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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG Ye kya ho gaya:O hope everything will be fine soon,... Love Veer and Ananya:-):-) very well written dear:-) SuPERB:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnk god
ud to mila iska 😊
di is bar chote cmnt se kam chalo
tbiyat kharab h bachche ki
wt a twist 👍🏼
ye dono to ek dusre k jani dusman bn gye
bt h to ek dusre k jigar da tukada hi 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

that was really amazing n superb part..

oh so both r going through tough time..

cont. soon..

it would be interesting...seeing them against each other..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice n interesting
loved the new twist

continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update both are responsible for breaking their beautiful relation hope they will understand their mistake soon.thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for late commenting Dhanvi 😕
Thank you for updating this 😛 😛
Nice update , 👏
but what Anu slapped veer 😲 😲
seperation of Anu n Veer ,😭
no this should not be happened 😕
pls pls Dhanvi , erase their mis understanding😊
cannot see them seperated 😭
waiting for anun Veer's pachup 😛
update soon ⭐️
waiting 😍
love u ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for update n pm
sorry for late reply!!
u updated this after long time
was missing any n veer
liked update
as u gave precap it was expected to happen
but i m happy tht they meet again
liked this twist
any took stone to hit veer but injured herself tht was funny
now will have more exciting n interesting parts
Edited by shruja - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago



Part 24



Ananya was busy sipping tea when she got an invitation for the party...

Manager "maam, this is for you"

Ananya "thanks"

she opened the envelope...

Ananya " 'Dance party in town' wow...that's interesting...at least this boring place is having something interesting..."



*****



Veer "no Dad...why should I go ???...you know I hate going to parties"

Khushwant "listen Veer...its a good chance to interact with other hotel owners and competitors...now don't waste time on the phone...just get ready to go"

Veer wasn't happy "fine" he kept the phone silently...

he said to himself "i hate parties...to hell with these high class parties..."



*****



Lavanya Hotels



Lavanya entered the main hall...the owner of Lavanya hotels...she was engaged to her boyfriend Sidhu... who is an industrialist... there was so many guests, who were drinking and enjoying the party...it was for all the hotel owners in the town...



Ananya "Ananya Chadha..."

Priyanshu "nice name...so you look after your hotel by your own??"

Ananya "of course..."

Priyanshu "oh ok...do you need a drink..??? you aren't drinking anything..."

Ananya "no thanks...i will help myself..."

Priyanshu "by the way...you must come and see my hotel...its not far from here...hotel President"

Ananya "sure...please excuse me"

Ananya went towards the bar...

she looked around... "can I have one..."

she stopped...and thought something... "one soft drink please"

the waiter served her...



Ananya glanced at Lavanya and her boyfriend... "wow...nice...at least some people are together..."



Veer entered and looked around...

Rani saw him "hi mr Veer..."

Veer "hi"

Rani "do you remember me??? you saved me life"

Veer "oh yes...so you have a hotel here??"

Rani "no no...i am Lavanya's sister..."

Veer "ok..."

Rani "come have something to drink"

Veer "no thanks...i am fine..."

Rani "no no...please come with me..."

they reached the bar...

Rani smiled at Veer "what will you have Veer???"

Ananya was sitting next to her...she turned to look ….it was Veer...

she was furious...

Veer saw her... and smiled at Rani "well I can have orange juice"

Ananya taunted him "what else can you have???"

Veer "who is talking to you??"

Ananya stood up from the bar chair "enjoy your...orange juice"

she walked towards the dance floor...



Veer was talking to Rani but his eyes were searching for her...

After some time he saw Ananya dancing with some other boy...

Priyanshu "well I love these parties...its a good way to meet new people"

Ananya "hmmm" she said but looked at Veer...

Veer stared at Priyanshu and Ananya...

in the meantime Rani asked for a dance with Veer...he didn't wanted to dance but agreed...

Ananya saw him curling his arms around Rani's waist...and talking to her...she was mad...

she immediately left the dance floor and walked towards the bar...

