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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb janagi...👏

awesome part dear...really like it..😃

waiting 4 d next update...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update janu dii...really superb...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsum update..all the best
Gurbina is rocks n awsum acouple
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nooriewas

Ur all Parts O'Some dear!!!!👏

Wonderful update!!!!😛
Thanks for PM!!!😳
Love to know the next part!!!😳

THANKS A LOT...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anvi8888

superb janagi...👏

awesome part dear...really like it..😃

waiting 4 d next update...😉

MY WHOLE HEARTED GRATITUDE...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zollologic

nice update janu dii...really superb...👏

THANKS A BUNCH...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: latakhadka

awsum update..all the best

Gurbina is rocks n awsum acouple

REALLY...THEY ARE AN AWESOME COUPLE...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98


yaar nice ff you have done an




janvi's and krish's friendship is



and



i


plz bring gurmeet aka rahul soon😳plej ..
conti soon😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Krish came outside and saw her standing indifferently. He went near her and asked "what happened?"

"nothing'..lets leave"

"okay'..i'll take the car"

While travelling krish could understand something was disturbing her. So he stopped the car near a park and asked her to step out.

She too did and they entered the park where she could see green grasses, colourful flowers, butterflies, fountain and beautiful birds. She felt relaxed at the sight of nature. Krish made her to sit on a stone bench and he too sat beside her.

"what happened?"

"nothing"

"u felt disturbed'..i can see it'.""

"hmmm'.."

"why'.whats the reason?"

"why people are like this krish?"

"I couldn't get you"

"did u noticed the old lady'"

"ya'.she was there outside the temple'..right?"

"hmmm'.have u heard what she said'.?"

"yaaa'.but what can we do for that?"

"don't be so irresponsible krish"

"okay'.okay'.dont get tensed"

"I am disturbed by her"

"I couldn't understand what u r saying"

"i should help her"

"but how'."

"I'll take her to my home'"

"okay' her problem is solved, will ur parents allow"

"I'll convince them, that's not a problem"

"that's fine then'. U can help one but there are numerous people are left like this by their children'who will help those'"

"my ram"

"what do u mean?"

"we will built a big ashram, where ram temple will be there, there will be also residency for those old people who are left uncared by their children, and school for poor children who cannot study with their parents' income'..then there will be also medical care for handicapped, there will be also orphanage in it''.the lord who is helping me will surely help them also'right?"

"hey'..enough'.how is it possible'.u r just a student now' we need money, labour and staffs, etc and etc'"

"we will seek funds from the people, atleast 50 people like me will live this world right who wants to help those people'."

Krish felt excited to hear this from janvi. He smiled and said, "and I'll be the first one out of this 50, I'll support u completely"

"my dear chinchu ma'(with lots of excitement)'.lets go home and say about this dad and uncle(krish's dad)"

They reached home from the park. In her home, her dad, mom, geet, tharun, krish's mom, dad, kavya, sasha, everyone were there, Because they organized a grand birthday party for janvi. She entered inside and got blessings from the elders.

She was very excited to say about her idea to everyone. However krish explained abt this to everyone and everyone were shocked and surprised to hear this. But they expressed happiness. Janvi got a kiss from her dad on her forehead. Then everyone were busily preparing for the party works. Janvi and krish were planning about their future project. They need a good architect for the good plan first of all. Paint colour, gardening, idols, furniture, carpentry, medical facility, staffs, etc'.head started rolling''..

Then they got ready for the party, she was dressed in a bright red grand salwar for the b'day party'..

She received a msg from Mr. x "happy birthday dear'.."

She neglected to reply, and to react as she is busy with the party,it was a very grand party'.her dad's friends, her friends and her sister's friends, her relatives, family friends, all have assembled for the party'.

She was shocked and surprised to see so much ppl there'

She entered the hall where all assembled and came near her dad and stood to cut the cake,''.

She slowly blew the candle light and took the knife to cut the cake, she did the same..

To all of them's surprise she first fed krish but tharun expected she'll do this'..

Then her dad smiled at her, holding her shoulders she made her to come forward and addressed everyone'he started saying abt her daughter's selfless idea, she received an applause'then he took his laptop, and showed her the official website that he created for her daughter's ashram, she was very happy at her dad's act, she came near her dad and hugged him with affection, her inner conscious said to herself, "hey janvi,..u didn't even get this idea right'?"

He presented this as a gift to janvi'

And next is geet to present her gift, she presented a medium size idol of sitaram, lakshman and hanuman which is personally very touching to janvi'

Janvi hugged her and kissed her with care'.

And janvi could find krish's absence, her eyes were searching him and her heart was seeking his gift'..

Then she saw krish entering the hall with a young handsome guy'

Krish could understand her confused state, "hey janu,'he is pratap, an architect'."

Hello

Happy birthday

Thanks

He'll plan our ashram and built it for us and u hav a shock, he built it for free

Wat😲

S,'I heard of ur idea'.it is for a good cause,'. This is my contribution for ur grt work

But...

No buts,'.i know u wont accept it so easily but u should'this is my humble request''

But krish'plz make him understand''

No janu, u plz understand,'..think this as the first fund'

Hmmm'.

She is unhappy abt this but accepted only for her friend'

He could feel that, so krish holds her shoulder with his hands and whispered "do u lik my gift?"

She smiled in silence'..

The turn is for tharun who presented her a grand gold necklace

Excellent selection munna

But the money is papa's'..

But ur luv is mine'.

He hugged her sister with emotion'.

Krish could feel their strong bond'

Sasha presented her a handmade painting of her fav god,'..janvi was excited of everyone's affection!

And to her part, her mom presented everyone with a delicious dinner

The day ended with a good note, "let janvi live long"

Edited by JANAGI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

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