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Samiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Inked
DO please continue.
You have the beginning of an intense, conflict-filled, passionate story here.
I especially love that he can't stay away from her sexually even though he feels betrayed by her.
I know--I'm a bit of a sicko! I'd love to hear more about how Khushi felt about this.

Maya thank you soo much🤗... I have never written any passionate scenes before... I'll try my best this time😊

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Samiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweetlove4barun
waow👏👏👏

1stly congrats for becoming a goldie

2ndly it was just awesome...👏👏👏

mills and boons type story never seemed so interesting

but this is like lovely

so plz plz plz cont soon

and plz plz plz pm me 😳

thanks a lot dear 😃

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Samiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: vikaluvsmish
Nice start.. from the very beginning a very intense, gripping touch to the characters.. so much.. in the first.. can't wait to read. what u have in store next... like the title says.. the passion still prob burns in arnav...

Do continue.. please:)

thanks a lot Vika... 😊... Plz update Dreams Do Come True... you left us at such a cliffhanger... I want to know what happens next😃