FF:Pyaar Hai Ya Sazaa NOTE- pg.20

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Was watching jab We Met so this idea came to my mind. Hope you like it cause I'm not an expert in writing FF's
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Part 1-
Arnav was walking on the streets of Dehli, without noticing what was happening around him. He was lost. The episode which just took place a few minutes ago recollected in his vision and mind. Every bit of that incident pinched him in is soul. He couldn't bear the pain, so he left , from his father's house in which he stayed.

( It's something about the past, which I'll disclose soon )

While Khushi was running on the road to get to the train station. Running behind her were her friends carrying her luggage.

Soon Arnav came across a train station, He thought why not I escape and start a new life. Nothing was left. His family had died. His mother,Di, Nani,Mami,Mama etc. Only his father was alive , but he had a dark secret.

Khushi stepped into the train and bid bye to her friends.

While Arnav bought tickets for Lucknow as they were only available.He too stepped onto the train and sat on his seat. Sitting opposite him was Khushi.

Khushi starting asking questions to Arnav, but Arnav refused to answer and kept quiet. At last Khushi was getting on his nerves and Arnav shouted:

A- Stop it! who ever you are your blabbering from the past 20 minutes, Stop it Please.

K-But I was only...

A-Stop it!!

Khushi was about to say something when Arnav put his finger on her lips.

(As you all know Rabba Ve started and they shared a eye-lock)

The rest of the night on the journey to Lucknow went by fast.

It was morning now and Arnav woke up and found everyone getting down the train.But opposite him was sleeping Khushi.Her face looking like a angel,her inncone, her face shinning etc.He felt guilty as to shout her last night.He wanted to say sorry.

Arnav went near her and woke her up.Khushi opened her eyes and found Arnav standing in front on her.

K-You!

A-Yeah me! Get up sleepy head our stop is here.

K-OUR!

A- I mean Lucknow.

K- Oh! Thank you.

Khushi was taking down the luggage but when she reached for the heavy bag , it was about to fall and Arnav came and saved her. She bounced into his chest and Arnav saved the bag from falling.

(Again Rabbe Ve)

A-You can't even do anything properly.

K-I can Okay! Mr. ( Khushi stopped as she didn't know his name)

A-Mr.Arnav Singh Raizada.

K-Mr.ASR the owner of AR company.

A-Yes! Now get down the train or your'll miss the chance to get down.

Khushi stepped down the train.She searched for Arnav as she wanted to say Thank you for saving the bag to fall down.As well Arnav was finding Khushi in the big crowd to say Sorry to Khushi.

At last they found each other.

Khushi and Arnav said together- 'I wanted to say'... they stated to laugh

Khushi was dumbstruck to see Arnav laughing.But Arnav had to laugh cause Khushi was a girl who could make everyone laugh.

A-You tell first.

K-No you.

A-No you.

K-Okay! I wanted to say Thank you for saving my bag to fall.

A-Ahh! that's nothing , its my pleasure and I wanted to say Sorry for shouting at you last night.I didn't mean to , I don't know it just happened.

K- That's okay!

( Khushi held out her hand and said )

Friends!

A- Arnav thought for a moment ' I have to start a new life , forhet the past and try not to be rude'

Aranv held out his hand too and said FRIENDS.

K-So that's like a nice friend. Hi I'm Khushi.

A-And I'm ...

K-Mr.Arnav Singh Raizada.

A-No! I'm Arnav you can call me Arnav after all we'll friends now.

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Will this friendship just be friendship or more than that.

Wait untill you find out.

I hope It wasn't long and boring.

if you want a Precap - I want the thread to get to 5 pages untill I go to sleep at 12 PM (IST)

Bye for now!

See ya

Azrah,
ASR

Part 1 - Page 1

Part 2- page 4

part 3 -page 7

part 4- page 9

part 5- page 13

part 6- page 15

part 7-page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh wow, Nice and cute beggining<3

Love it (:

Aww! Arnav has a past :( and YAYAYAY he met Khushi😆

Update soon and do PM me😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res !! :)
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Wow azrah an FF by u !!!
Lovely start !! 😃
Liked the concept !! Can't wait to knw wht is arnav's Dark Past !!
will be looking forward to this FF !! and continue soon coz i will be waiting for the nxt part 😛

xxx
Rafid

Edited by .....Rafid..... - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow awesome FF just like jab we met but different luv it :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely FF :)) PM me when eva u will update... :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww it was amazing thanks for the pm and keep pm-ing me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cute beginning x
Wonder whts Arnav's past ??
Loved their 1st meeting :)
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...
continue soon..

thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its nice yar!

in starting i thought it to be like "jab we met" but it seems changed!..interesting!
cont soon!

i have examz on my head,if i give late response then plz forgive me lol!


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Posted: 13 years ago
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AMAZING!!!!! PLEASE PM me when you write the next part!!! :)

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