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Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was so lovely... os...

so so nice...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --jiya--

hayye fiza-ji😍

aapne jabse ye kalam utha li hai
har lafz jaise aur bhi khubsurat ho gayi hai

😃😆.. itni ghatiya shayari toh maine pehle bhi baht baar kari hogi😆.. but kya karein.. aapki OSs parhke shayari ka mann ho hi jata hai😆🤣

Beautiful OS fiza-ji❤️

~jiya~




wah wah janab ny pora mushira ult liya ..wah
thnku so much dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

To many pms I am sending u these days ….

This is something that didn't surprised me ..it shocked me.. I never expected it… Anu n Suja thanks for actually forcing me to take part in VD contest.. I am the second runner up..and as most of readers haven't read it so here it is..

…..

To You..With Love'

Hey my dear sweetest Hubby,

You must be wondering why on such romantic occasion I am writing a letter to you, rather than arranging a candle light dinner and a romantic night for you, you know that was not my department and now its surly not mine. Than at time it's the best way of telling what I feel, actually feel for you. It's just not a feeling, it's just not the words, and it's just not you being with me. There just not moments that I want to talk about, there so many celebrations that are engraved in my heart, that I live each and every day, even today be sure that I am living them at the fullest.

Either it was the first touch or the moment the first time our eyes meet, still I feel the same shiver or maybe now some butterflies added too. You still make me burn under your soft touch, you still make me crave for more. The first time you kissed me, when u made me forget everything with a gesture, closing my eyes I felt as if your soul is caressing mine, as if you're diffusing passion in side me. It felt like am savoring your passion, your love. And yes you rightly said its getting better and better with every touch, with every capture, with everytime u seal my lips with you.

Still when in nights I cuddle to myself when your these day not there with me, I feel the warmth embracing me. Your arms crawling around my skin slowly, making it reduce to ashes. Your toes alarming my all sense with every stroke. Caressing my cheeks on your hard torso. Getting crashed within your tightening grip. More and more, arousing me to make it one more time, to let myself in you, to let you filling me with your love.

The feathering touch of your fingers, making undefined partner on my skin, the hold of yours , the touch, the wetness of your lips, the sigh of your passion, the moans we shared, the verge of ecstasy we reached. Redefining it everytime, taking it to new height with every touch.. Sweetheart it's just not you who is carving for it, it's just not me here who is feeling it. Close your eyes and take yourself back to those time, it's still you it's still me, and it's still the same Love, it's still the same passion, it's still the same madness, it's still just the feeling of bliss, it's still heaven that we live in.

Feel it baby, my arms around yours, I am still holding you close in your cold and warm nights, just feel my warmth, my touch, my kiss, my love, my passion, my wildness that you arose in my. Feel the scent of my skin, feel me vanished under your touch, I know you can feel it, I know you do. You're the only one with whom I can feel this, I don't want to stop loving you, I still want my soul to be drench in the cascade of your Love.

It's still your love, so make it happened honey, make it for me. It only you who can make me feel all this, who can make me at peace by being at peace. So if you're feeling lonely don't, you're than one I hold. So hold me near you, nearer you, beneath your skin, within your soul, even if I am not there with you, u still can sense it can't you. Beneath the heap of the sand, the only feeling that make me alive, the only emotion that is giving me peace is your love, it is your Love. So be sure of it, and live it with me, we are together, and gonna make it perfect till the end'

I am still in front of your eyes, I am still living inside you, I still your Love, the only Love. I know I don't have to say it you know it right, but I love to do it again n again, so here I say it again baby' I Love You'.I really do, You believe in that, You do?..Your faith is my existence, else I am Just a Lost Soul'

Yours Only, Resting in Peace,

You're Love, Your Wife'.

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
SujaLuvsMayur thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats Fiza.

u dont need anyone ... u r a grt writer n u deserve the best.
gopi06 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful one fiza
loved the song,lyrics & poetry
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congrats fizzaaa:) :) :) yaaar ..itne senti os mat likha kar...u are so powerful with ur writin that i feel weirdly sad after readin them . abb compensate karne ke liye Gear update kardo naaa ... puhleeej . n mujhe pata hai that u said me to write sumthing...but mere words n flow has gone sumwhere... il write ...as sioon as i find them back . loveee you n great wrk <3 <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG😍... it was so beautiful fiza-ji... even after realizing the real meaning of the last line "resting in peace"... there is a little smile lingering on my face.. she loves him and stays with till now.. only you can do this fiza-ji..

and congrats for the contest.. you surely deserve it

👏

❤️❤️
~jiya~
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Posted: 13 years ago
sooo beautifulll and heart felt😊
Edited by crazymayurian - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMGGG diii isnt it the BESTEST OS or letter so far...Goshh u made me all teary...
Dont know how i missed this...guess xm took all my concentration...
It shud hav bean at no.1...We wrote it so so beautifully...For me the BEST OS of urs till date nd now im gonna copy paste it...I hav to read it frm time to time...Its so divine nd beautiful...
I know love cant be expressed fully by words as wat u feel is unexplainable but the way u write it touched my soul...
U r too good at expressive writings nd i think u shud write this kind of FF...plz dii write something like dat...
Just beautiful dii..allah bless u..*hugs*...
Auroni.92 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oho excitement mein wish hi karna bhool gayi...
CONGRATS dii...U deserve it nd u better be at no.1...Love u..<333

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