"one vodka" she said...

one after another...she continuously had many shots... after which she found herself unable to walk...

she was about to fall when Priyanshu came running towards her...but before he could reach Veer held her tightly in his arms...

he looked at her and took her out of the party...

Priyanshu "she's my friend...i will drop her..."

Veer "she's my girlfriend...now just leave"

Priyanshu was quiet and left...

Veer helped her sit in the car...and drove towards his hotel... he knew she was his competitor now...he remembered the time when they used to go to parties...

he lifted her in his arms and took her inside the hotel...

Veer "arrange a room for her...she's my guest..."

Manager "sir guest room is open..."

Veer took her towards the guest room and put her on the bed...

he looked at her innocent face "my wild cat" he said and walked out of the room...





*****





Next morning...



Ananya opened her eyes, she looked around... "where the hell have I come???"

she looked outside the window...all she could see was the beautiful surrounding...

she came out of the room...

Ananya approached the manager "who brought me here???"

Manager "maam...our sir...he said you were his guest..."

Ananya "your sir...hmmm" she thought about Priyanshu... "alright...tell you sir I am leaving now and thank you very much for help..."

she left the hotel...



Veer was working in his office when the manager called him... "sir your guest has vacated the room"

Veer "good...otherwise I would have asked her..."

manager was surprised...

After some time...



Veer walked towards the valley... when he saw her... he was about to turn towards the other side...

Ananya "wait...what do you think of yourself???"

Veer "i don't want to talk to you...leave me"

Ananya "i won't...i mean how can you dance with any girl who asks you???"

Veer "look...its my life and I can dance, talk or do whatever I want with any girl"

Ananya mouth was wide opened "what???? what did you say??? you will do anything with any other girl???"

Veer "yes...do you have a problem???"

Ananya "yes I do...that's not fair...you have never done that anything with me...and you will do anything with other girls..."

Veer "just stop your nonsense...and grow up"

Ananya "how could you say that..." she hold his collar...

Veer "leave me..."

Ananya "no...i won't...how easily you forgot everything...you forgot me...you didn't even thought once about me...??"

Veer "did you thought before slapping me???"

Ananya "oh...so you have a problem that I slapped you???"

Veer "just leave...everything is over Ananya..."

Ananya "right...everything is over..." she walked towards the cliff...

Veer "now where are you going???"

Ananya "i am going to die"

Veer "good..." he said and walked away...

Ananya kept on walking towards the cliff...she didn't stop neither she looked back...

Veer heard a sound of some small stones falling from the cliff...he turned around...

Veer "Ananya...stop" he came rushing towards her

Ananya didn't stop and was about to jump when Veer hold her hand...

Ananya turned back "leave my hand Veer" with tears in her eyes...

Veer "no I won't..." he pulled her towards himself...

both looked at each other and tightly embraced... he wiped her tears...

Ananya "i am sorry Veer..." she kissed him...


_*****



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Posted: 13 years ago
Waooo mst ud ji [:D/]
akhir veer or annaya mil hi gye 👍🏼
Vo to hona hi tha
abi chote cmnt se hi kaam chlao ji
Edited by princesspriyart - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😳

reso jii!
~~**EDITED**~~
yeh party party party...🥳...
awesome.
at last SHE kissed😍, lets see if he kiss too???
well he won't be able resist her of course!

i hate parties,🤔 bt i love treats...😳...
i just loved this ud.🤗

isske liye aapko liye ek gift h😳
u told na u love chocolates so here it is-
i noe for today, just today ma comment is gona be ur most fav coz it hav the chocolate!

okay, i told u na ananya wud hav left alcohol...
but imp. is she still didn't left veer.
she remembered him while ordering for juice again.😳

she looked around... "can I have one..."

she stopped...and thought something... "one soft drink please"

the waiter served her...


god that jealousy jealousy part was ma most fav.

loved it like hell.👏


so ananya back to veer's ananya!☺️

she immediately left the dance floor and walked towards the bar...

