||ABHIYA FF||- *DEAD HEART*completed Pg.162 - Page 89

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Posted: 13 years ago
superb n fantastic update n plz dont end it Aditi I want 2 c luv triangle between Abhay-Pia-Abhayendra
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Posted: 13 years ago
i now want to see abhay accepting pias love and some romantic abihyas moments plsss update fast and dont forget to pm me
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Edited by arunsunita_gm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi, friends🤗 Thnx 2 u all who commented on my FF and gave their precious time on it..😳 As all of my wonderful friends have told me not to end the FF soon, then after reading all of ur pov, i've reconsidered my decision and i have decided that i'll continue it . so, i've to think about the new plots 4 it. I'll try to update the FF in Thursday/Friday.. 😉

Till then take care and GOD bless u all...❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
plsss update fast plsss update fast
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART-16

In the next morning

Abhay is sleeping. suddenly some noise wakes up him. Abhay quickly gets up n tries to find out the source of the noise with his sleepy eyes. Soon he finds out that his phone is ringing. Now abhay understands the noise source. He feels a little bit annoyed . After a long time he was having a sound sleep but no .. it seems that he doesn't have the pleasure of a happy sound sleep. Abhay picks up the phone n tells "hello" with a light irritated tone-

Abhay: hello..

Pia: hi, abhay...

Abhay: Who r u?

pia(surprised): what? don't u know me? I m pia!!!

Abhay quickly checks the phone n finds out that it's really pia. In sleepy eyes, he didn't notice the caller name. But Pia is calling him at this time!!! It's surprising!!!

Pia: hello..hello.. r u listening ?

abhay: Oh ya...i m listening...

Pia: Okay... thank u...

abhay(surprised): What? thank u!!! For what???

Pia: For giving me the world's best pleasure.. For giving me my life and my aim of life . For giving me my love...

Abhay: What r u talking about? I m not understanding anything at all..

pia: Come on abhay... now stop pretending darling.. u know last night i couldn't sleep ..i just kept waiting for the morning so i can call u ...

Abhay: Pia plz... can u cut it short? I mean i m now not in a mood of solving puzzles !!!

Pia (becomes dishearten) : I m sorry abhay .. i didn't mean to disturb u. But last night when u came to my room and told me that u love me from the 1st day when we met in mumbai, my happiness knew no bounds . Actually i got to hear the line from you which i cherished from long. That's why i m unable to control my joy... That's why i called u so early.. but i m really sorry 4 disturbing u.

By telling this pia cuts the line and abhay remains puzzled. What he was listening?? He confessed his love for pia!! How it can be possible ??? He went to bed after coming home and lost in his sleep. So, how can he go to pia's home???

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Abhay goes to washroom, sprinkles cold water into his face and head. n after that everything starts becoming crystal clear to himself..

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Abhay is sitting on the sofa of his room n lost in deep thoughts. By this time Kiah comes there , she wonders after seeing abhay in this state.

Kiah: Ahem.. abhay...

Abhay : Oh ya...mom...

Kiah: Where r u lost son? I've never seen u in such condition!!

abhay: Mom.. i m not understanding anything, what to do?

Kiah: What happened?

abhay explains everything to kiah from first to last. Then kiah speaks out-

Kiah: So, abhay..r u thinking the same what i m thinking now?

Abhay: Ya, mom. We underestimated our enemy but he is much cunning than we can think.

Kiah: exactly. But u r missing the most important point ..

abhay: I m not missing mom. i m just thinking what to do with it next.

Kiah: so, any plan?

Abhay: Mom, it was clear from pia's call that abhyendra went near to her n confessed his love for her and pia misunderstood him by thinking that it was me. It is clearly evident that , when we were dying to find out abhyendra , he was knitting his lovestory!!!! Sick..man... how can he love someone ? Inspite of knowing this , he's a monster!! How can he!!!

kiah: abhay ... it's really impossible to understand human instinct ...

abhay: But he's not a human mom.. he is a creepy blood sucker...damn it..

Kiah: Control abhay... i know , but why r u forgetting that he was a human before 2 months ago, he has became a vampire newly.. it would be difficult for him to forget human emotions so quickly...

abhay: I care hoot about him mom.. I just want to see him dead at any cost.

Kiah: i understand ur hatred abhay. But u seem angry about some else reason, i guess..

