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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meevee

Amazing update, but then Kriyaansh hav to be so...luvd teh way u described Rey's flow of thoughts


Wuld luv to hav a PM now on if u dont mind, hav added u on my buddy list😊


thanks dear!! u are added in my buddy list now.. will definitely PM u!!


Originally posted by: asmaju

wow anki di it was awesome.

loved it to the core.
u described each and every part so well.
Amazing.
Mindblowing.
Wonderful nd all other words add to it.
Thanks for the pm.
Update soon.


thanks asma!!! m happy u loved it so much!!

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

I love caramel now and that was amazing thanks for the pm and continue soon anky


awww shivs.. thank youuu... even i love caramel!!! 😉


Originally posted by: --Kinjal--

Caramel...ahhh
awesomeee starts...
Lovd ur lines train reaching dangerous stations...lolz
cont asap...waiting 4 d nxt 1
thanx 4 d pm


thanks sooo much kinjal!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

it was awesome...loved it very much

recky messaging scenes were superb
and kriyansh fire exit scenes were magical
loved it very very very much
continue soon waiting eagerly for next part


thanks sooo much!! m really glad u loved it!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: binx-D3

Anks it was insanely awesome!! I love it, fantastic, outstanding would all just not be enough to be describe how great this was!! Gosh it took me into complete flashback mode! I could totally imagine that dreamy look on Rey's face, the way he used to get so mesmerized by Kria's beauty, so totally lost in her. And then of course our totally jhagdalu kria, jiske naak pe humesha gussa baitha rehta hai...god anks iv missed all of this so much!! The nok-jhok , the chori chipe romance! Loved it so much! But the highlight was the Rey - Vicky part u wrote...I literally went mad laughing!! The lipgloss part was hilarious!! I didn't even know guys know the diference between flavours :P :P
Anks it was just too too baap!! I had a really hard time finding only one fav line but still...
Fav line - Rey knew what exactly Vicky wanted. Rey himself was on the advanced stages of that syndrome.
Thanks to Vicky, now that was all he was thinking about too. Peach? Mint? Cherry? (Bahahahahahhahahahahahah)

P.S : prerna the banner is amazing... Love the way uv designed it!! Its really pretty.


I have my fingers crossed dis tym.. as u know already i changed the ending at d last minute.. i hope u love it as much as u loved the first part binx!!! Love uuu!!!

Originally posted by: cheersona1

res..

Mi Amore, my love , it was truly a Kriyansh update...dats our Kriyansh...dats how we want to fondly remember them...thaks love for writing this update...it reminds me of the intial days..how Rey used to be besotted by Kria...sighh good old days...
Caramel...ummm...dat was a nice metaphor...me supa likes...
Keep writing more and help us in keeping our Kriyansh alive...mwaahhh...



shona pucchiii!!! m sooo happy u love it!!! and even though i know how busy u r nowadays.. but i hope u read d next update today itself too!!

Originally posted by: maddieee

anki seriously i am telling you this is one of the best stuff i have read in recent times👏... such good writing,real proud of u sweety🤗... teri haath ko chum lu main❤️... waah mazaa aagaya padhke... i read it twice already😊... this is very refreshing i must say... it's fantastically fabulous👏


thankuuu mads!!! Love Ya loads!!! Muaaahhh!!! tujhe long drive pe kiske saath jaana hai baby??😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely7010

its Amazing!!!!!!!!
awww rey thinking abt kriya in the class n vicky trying to divert him...
n just luved their fire exit part it reminded me of all the kriyansh moments in the fire exit...
Its beautifully written


thanks sooo much!!! 😛😊😃


thanks chetu!! aur inna chota comment? nxt update mei bada comment karna!!

Originally posted by: star94

Wow.. U write like a pro..
Continue it soon n pm me


thankuuu!!!

Originally posted by: arshalover26

Hi anki i m 1st time commenting on ur update. i have read previous ones but only as a guest. 1st of all thanks for the pm and writing something for our kriyansh. i m really missing them alot. u r an awesome writer and feel pleasure to comment on this things. can u plz wrote something for our loving arsha bez i am a die heart fan of them and really evan a small things related to them made me crazy.


hey there!! its always nice to have a new reader!! will surely write something on arsha.. and when i do, will definitely PM u.. thanks for loving dis update too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Toh mera ek kaam kar, tu chali ja niks ke sath. Waise bhi muh phulakar baitha hai woh y kya hua use? tune drive pe Jane ke Liye manaa kar diya kya? Hain. Kyunki agar dad ya hitler ko pata chala na toh bina baaraat ke meri band bajegi. Meine bola usko ki ghar se permission nahi milegi meko. Bas tabhi se baat nahi kar raha manale usko neethu... try lipgloss of a tempting flavourflavour
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: HPmaniac

