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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
do continue and very soon pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohh... so does that album contain arjun's past? arohi? where is she? she is arush's mom?

you must continue.. i am waiting eagerly..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OFCOURSE!! Orelse I'll simply kill U 😃
Haha just kidding love ya I wouldn't hurt ya! But U better continue!! Dunno why ur doubting urself after all our lovely feedback? I can tell it'll be great!
Edited by KaranKittu4eva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u everyone for ur support n srry for the trouble...maybe I was being little skeptic but yeah I'll continue this one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel.KMH.AK


Thank u everyone for ur support n srry for the trouble...maybe I was being little skeptic but yeah I'll continue this one...

yay ! please do continue ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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shona awesome dear

continue soon dn even keep doughts...in ur mind...

awesome strte babes *arjun* and *arush* are cute and perfect for each other...

where is aorhi?

is arush their son did sh die or she wil be his 2nd mohter????

shona u better update fast šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey shona tht was gr8.arjun a single fathr and tht too an awsm one.
lovd the father son bond

pm me furthr updats
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sreeja_rox

We are waiting😊



Meri Jaan This Week Exam...so ve to wait n not replying to anyone yet otherwise ll be beaten red and blue🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Achhu@ OMG u r just telling stratight it is Arohi,,,,kya ya jaroori hai??...u'll c :))

Mannu@ too many questions...u'll find out in updates...ok here u go updating...

Florine@ yup he is a single father but future ka kya pata...

Barbie Doll@ luv u too

Ok guys I guess everyone want to c Arohi...I'll tell all of u this much only...what if not past but she definitely can be his present right...ur questions ll be answered soon...till then bear with me...


srry for not replying one by one, little busy with exams but once again thank u everyone for ur support ~~

Updating in a while

Edited by Angel.KMH.AK - 13 years ago
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Chapter 2


Arjun was driving in silence, neither the father spoke or nor the son. Probably Arush was waiting for his dad to say something or rather the poor little boy was too scared to utter a word in front of him after the recent incident at home. Arjun was searching for words as of how to start and at the same time he was watching his little angel from the corner of eyes; he could see the change of emotions on Arush's face. The angelic face looked so pale for the very first time since his birth; it was killing Arjun inside. Wasn't it too bad already that he yelled at his son without any fault and now Arush's anguished face made him feel like a father who took away his own child's happiness!! Well what else could he had expect after his pathetic behavior. One may think manofying kids are one of the easiest things, but truly it's not and Arjun knows that way better especially when the situation is like this. The car came to a halt in front of Arush's school; through the way Arush was looking straight in the front and as soon as the car stopped he was about to get out in hurry when Arjun said stretching his hands and bending down "will not you hug your dadda today?" Little Arush turned with an expression as if he was waiting for this moment; he caught onto Arjun tightly and wrapped his tiny hands around his dad's neck. They hold onto each other for a long time pacifying the bitter moments. Arush in his feeble voice "Dadda plz don't be angry with me ever, Arush doesn't like it, Arush will be a good boy, I love you dadda" and he ran from the hug, straight out of the car as Arjun was caressing his hair soothingly with one hand. Arjun didn't realize it until a minute that Arush left and when he did he whispered "I love you too beta, I love you too", but he felt something on his neck where Arush was hiding his face. Was it really what Arjun thinking? "Tears" Did his little baby just cried? Arjun was feeling horrible; he felt someone squeezed his heart very tight. He wanted to run and engulf Arush in his arms; but no, not now, before that he needs to set some things right, he will not let his past mess his future. With determined mind he turned his car the other way.

