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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: harianjana

friends any one remember this ff. this ff will get its update with in one hour

though u r busy with ur studies u r taking time to update ff thanks a lot hari and how can we forget this ff waiting for it
Edited by ushasri - 14 years ago
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Part 11


Radhika went into her room and started to cry out. She never cried like this i her whole life time. But today she was crying. May be because of her value for the friendship in her life. She wasn't knowing what to do. She was feeling suffocated, it was a pain like some one was twinching her . She fall on her bed and slept like that.

devki sprinkled water on Radhika.
"Radhika, Vuot"

Radhika woke up in a startle. There was light oned in her room. She doesn't know for a minute where she was. She rubbed her eyes and looked at watch it was 7:30 in night

Radhika looked at her mother blindly. devki who was concerned for Radhika, asked her "Radhika, are u okay. Tum ne khana bhi nahi khaya. Mrinalini ye bol rahi ki tum ne vus se ye kaha ki disturb mat karo"(Radhika, are u okay, u even didn't eat , mrinalini was saying that u told her not t disturb u)

Radhika looked at Mrinalini who was standing beside Radhika winking her. devki touching radhika on her fore head"U are saying nothing?'

Radhika loooking at devki "Vo.. Mom yeah, actually I had some sort of head ache, so slept after drinling some khada"

devki:How do u feel now

Radhika smiled and said "Fine mom"

devki:Okay fne, get ready soon, Vishaka's friends came from U.S, they are eager to meet u, come down soon.

Radhika:I will come down soon, okay

devki:Fine.

After devki left Mrinalini came to Radhika and asked "U are fine na. I know what state u would have been, and I can't ket ammaji or daadi ma or devki maa to enter in so..."

Radhika:Its okay di. By the way, is he there

Mrinalini sighing ."U should not expect it from him yaar. He was not much less than a machine now."

Radhika:But di

Mrinalini:Radhika, if u can try to bring him here

Radhika:I will.

Mrinalini:Radhika if u do this na, Then I can get some hope for his recovery.

Radhika:Sure di, now only see

Radhika took her phone and dialed for Dev's phone.

Dev was standing in his balcony and was thinking of his meeting with Radhika , the moments he spent with her,.He got disturbed by his phone's ring.

Dev took the phone out from his pocket and seeing unknown number he was confused and pressing it to his ear "Hello"

Radhika:"Hello, Dev ji hain"

Dev:"Ji, its Dev, can I know whose speaking"

Radhika:Its Radhika. Mrinalini's sister.

Dev was confused,for a moment he thought "What this girl is, I thought she was good, but she called me like this, what does she thinks huhh, This girl is also a typical girl"

Radhika not listening any response "Hello"

Dev came out from his thoughts and said firmly "Yes"

Radhika:"Yeah, there are some relatives here, who wanna meet u. s can u come here please"

Dev who was irritated wiht this welcomings from evening "Sorry I can't come, I doesn't wanna come too"

Radhika:Please

Dev:I won't come. I hate these type of meetings

Radhika:Okay then I will bring them to ur home

Dev:Hey what do u think, am I groom? Nope, Vivek bhaiyya was groom, he was right there. Then what to do with me.

Radhika was shocked with his sudden anger. She controlled herself and said "Okay Dev, fine Thanks for saying,"

Dev's temper colled a bit and he said "Suno"(hear)

Radhika with a hope "Yes"

Dev:Agli baar, phone mat karna. Badi parivaar ki beti ho aap, kuch toh sharminda ladki ki taraf behave karoo."(U are from a big family, please behave in that way, don't call me again like this)

Radhika:Jeee

By the time the line was cut. Radhika looked at Mrinalini in amusement "Di, whats this. "

As speaker phone was on, Mrinalini also listened to the whole convo.She said normally "Dev"

Radhika:He was in such a way.

Mrinalini:Now what to do Radhika.

Radhika in her firm voice :When I said I will get succeed in a thing I will. I too will see How he won't come.

Mrinalini:But hw???????

Radhika went t her desk and took a sim card from the shelf there. She kept it in the second sim place in her phone and started to dial Dev's number.

Mrinalini as i understanding "Idea was good, but what if he recognise ur tone"

Radhika winked and said "Di did u forgot, I got a gold medal in mimicry competition in our college"

Mrinalini:Means will u change ur tone.

Radhika with a smile said "Of course"

Mrinalini was suprised as Radh's said that word in a changed tone, which was sweet and seduciv.

