,A chance to talk to him and being with him which was a heaven for her.

It First day of her rehersal,she was happy After 6 days she will finally talk to him.

(At rehersal hall)


Swayam,She's Sharon Your partner for clusters Solo couple performance and "Sharon,he's swayam Your partner,Mrs.Nicole dixit introduced them

Hii I m Sharon, Sharon rai prakash,Sharon forwarded his hand to swayam with a Attitude and boldness in his Voice Just different from his shona

He forwarded his hand in response,Swayam shekhawat' perplexed with his thoughts his assumption for her and just a mere flicker of thought of her being alike to shona was just Packed down to nothingness


You are Going to perform on kahin toh Hogi woh-Jaane tu ya jaane naa and Themeline will be a simple love story in with Girl and a Boy, where Girl is dead and Boy have to express His pain in Song showing flashbacks ,You both will be performing fashbacks in song of there beautiful days when they were together,How they met how they fell for each other',Mrs.Nicole Dixit Explained

Swayam was Just nostalgic,may be it a play theme but his life was also on same boat,She was gone and His life was just passing on and on with the memories or those days they spent together.


On the other hand Sharon was standing noticing his every expression,Reading them a lone tear just escaped her eyes..


Sharon,Ohh God you're a really crying I know girl it's a sad story yet I m confident that u and Swayam will bring out best of it, Seeing her sobbing Mrs. Dixit Comforted her.


I know it's a Sad story,Without a happy ending Guys but,Trust me this story will be worth intresting to see and also it's a different aspect of life ,many people suffer's through it also,It is not vaiable that a Love story always have a happy ending ,Mrs.Dixit shed light on the Themeline.


We completely understand Mam And I assure we'll do justice to characters, Sharon tried to confide Mrs.Dixit

**

(NOTE-These Paragraph are written as Swayam's POV )

It was First day of rehearsals her with him,At first look She was normal down to earth girl for him ,unlike many girls of her age ,she was entirely different as her shona was Quite ,understanding ,lively at times a simple girl.


It was difficult for him to Get muddle up with her,Being Together with him gives him a out of the ordinary feel,which was very arduous to figure by himself,he was in vicious circle of Mix feeling Entraped in it .


Swayam,I was saying Lets go through contemprary and Free style mix ,I know we will perform on sad song so contemprory will make it more effective and Proper emotions will bind up audiences ,Sharon said


I agree with You,I want to show intensity ,the closeness they have,How much it Just Hurt when someone You love is lost,I can understand better me and my ,He paused for a minutes as he was back in sense from depth of thoughts of his and his shona ,I mean as mine favourite couple romeo and Juliet,He was known he badly failed to hide his welled up eyes and soreness in his voice.


I agree swayam, Romeo and Juliet are mine favourite to,I can just understand what you feel about this themeline.,she said

He looks her with a questioned eyes's?


I mean I know this themeline is different and sad it has loss, dejection so Your take are correct we shall go with comtemprory,She tried mould her words which she spilled out in flow of emotions inside her.


As they were practicing ,He twirled her and Matching rhythm in rhythms both were practicing ,There was a Complete awkwardness between them ,which was affecting there performance


As he held her hand,He just felt unusual ,Touch was spine tingling,and Known to Him,It was unusual he can feel her ,Her every frown and expression on her face , sparkle in her eyes ,as he touched her it made him captivated at the moment he was lost


As they moving making moves just making ,lost in her eyes,he felt that he got his lost shona he was getting a asure it was her shona.He felt his soul connected to her ,it was Giving him traces of her soul.


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Here you go with Part -2 Guys i m not so satisfied with how it turned though Please Comment and if any inconvinience or shortage of time "LIKE" tab,please like it .It means a lot and secondly all Appriciations and Faults are welcome.

Siddhi😳





Edited by -RosyAzure- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update..
Please PM me when you update next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ITS AWESOME YAAR..PLLSSS PM ME WEN UPDATE THE NEXT PART..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this was amazing siddhi :) finally u updated and the wait was worth it !! i loved how shona has made up her mind to bring the smile back on swayams face but being sharon ... awesome :) update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeths_swaron

ITS AWESOME YAAR..PLLSSS PM ME WEN UPDATE THE NEXT PART..

😳Thanks please press like tab also,And thanks for comment 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Are you kidding me?
This was written just superb!!!!wow...all feelings so perfectly expressed..
waiting for next part.
PS edited my comment abt part 1 on pg 7
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is amazing rosy...
thanks a lot for the pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: achuAR

this is amazing rosy...

thanks a lot for the pm 😊

😃Achu i m Siddhi😳 and Thanks 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely uipdate siddi.
It was gr8 readin itr.
Swyama feelin Shona lovely.
thanks for pm.
update next part soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing update ! Thanks for the PM ! Update soon 😊

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