IPPKND SS:The Love Story on Page 3 (COMPLETED)

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Sanjana

@akhilash

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#401

thanks for the pm.

Loved the update. Fabulous, 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#402

I really enjoyed the different writing styles...it works when you mix it up and keep it simple for each part. I could really imagine the dialogue style pleasing out for real. Loved it.

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#403

Since it was a mostly conversation-based part, this style seemed to work. But personally speaking, I like the other narrative style better :)

Otherwise, a great part as always! :)

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sweetygirl28

@sweetygirl28

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#404

So he is not coming with anything for me to sign this afternoon?
Not if he wants to live, he's not.

Arnav-ji, ek aur baat, your handwriting makes me think that a spider crawled into an ink bottle and then staggered across the page with his eight inky legs. Blots everywhere! yeh koi insaan ki handwriting hai kya?I am still not sure if those letters came from you or Lakshmi-ji. You..."

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I couldnt stop laughing at these ... ROFL 🤣

okay so the dialogues were so good.. good try at the new type of update.. i loved it...

and one minute he was yelling at akash and the next he is talking sweetly to khushi i think he has lost it 🤣🤣🤣

page 3 ppl dont have any other better news i guess.. weaving all types of stories.. 🤣

amazing update!!!

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medha

@medha16

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#405

this was awesome!!!simply fab...n khushi can only talk about spider dipped in ink crawling over letters while sharing the most important life changing conversation with her husband...loved the dialogues...u rock in this style too...n i loved the contrast u showcased at the end b/w the furious ASR n the loving husband arnav!!

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nj123

@nj123

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#406

hahahahaa!!! Loved both the updates...Arnav yelling at Akash and then whispering to Khushi so innocently was the CUTEST thing ever!! The 5th chapter was absolutely HILARIOUS!!!😆

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#407

OK that update was great!

You had me laughing about his handwriting...khushi compared it to spiders on the page and the speculated that it was so bad it could have been from lakshmi...hilarious.

The making up was just sooo sweet...loved it.

I think a mix of playscript and the way you normally write works well.

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SStephy

@SStephy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#408

I liked this dialogue style... where Khushi was asking short and to-the-point questions and Arnav trying to explain everything in detail and basically just speaking his mind..

But I hope you wouldn't use only the dialogue style in the remaining chapters because some narration would also be nice. I think the dialogue style works when used in the right place... and you did use it in the right place and right way in this chapter... so found it enjoyable to read... (just my opinion).

Edited by S.Stephy - 13 years ago