SwaRon Outburst scene My version ;)

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SwaRon Outburst scene – My version 😳

I am gonna start from the scene in the corridor, after they say all that anab shanaab to each other in the canteen

Sharon's all angry over swayam accusing her about what happened at shivam's party and goes after him and demands an answer from him.

Swayam in her anger and irritation over what Sharon told him canteen… pulls her into a secluded room and pins her to the wall

Swayam's totally agitated over Sharon and says "You want an answer? And for what Sharon and for what? For all the accusations that you put on me calling my love for you a cheap fantasy… for being rude to me through and through… for throwing my love away like it was some piece of s***… Or for me being the stupid to still keep loving you even after all these happenings… Tell me Sharon.. please enlighten me on what do you need an answer for"

Sharon is completely taken aback with his outburst .. She thinks how much she actually might have hurt him by failing to accept his love for her… But Sharon being the Sharon that she is replies "Which love are you talking about swayam.. . the love that gives you rights to throw all sought of accusations at me over shivam's issue… or the love that you cant even express to me directly and behave like a cheap stalker"

Swayam comes closer to her… so that Sharon who was avoiding eye contact with swayam is forced to look at him.

Swayam is all teary eyed and he says "Why Sharon why… why do you always do this to me… to my love… what have I done to not deserve your love" … he comes all the more closer to Sharon and looks directly into her eye and asks her " Or are you scared that you have fallen in love with me and don't want to admit it even to yourself Sharon?"

Sharon is completely dumbstruck with his question and just says "Wh.. what crap.. me and in love.. and that too with you… N.. No way"

"Think about it Sharon maybe you started falling for me from the day of Rdx sir's party… Or why would you ever let me come so close to you" swayam said seeing a ray of hope by confronting sharon's feelings for him.

"You love me even now.. else you would not have allowed me stand this close to you… We both totally effect each other Sharon… and you cant deny the strong attraction we feel for each other… even now if I kiss you .. you know it'll be very special for both of us"

Sharon tries pushing him away.. though it was quit impossible and she could not move him even an inch … she just manages "Na.. no.. that's.. that's not … not true at all.. Now please leave me"

Swayam is determined to get her to open up and says"No Sharon! I am not letting you go till you give me the answer to my question… why if you don't love me do you always look at me like I mean something to you… why do you feel special when I do something for you.. why you always need me by your side when your in some problem… why do you get tensed when I am tensed… Why sharon … Answer me Why?"

"I… I don't… I don't know swayam… I DON'T know why"

"Then let me tell you why Sharon… It's because you love me… and have been loving me since ever… And you might not admit it to youself even now… But it's true Sharon You Love Me"

Swayam takes sharon's hand places it over his heart "You feel that heart beating Sharon… every beat of my heart says it loves you.. And I know Sharon … I know it's the same for you"

They both are just carried away in moment… Sharon goes into swayam's arms all too willingly.. and he kisses her on her forehead and holds her close to him like he never wants to let her go.

After a long time swayam hears Sharon gently whisper "I love you swayam" into his neck… He's overhelmed beyond words and gives her a small kiss and whispers back "You know I love you sharon"… Thus sealing the special moment in their life.

And uske baad ^^ Sharon and swayam ke love story shuru… Hope you liked it guys.. I so would love if something like that actually happened 😉

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The007Shivani thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i wish this had happened thanks for the story and ur version i loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: The007Shivani

i wish this had happened thanks for the story and ur version i loved it

Heya thanks a lot for your comment sweets 😃... Glad you liked it 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A very realistically presented version & very pleasant one 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its awesome...i really wished it would have happened in d3 but any ways luved ur version
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I wish ye hua hota rather than what just transpired. I guess cv's SwaRon ko kabhi khush dekh hi nahi sakte.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well written...i wish this would have happened...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zak231

Well written...i wish this would have happened...


You got our Joyee to read an OS .. U rock 😆

Sweet stuff .. u got there .. not too much fluff .. not too dry either .. no Monstrosity on Swayam's part like we saw in the episode ... Just Swayam being .. Swayam .. waiting it out .. for an answer from Sharon ... Strong enuff to risk it .. and brave enuff to face her denial ... yet determined enuff to not let go till he gets it out of her ... Niiice 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome... Very well written... I wish i really wish something like this would have happened... Toh aaj hum dance kar rahe hote...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awsome...i too wanted this kinda scene yaar...swayam questioning her constantly and then sharon falls for him and they have a sweet romance...wud have juss WOW...i hated wat was shown in the episode...hated swayam part...but performances of TANHA was surprising...

but i dont want "I LOVE YOU" from Sharon in thsi scene itself...juss wanted to see them close and together and really an emotional scene vch wud make me shed tears...
Edited by luvSwaron4ever - 13 years ago

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