"one vodka" she said...

dis is veer's ananya!😆

Priyanshu "she's my friend...i will drop her..."

Veer "she's my girlfriend...now just leave"~~blush, blush, blush!☺️~~ lovd this one,

aapko pata h, poora ud ek taraf, n this line one side.

it rocked.

lov it lov it lov it!🤗

he looked at her innocent face "my wild cat" he said(this part is good)😳 and walked out of the room..(dis is not done yaar!)🥺


anu its not dat screwed up priyanshu, it veer! who care 4 u still n brought to his hotel wid claiming u as his gf.☺️


Veer "good...otherwise I would have asked her..."

manager was surprised... veer u said this, but i surely noe u can't, u can neva tell anu do go away frm u frm heart! sayin this burns ur heart i noe,

just like here, u did-the following scene!😳


Veer walked towards the valley... when he saw her... he was about to turn towards the other side...(he is trying ignore her!😲)

Ananya "wait...what do you think of yourself???"..(yeh! anu boli, ab tho veer ko vaps turn hona padega!)😳

Veer "i don't want to talk to you...leave me"...(again!😡 mana rhi h na anu tumhe, thn why dis mauch bhavv(attitude))

Ananya "i won't...i mean how can you dance with any girl who asks you???"...(she is jealous, burnt to ash)😉

Veer "look...its my life and I can dance, talk or do whatever I want with any girl"....(no u can't except anu!)😡

Ananya mouth was wide opened "what???? what did you say??? you will do anything with any other girl???".....(yes he said that! anu smooch him n make him realise dat he can't)☺️

Veer "yes...do you have a problem???"......(yes, me and anu both have problem)

Ananya "yes I do...that's not fair...you have never done that anything with me...and you will do anything with other girls..."......(🤣😆🤣i stand for her, she is awesome,🤗lov her alot.mindblasting ananya!.....dat's y she is veer's ananya!''👍🏼


Veer "just stop your nonsense...and grow up"....(she don't need to, u r wid her to care 4 her, rite?😉)

Ananya "how could you say that..." she hold his collar...(she hold his collar, dat means they r close😍)

Veer "leave me...".....(she can't)

Ananya "no...i won't...how easily you forgot everything...you forgot me...you didn't even thought once about me...??"(see i told u na she will not laeve ur collar!😳 naughty gal like me!...🥺.bandi emotional ho gayi!😳)

Veer "did you thought before slapping me???".....(veer plz forget it! she din do it intentionally)

Ananya "oh...so you have a problem that I slapped you???"...(anu evn u shud hv controlled😭)

Veer "just leave...everything is over Ananya...".....(don't say dat veer! its a new beginning😳)

Ananya "right...everything is over..." she walked towards the cliff...(she is going to suicide! this soon!...abhi tho uske babies☺️ bhi nhi hoe h!...☺️...sorry 4 this useless reason,🤪 cudn't thnk of another one!🤣)

Veer "now where are you going???"....(he is worried)

Ananya "i am going to die"......(really?😲)

Veer "good..." he said and walked away...(ooohhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! he walked away, lekin don't worry just abhi palte ga!, palat palat palat!-DDLJ SCENE😳)

Ananya kept on walking towards the cliff...she didn't stop neither she looked back...

Veer heard a sound of some small stones falling from the cliff...he turned around...(palat gyaaa!!!!!!!!!!🥳)

Veer "Ananya...stop" he came rushing towards her..(RUN RUN😎RUN)

Ananya didn't stop and was about to jump when Veer hold her hand...(shukar h bach gyi)

Ananya turned back "leave my hand Veer" with tears in her eyes...(she is being sentimental😭)

Veer "no I won't..." he pulled her towards himself...(kinna accha😳dialogue h...so romantic)

both looked at each other and tightly embraced... he wiped her tears...(so romantic again😳)

Ananya "i am sorry Veer..." she kissed him..(now wat..😕...why did u stopped here di.😡,why🥺.)


ud sooper dooper soon!😃

u tease us, but u noe i still 🤗love u!😳





Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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