Mrinalini:Buttt

Radhika :I know whats ur tension is, Don't worry every thing wil be fine

Radhika callled Dev's number who was really irritated thinking of Radhika. He took the phoe and said in a irritated voice"Hello"

Radhika in her changed tone "Hellooo"

Dev:Who are u

RadhikaUr girl friend

Dev:What???????

Radhika: What Dec, U forgot me that easier. Very saddd.

Dev in her firm anger tone : Who are u?

Radhika:Wanna know.

Dev:Yup

Radhika:Come to Shama's Mansion. I am right there talking with ur would be Bhabhi's sister .

Dev thought it to be Radhika and said "Radhika ko phone do"

Radhika:There is noone here wit Radhika

Dev : The person who was my would be Bhahs-sister. Vusko

Radhika:She is Vishaka, shall I giv it to her.

Dev confusing:No Thanks. But u be right there. I will come there to cut ur head.

Radhika in very more seducing tone:Waiting for u babes. Bye

Mrinalini who was listening all this stading aside of Radhika can't stop her self from laughing. She was laughing out louder.

Devki came there and seeing two girls happy felt relieved for a bit time but mocking anger said "Radhika, won't u get ready"

Radhika and Mrinalini starltled and Radhika said "Maa, One minute, will come down"

Radhika changed her self into a violet colour chudidaar and cmae down braiding her hair.

Meinalini and Radhika came donw talkign and Mrinalini was asking Radhika"If u apl some cream what happen to u"

Radhika:I am fine di

Mrinalini:Buttt.

Radhika:Di please

Mrinalini:U wil never listen and syaing it they left to the garden place where all the bachelors were sitting.

Radhika saw Vishakas one friend dropping a tissue paper near soem plant and left to her angrily.

Radhika:"Excuse me"

That girl looked at Radhika. She was in a completed tght fit jeans. she looked at Radhika and asked "Yes"

Radhika:"Pleas take that pepr u dropped there. It had all that cosmetics u aplied to ur face. It will harm the plants"

That girl got much anger and said "Hey U servant. What u think of ur self Haan"

Radhika got anger and said "Look miss"

That girl "Miss. Priyanka."

Radhika now changed her language to american english and spoke "Look Miss.Priyanka. Please ming ur words okay. We all are servants of God. As u wore some jeans u won't become a owner nor as i am simple wearing some chudidaar I won't be a servant. Okay. But please don't spoil these plants. It takes years for me to make this garden or plants. They were the things becoz of which we are surviving. So..."

Priyanka:Hey stop ur country blabbering. As u spoke 4 english words u think ur self to be the owner of this house. U are a garden keepr. so remain to ur self. I should talk wiht aunty for keeping servants like u. Tel ur name"

Radhika in anger:I am Radhika Sharma. d/0 Mohan prasad Sharma

Priyankas mouth shutted immediately as she got the name of Radhika.She blabbered out "Tum Radhika"

Radhika:Yes Priyanka ji, I am the very Radhika who u wanna meet.

Priyanka changed her face to a smiley one and extending her hand out for a shake "Glad to Meet u dearrr"

Radhika folded her hands doing a Namashkar said "Sorry di, but I am not at all glad to meet u. But please take that papr from there.It was nature which made our living possible. never try to harm it."

That girl nodded her head in guilty and Radhika left.

All the girls there were shocked with behaviour of Radhika. Some thought her to be arrogant while some thought her to be over possisive, while others thought her to be perfect.

But where there is money people will come there by them selves. So every one spoke good to Radhika who spoke to all of them good. to the highest extent she can ebcause of their over culturous behaviour.

Mrinalini was smiling seeing to all the things done by Radhika, and was sharing her views with Vivek . Vivek was also feelign same and was sayiing to Mrinalini "U said right Mrnu. Mom also like her a lot. Daadi no way to say, she love her. I think, They were planning to bring her too."

Mrinalini:But Devvv

Vivek:That was the problem. If not she should have been standing along with dev with us now as second couple.

Mrinalini:I know. I guess Radhika will be one to change him

Vivek:Hopeso.

They were interrupted because of the sudden comosion and looked t see all the irls seeing out at the entrance.

Mrinalini looked there and saw Dev coming. Mrinalini was surprised and saw him being curt to every one and searching for some one.

Mrinalini looked at Radhika who came beside her and smiled suprisingly. Radhika was happy indeed but she was hurt with th words he said to her. so she had an anger face, Dev came and smiled to Mrinalini and Vivek, but as he looked at Radhika she turned off her head and moved away from there.