He was standing in front of a beach where he used to find solace when he was going through the crucial moment of his life. Maybe it's not in the same place where he spent those painful memories, but beaches are all same. Yeah that beach was special, but he doesn't want to think about it as it doesn't hold any importance in his life now. The deep sea, the greatness it has which makes you look far but an end is hard to see, the beautiful birds over the sea that are flying independently, the cool breeze just gives him a serene feeling. He can connect the storm of his heart with the sound of waves. Today he found himself in the same place of his life which he left behind five and half years ago. Automatic tears came out of his big-brown eyes, which were last seen on the day Arush was born. That day was the most heartbreaking and happiest day for him. Heartbreaking because he lost a part of him, that precious someone and happiest because it was the day his angel came to his life, his own flesh, blood, their...now the thought only boils his head. After the morning incident and seeing tears on his baby's eyes everything came back to him. He needed to be alone in this place, he closed his eyes "nehi pakar paoge" she said as slipped under his arms..."mein tumhe pakar ke rahunga" standing a little far from him, her hand on hips "pakar ke dikhao"...Arjun leaning his back on the door "toh ye baat hai" "aisa hi kuch samjho, mein toh tumhe maan jaongi" said with an wicked smile...Arjun also with smirk "tabto mein tumhe pakarke rahunga" he made his move right away..."cheater" saying she also started to run, when she reached the stairs, looked back at him and said "kabhi nehi"...she ran for her life with all might...he ran with same enthusiasm...Her laughter was echoing in the whole house...he remarked her "pakadne ke baad paachtaogi"...she showed him her tongue... He caught on her hand but she slipped it smoothly and only the bangle left in his hand...He remained wondering the bangle and said "Smart"... "Thank you"...Arjun chuckled "itni bhi jaldi nehi"...he kissed the bangle and put it in his pocket and continued mission pakrao his "Jaan"...Only her laughter was driving him crazy, he wanted to catch her as soon as possible, so he can punish her on his way...Now she was behind the sofa and Arjun in the front..."M"...showing him moving finger "nah, nope don't call me that until you catch me" with mocking smile "sweetheart bohot hua, aab band karo tumahri ye games, see it is so tiring, you must be tired na"...with continuous laughter "maan kyun nehi lete tum khud tired ho...uh ha tumhara age ho chuki hai, buddhe ho gaye tum...mein to sara din daur sakti hoon"...Arjun's face fell, here he was dying to get her in his arms and she was saying she can run whole day...did she gone mad? Only if she can understand his situation...she made a move to go the other way and Arjun was in action...this time he caught her by the hair, so no chance of escaping...the catch was firm one but gentle...he slowly pulled her towards him and wrapped his another arm around her...right then she winced in pain...he instantly let go of her hair but his hold on her remained..."ouch" "kya hua, I'm sorry, zaydaa dard toh nehi hua, baby plz don't cry, I didn't want to hurt you"...she pointed towards her leg...he made her sit on the sofa and was getting worried thinking what happened to her leg...he sat near her and put her leg on his lap... "Jaan, let me see, everything will be all right, mein hoon na"...he was looking more at her tearful eyes than her painful leg...this was the thing, he couldn't bear her pain...she was laughing inside thinking she just made ullu of her Arjun...finally when he looked at her leg, she received a deadly look...he put her leg down and started moving close to her..."kya kaar rehe ho"... "dikh toh rehi ho, toh pooch kyun rehi ho" "no" "yes tumhe punishment jaroor milegi"..."he picked her in his arms and started moving towards upstairs" "nehi Arjun no...plz jane do...Arjun" she was yelling...Arjun came back from his thoughts...it seemed like, everything just happened now...he thought for a moment "paar aab tum meri dard ho aur u can't ruin my world now, I'll not let this happen"...he called his PA...cancel all the meetings...I've something important to do"..."but sir"..."just do as I say"...he cut the call and left the beach.


So everyone here is the next update...didn't think I would update now but thanx to my long traveling period...may be no more updates bfr my exam finishes...means midway May...I hope u guys like it...u may find it boring...plz hit the like and leave ur comments...criticize or advice is most wc...love Shona...


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Edited by Angel.KMH.AK - 13 years ago

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