😃😃 dekha, iss baar I'm not late!!! and I'm so glad! this made my day! I mean uh,night? jo bhi hai...

first things first, the title...Spanish! simple and beautiful title, I love it... and the banner is pretty awesome too...

and chapter 1... it had d same effect on me as all ur ff's always do...when I reached d end I wanted to read more... and so I've already read d chapter 3 times :P

I love ur writing style...and this chapter was light n fun and humorous...and perfectly KriYaansh!!! nothing serious, like it used to be once upon a time... good old days...
and I loved Vicky too!!! just as he used to be... lol, strawberry...u put in a lot of thought over all d details, don't you? strawberry is perfect for Neha... just like caramel is perfect for Kriya!

this chapter was...perfect! while I was reading, the events played out in my mind... and it was like I got my KriYaansh back for some time there... so thank you!

can't wait to read more!!!


chal finally!! kuch toh hai joh maine likha aur tune ussi din padha!!! aur comment bhi kia!!

i wish you would read the next update soon too!! hheheheehe!!

I loved loved loved ur comment..!! thank you so much for appreciating d SS sarah!! muaaahhh!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SanjArShi-ASR

Wow anky new SS...thats awsome ...rey is fully lattooo over kria i liked it...yaar i missed our kriyaansh so much thire cute nokzok and fights and haan famous llhh2 aur ye vicky hamesha hi bich me aa jata hai yaar aur khud ki bari aayi toh kho gaya neha ke khsyalo me...but its was amazing update anky...


thank you sooo much sanj!!! bas aage bhi aise hi comment karti raha kar!! and all d best for ur xams love!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maddieee

Toh mera ek kaam kar, tu chali ja niks ke sath. Waise bhi muh phulakar baitha hai woh

y kya hua use? tune drive pe Jane ke Liye manaa kar diya kya? Hain. Kyunki agar dad ya hitler ko pata chala na toh bina baaraat ke meri band bajegi. Meine bola usko ki ghar se permission nahi milegi meko. Bas tabhi se baat nahi kar raha manale usko neethu... try lipgloss of a tempting flavourflavour Chiii gandi ladki
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tish18

O. M. G !!

what a start!!!
wait, lemme catch my breath.😃
*breathing*
*breathing*
*breathing*
That was a super duper update... needless to say, a beautifully written one!😃
i loved each and every word of it!!
thanks for taking me back to the old times... i had'nt realized i was missing d3 so much😔... but no, i cant watch the current track... hota hi nahi hai... but i really enjoyed going back to the past... the modified past ofcz... kyun ke itna accha toh main cinevistas se expect kar hi nahi sakti.😍
You keep telling me, but have you ever considered taking up writing as a profession?... please dont let this talent go to waste... you really must😊... aur mera ek kaam kardo please, make your new boss read atleast one of your chapters... pakka he/she will grant you leaves for writting more😉😆... and what do you know, one day i might just pop in at one of your book launches.😃
Amen.
Thank you for starting such a lovely SS.
I love you!!⭐️


tish, m not dat good a writer baby.. toh meko civil engineer banne se hi kaam chalaana padha!!😉
i am yet to start my job.. isiliye toh update kar paa rahi hu.. hehehehe... uske baad toh bhagwaan bharose hoga.. i hope uske pehle kuch acche updates de du!!
Love u tooo!!! thanks for appreciating!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anniemathias

annkit trust me u took my breath it was mindblowing thanks for ur ss after a long time i just loved ur post and the last part of caremel it was just great u r fabulous


thanks sooo much!!

Originally posted by: aishasully

woww awssome poor rey he wantedd 2 telll somthng to her but bicharo couldnt say iittt poor himm haah update next tymm


thankss!!!

Originally posted by: perfectangel

awesome work ankyy dii 👏 🤗


u r really talented 😳

update soon 😊


thank you sooo much angel doll!! love u!!!

Originally posted by: Saumya_D3

awww...how sweet..!! i l;ove ittt..!!!!!!!!

please PM me when u update next..!!!


thanks saumya!! will definitely PM u!!!


thanks!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels

Kya baat hai anks!

what a start to the SS!!!
absolutely loved every little bit of it!
i see ur on ur ASR streak as well?!
"What the'" She screamed out. 🤣
Arnav Singh Raizada hai hi itna sexy ki he is always subconciously present in our heads 😉
u better continue this super fast cuz i cant wait to see what'll happen next! ur depiction of Kriyansh was perfect!
jaldi continue karna 😃
LOVE YOU ANKS! 🤗


my hot pink heels!! love u for the comment!!! obviously ASR dil dimaag sab jagah baitha rehta hai ab toh.. bahar hi nahi nikalta.. kya karun!! hehehehe!!

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