Abhay: umm.. actually u r r8 mom.. i m thinking about pia.. Why she hid this fact that she loves me?How can she? when she was in mumbai, it was abhyendra with her not me.so, how can i accept that she actually loves me?? n moreover , i don't have such feelings for her. How can i betray with tanisha?

Kiah: Abhay.. it will be cleared only then when u'll talk pia about this matter. n about ur feelings, son.. tanisha is dead . U've to accept this fact and start living ur life. U never betrayed tanisha when she was alive , so why to have such guilt ? U can't keep suffering from the pain of losing her. U've to start ur life afresh. n believe me , even tanisha will also want this. Her soul can't be freed until she sees u happy.

Abhay: I m trying mom...But i can't start my life afresh until i take revenge from abhyendra . He snatched my beloved from me . Now he has to suffer . n I've decided what i've to do..

Kiah: what?

abhay: I'll pretend to be in love with pia . If we want to catch abhyendra, then i must have to do it as he loves her n will definitely come in touch with her. Now pia will work like GPRS system for me..

Kiah: Abhay!! It's not r8 , my son. Ur hatred is taking over u.. u'll pretend with her but u know very well that she loves u . What'll happen when she'll come to know that u r pretending with her? She will be heartbroken and will lose faith from every1.

Abhay: Come on mom.. what r u talking about? Do u know whom she really loves? She is considering me as abhyendra , in fact she is thinking that we r both same person. She started loving abhyendra from first n now she is trying to ending up with me.Is this r8? she is misunderstanding ..

Kiah: n it's ur duty to clear all her misunderstandings ..

Abhay: I want to do mom.. believe me .. I really want. But what'll happen next? will she believe my words? She'll understand that i've gone crazy. Actually who won't mom? Now-a-days who believes in vampires, fairies, witches, magic etc.? She is in her dream world n let her be in.

Kiah: n what if her dream world gets shattered because of u? U must have been read that story abhay- a cowboy always used to scream "tiger, tiger" n when all the villagers came to his help he used to laugh n said " I've made u all fool". But when one day really tiger came n the boy screamed no1 came to help him by thinking that he is again joking. n the result: Tiger ate the cowboy.. Same thing is going to be happened with u abhay . U r going to play with som1's feelings n for this u r gonna to tell 1000 of lies, then may be one day when u'll speak the truth , no1 ain't gonna believe u..U'll be the ultimate looser though u won the war...

Abhay : I understand mom..but at this moment it seems r8 to me. Now, i only want my revenge , n for that reason i can stoop low as much as i can... Everything is fair in love and war.. abhyendra has snatched my love from me and started the war. so, he has to meet the consequences for it..n as far concern 4 pia... i'll see later what to do with her but now she has to be my pawn..sorry pia..

Abhyendra ... u've took my love away from me n i couldn't do anything then but now i m gonna play with ur love.. stop me if u can... but i bet u can't ...

Kiah leaves a deep breath..

Precap: Abhay goes to pacify pia as she is upset with him. Abhay tells pia that it was him who proposed her and makes pia happy. Then he gives pia a surprise...

[ Really, such time comes when we stuck between the right and wrong and we choose the right. But what happens then when both r wrong and we've to choose between them????]


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Posted: 13 years ago
Abhay shouldn't do that to Pia!!
she'll be so heart broken when she comes to know. can't wait to know what happens next!


Edited by abhiya0006 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superbbb aditi!oh no!!nw what??i hope abhay doesn't break piya's heart like this...he does feel sumthing for her na??what will happen now?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb Aditi... Oh poor Pia... I am feeling so bad for her... Aww 😔
Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh my god...it was great update! But why abhay is doing this? I dont want pia with abhendre pls...let abhay realise his love fr pia!
I think by acting in love with pia abhay will fall in love with pia by real...
Pls abhay and pia! I hate abhendre...lets see in which direction the story is going. Update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum update aditi..👏
bt m feelng sad for pia!! Abhay is going to use her!! Bt 1day pia wil definately come to knw the truth n tht day she will feel terribly betrayed nd m afraid she myt nevr b able to forgive abhay!! Abhay will definately fall for pia bt it will b too late!! All three are going to suffer in this dangerous war of love n betrayal and the mere thot of the possible outcome shivers me!!
Once again,it was an amazing update!! 👍🏼Beautifuly written!! 👏
thanx for the pm..dear...plz do continue soon!! M eager to knw d nxt part!! Tk..cre..😊

-Indu
Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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