Doesn't know why but for first time in life Dev Purohith felt hsi heart paining
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ushasri

though u r busy with ur studies u r taking time to update ff thanks a lot hari and how can we forget this ff waiting for it

Thanks a lot usha ji. It was the only place where I like to hang out my self. But I was a bit lost with this ff. Because of the other ffs. But it was writers block regarding this one. I will try to update it too regularly from now. If u can please wait as I am trying to update U are my life too. I posted this one, I will try topst that too today
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the wonderful update hari waiting for next part and dev felt pain as radh move her face away radh is going in gd way to change dev
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dev felt the pain when Radhika turned her head.Great.Waiting to see how Radhika changes Dev.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update waiting for the next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks all my buddies for bearing m ff's for a long time, I know i didn't ppdate for a long time, but i promise that i will pdate daily once i make a coome bacck. really sorry for inconviniience, back to bakc from may12
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part - 12
Radhika after quarreling with dev left into her room leaving him confused.Dev sat there thinking"Is she mad. Why was sher that furious on me. Afterall what did I say? "

Radhika in her room furious and sad"Why? Why? That unknown girl was more for him. Did he hatre me in such an extent? Kyun Kanha Kyun mere Dev ko mujhse door kiya tum ne"

Out side, Dev rubing his fingers through his hair "Damn Man, why are u concerned for tha girl,Why. That tears in her eyes, why are u bothering me girl"

Radhika in her room "Haan I bother u. I will bother u becoz u are my best and only friend, and u are not recognising me u stupid"

Dev:Who was she why was she bothering me. When she look at me I see soem familiarity and some losting in her eyes. It was like she was waiting for me But Why? Damnnn"

Radhika:Yes I am waiting for u. I am waiting for ur reply for 2 years. I cried every dy just to know what was that wrong I did. Why was he not replying me. Why wasn't he coming to online when she waited till 2' 0 clock in the night for him. Why. But one word by Mrinalini di made all my pain shattered. When he doesn't remember himself how can he remember his id and pass word. HHow can he remember thta he had a very good friend called Radhika. How?????

Dev: How I know u Radhika. I am sure that U share some relation ship wiht me. But how? U didn't evmn cross ur Vrindavan for oen day if what Bhabhi told was right. And mummy told me that I stayed for 15 years in U.S Then How Radhika. Damn this memory loss.

Radhika:Haan Kanha. Kyun aapne vusko memory loss diya. Kyun Kanha. Kyun mujhe pareeksha de rahe ho

Dev : No No I doesn't know her. If ever I knwo any one of the family members or friends. or uncle. Koi na koi bataya hoga. If I know him, why will she tal;k to me as if she was talking to a stranger that night/ No no I doesn't know her. Than why was she behaving wiht me as she know me for a logn time. What was she expectign from me. "Property?"
No No she own a huge property. Then What?

Radhika:I don't know How might be he thinkig of me.May be bad? Good? what???

Dev: Acha hoga if I go and ask her. Why she had tears in her eyes when she looked me coming. Why was she hurt?

Radhika:May be I guess, he was angry wiht him. But why????? Better if I ask her

Dev:Yes I will ask her

Radhika:Yeah Radhu chalo.

Dev moved to wards the house and Radhika turned aroud to go out.

Dev was moving towards Radhks rroom in the fastest pace.Radhika was coming oout. Dev met Radhika when Radhika was abt to reach steps. Radhika stopped and asked him "Kya hua Dev ji any Problem?"

Dev seriously:Haan wo I had to talk to u

Radhika looked at Dev shocked but tryign to control her emotion "Haan Dev ji! Study room mein jaayenge?"

Dev:Personel

Radhika gave a confused look but immediately became normal and said "Ji meri room hain"

Dev:Is it Okay

Radhika:Haan U are the would be evar of my sister, means u are a guest to us. so no problem

Dev managed to smile and Radhika took him to her room. Dev watched around to see tha candles lit in room and the aroma of Rose spread every where. Dev looked at Radhika who said "Actually I love this type more than the electrical.

Dev:Ohhh

Radhika switched n the lights and offered him achair and she sat on the chair opposite to him"Boliye"

Dev:Actually what does u wnat from me Radhika

Radhika:Whatt???????

