TUM- Poem on KR...

a small treat frm me before i go for my exams...
a small poem frm me on KriyaAnsh...
basically, it's Kriya's POV-

Reyaansh/Chabilal/Line-Cutter,

Tum hi the mere sab kuch...
tumse shuru hoti thi meri subah,
aur tumpe... meri raatein khatam.
Tumhe paakar meine jaana ki pyaar kya hota hain,
tumse milkar meine... khud ko hain pehchana.
Tumhaare saath bitaaye huye har lamhe ko,
sanjo ke rakha hain apne dil main.
Kabhi socha na tha,
ki tum aaoge... meri zindagi main.
Darti thi mein,
ki kahi humaare yeh differences... hum dono ko alag na kar de.
kabhi yun hi baithe-baithe yahi sochti,
kya tum aur mein kabhi... "hum" ho paayenge?
Tum aaye meri zindagi main,
dil ko dhadkana tumne sikhaya.
Mere dil main pyaar ka ehsaas jaga,
aur FINALLY... tum aur mein- "HUM" ho hi gaye!
Tumhaare saath hokar,
ek khubsurat sapna jee rahi thi mein...
Lekin phir, sapna toota...
hosh aaya aur jaana,
khuli aankho se sapna dekh rahi thi mein.
Aur aise sapne... poore thodi na hote hain...
Maa ko manane ki bahut koshish ki,
aur woh maani bhi...
Lekin... unki ek condition thi!
Condition aisi ki mujhe apne DIL (tum) aur apni DOSTII (dance team) main se,
KISI EK KO CHUN NA PADA...
I CHOSE DOSTII OVER DIL!
Elims ke din... tumhe ignore kiya...
Tumhe aur tumhaari team ko dance na karta dekh... mujhe bahut bura laga;
Tum aaye mujhse milne,

awesome poem...

MInd blowing...i was almost at the verge of crying...beautifully written

superb👏 you really cherished kr moments through your poem

Superb ... very heart touching poem...

wow i m speechless it was amaznig

A heart touching poem dear. After reading this, I am now missing my KriYansh badly yaar 😭

it was awsumm yar n really heart touching...bt dis poem made me cry...ku ni bhul pa re h hm us bure din ko realy cv's i hate u 4 dis

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all of guys.. thnx a ton for liking n lovg my poem... ur comments really build my confidence..
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