OS: Mangalsutra (the wedding chain) updated

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys This is my short os corner

The links below are the list of short OS on current tracks...I dont want to make separate threads for this so clubbed in in one...thanks for reading


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arnav was working on his lappy...when khushi burged into her room in GH

She flicked here and there..almost taken out all the clothes from the almirah...

Dropped all the pillows and the comforters...

Khushi: Hey DM, meine kahan rakh diya hai?

Arnav was getting pissed by her attitude roaming here and there in the room...disturbing him in his work...he was not able to concentrate while khushi having her monologues...

Buaji: Arrey titiliya...kya kar rahi hoon? arnav babuya ko kaam karne kyun nahi de rahi hoon? tumko bola tha na maine...tumko mil jayega...itna chinta ki kono baat nahi...

Arnav: What happened buaji?

Buaji: Ab kya batayen babua...yeh sanka devi apna magalsutra goom kardi...aur ab nahi mil rahi hai...subha se ro ro ke paresaan ho gai hai...

Arnav: What crap...dusra kareedlo...

Khushi: Aapko pata bhi hai aap kya bol rahe hai? Mangalsutra hai koi blue tooth nahi...jo jab chaho khareed lo...

Arnav: What is the difference khushi? ek kaan mein lagate hai and ek gale meye latakta hai...waise you are right blue tooth is more useful than mangalsutra...

Khushi: Please arnav ji aap please apna kaam kariye...aur humme apna kaam karne dijiye...

She came near the laptop bag and picked it up...

Arnav: What the khushi...what are you trying to do?

Khushi who was now crying...went mad...arnav ji...have you seen my mangalsutra?

Arnav: No he screamed...

Khushi lost all her hopes and sat on the bed...

Arnav: Why the hell are you crying khushi?...its just a mangalsutra...

Khushi: No arnav ji you dont understand...as you dont ever care about marriage...you dont know how important is it to be on a suhagan...we were it for the husband's long life...

Arnav: What crap khushi...a simple mangalsutra cant do any harm to me ok...so stop being a kid...aur waise bhi...i guess if that is so then you will be the happiest person in this world...tumhara plan jo kamiyab ho jayega...if i die soon...he turned around to go...

Khushi grabbed his shoulder and turned him around...and hugged him tightly...

Khushi: How could you tell this arnav ji?...sobs...How can you die before me?...sobs... you just cant...sobs. dont ever utter those words in your mouth again...before anything touches you i will take it on me...sobs...maybe this marriage is meaningless for you but i am going to obey all the kasams for the rest of my life...you are my husband and now even you cannot change it...it is destined...you want to leave me you leave me but dont ever talk about your death...sobs...I want to die suhagan...bus ab yehi kwaish reh gei hai DM se...she hugged him tighter...

Arnav: Khushi! caring her head...khushi listen to me...there is nothing to get so emotional...ok...he put his hand in his pocket and handed over her mangalsutra to her...

Khushi: yeh...yeh aapke paas tha...

Arnav: Ya...it got stuck on my t-shirt yesterday...

Khushi: Achha...how come?

Arnav: Woh...woh (while arnav hugged her yesterday night while she slept) tum theek se kahan soti ho? har waqt mujhpe chadke soti hoon to aur kya hoga...you better sleep properly otherwise i will give you one rafta...

Khushi: went happily near her dressing table and wore the mangalsutra after taking blessings from DM and applied her sindoor...some of which fell on her nose...

She came near arnav and touched his feet...arnav was about to fall when she grabbed him...

Arnav: Pagal Ho gayi ho? Kya kar rahi thi?

Khushi: Aapke peye cho rahi thi...amma kehte hai agaar sindoor ya mangalsutra nichey gir jata hai to pati dev ki umaar kam ho jati hi...so when you wear it after that you should touch his feet...so i did...and she smiled

Arnav: Pagal ho tum...

Khushi: Aur aap bhi kuch kam nahi ho...kyun tang kiya subha se?pehle bhi to de sakte the

Arnav: Tag karna kya sirf tumhara haq hai...he smirked.

I know it was bad...so random...sorry
Edited by Appy_Indy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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can i res?? 😳

EDIT:
khushi behaved like a typical SP bahu in this one!!! 😆
Edited by L4Luvbug - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear, you really must change the title to add the correct fiction type: OS/SS/FF
It's very misleading... I thought you found a replica of Khushi's mangalsutra in the market or something! 😆
Well, production house IS on a tight budget yaar! 😆
Edited by Chimpsy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chimpsy

Dear, you really must change the title to add the correct fiction type: OS/SS/FF

It's very misleading... I thought you found a replica of Khushi's mangalsutra in the market or something! 😆
Well, production house IS on a tight budget yaar! 😆


Lolz sorry...
I thought you found a replica of Khushi's mangalsutra in the market or something! 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lara3110

Superb, excellent, 👏


glad that you have liked it
Posted: 13 years ago
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ITZ NOT @ ALL BAD.I LOVED IT N PLZ CONTINUE😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so beautiful and cute os
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww.. That was really sweet... Loved it! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So sweet... Loved it👏👏so our naughty Arnav is back😉 kyu tang karte ho hamari titliya ko😆EDIT
Take some rest darling...no need to write and pm us...we can wait till u r fully fit...
Edited by ann123 - 13 years ago

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