Dev:No actually from when I came here u are behavign differently wiht me

Radhika now wearing one leg on other leaned back giving a royal look and sai d"Sorry Dev ji! BUt what U think was absolutely wrong":

Dev oo managed with his legs iun same was as Radhika did and leanign back said "I am sorry, But I saw tears in ur eyes when I saw u down"

Radhika : Haan! I did cry then becoz, I am a characterless girl na in ur sense that's why

Dev:What that matters to u. What I think u what is that to do with u

Radhika:Devji, Basically I knwo what my character is, and haan I called u becoz my di insisted me that's why. Other wise, I had no pleasure to call u type people.

Dev frowned at last line "My type"

Radhika:Yeah, ap jaisi, variety creatures se baat karne ki mujhe koi shouk nahi

Dev:"Mind ur words

Radhika:Where the hell did it go when U called me a character less girl

Dev: Its such a simple one

Radhika;No U are a beats, a male witch

Dev was losing his words he stood up and said "Shut up U..."

Radhika stood up and smiled saying "Ghuss aaya tha na aapko aisa hi hum ko bhi. Hum bharat ki auratein, sab se jyaada apni maan samman ko priority dete hain. Now did get why I cried and was serious when u called me a characterless girl"

Dev understood what she did, to make him understand the seriousness she taunted him in return to make him experience.Dev looked at Radhika in shock. he can't restrict himself from admiring her brilliance

Radhika smiled and said "Soprry Devji! I didn't mind to hurt u. But actually I can't bear if any one calls me like that. Becoz I am not. So I did like this to make u understand"

Dev:Its okay.I shoudl ask u to forgive me

Radhika said:I will forgive u but on one condition that u will friend me

Dev:Sure. Brilliance had always that place with me

Radhika firs felt weak but immediately she consoledherslef and said "Thank u dev ji"

Dev:Its my pleasure Radhika

Radhika looekd around and said "Still is there any word u had to blurt out"

Dev:Nothign but did we ever meet before?

Radhika:What?

Dev:No actually I thin I met u

Radhika:Yeah long before. I didn't remember in my childhood

Dev:That's why I felt like I met u.

Radhika smiled

Dev: Still

Radhika: Aur kuch baat karna hain

Dev:No

Radhika:Can u please leave form here. If any one see u, it will get a wrong impression

Dev:What??

Radhika:Sorry But I generaly was my self reserved, if some see me like this talkign to a guy na thye will pull my legs, which I hate

Dev:Ohhh Its okay. I will leave, Why don't u join in party

Radhika:Nope... I had some good amnmt of head ache and by the way I doesn't like parties. So...

Dev:Chill! Well I too leave, I had my interviews tomorrow.

Radhika:Interview???/

Dev:Yeah we need some P.A for me. I had one in U.S but none here. And now that I stay here, I had to get one

Radhika:Ohhh

Dev- Radhika came down and sat in comfy as Dev to don't like parties so he asked " Then, what are ur plans with ur carrer"

Radhika:Ummm last june I completed my M.BA and Papa was insisting me to join him, but there I can't be independent so Thinking

Dev: U wanan be Independent?

Radhika:No, I mean I can't complete my zeal to learn the ork if I join Dad. He will give me some big reponsiblity and position hich was not correct to a fresher. So thinking.

Dev:"Then U can join some other company

Radhika:Yeah I am thinkgin but Papa had to agree???

Dev:Yeah that was a problem too. Paents won't agree soon.

Radhika:Experience na, u will know.

Radhika remembered that day when he msgd her saying hat he was trying to ovince RPJI to get him into a job in some other companu. That day Radhika tried to give him many suggestions, which include soem werd too for hich they both laughed out ...

"Radhika."

Radhika jerked and looked at Dev who was asking her "How do u know?''

Radhika:Nothing Naani ji ne bataya

Dev:Nani ji?

Radhika:Ur daadi

Deev:Ohhh

Radhika:Okay Dev ! My sleepign is crawling on to me. Talk to u later when we ever meet. see u

Dev:Okay Bye

Radhika:Jo apni friends hain vus se bye nahi kehna hain, see you kehna hain

Dev:Sounds good, who said u

Radhika:My best friend

Dev:Ohhh who?

Radhika:Dev

Dev:What??

Radhika:Mera dost ka naam be Dev hain. Kyun aise nahi hotahian.

Dev:U said U are reserved\

Radhika:He was my best and only friend in the world

Dev: Ohhh/

Dev heard some one calling him and said " Okay Bye sorry sorry See U ! Radghika. Good night"

Radhika:It will definitely be a good night

Dev left by the time and Radhika said "Good Night mere Kishan kannaya" and left into her room.

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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the awsome update hari waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thnx for the lovely update.

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