SS-Udhay vs Yuvraaj Udhayveer

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay this is my first attempt. I am not much of a writer, i was bored and that led to writing so please bare with me. If there are any mistakes please ignore.
Also make sure to send me your reviews weather i should continue or not.:)

Prologue

It has been a month since Maynata was announced as the new yuvrani of jaipur. For Maynata becoming a yuvrani was only a way to find out about Aksash. She thought that if she is yuvrani herself it would be easier for her to search for Akash, her long last love. But little that she knew that it wasn't going to be as she has planned. God had planned something else for her.

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Chapter 1-3below

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 1

Mayanata has successfully taken her charge as a yuvrani. She was a proper yuvrani; she was sophisticated, her simplicity, unforced charm and good humor won her many friends. People loved her for her down to earth nature. She never made anyone feel inferior.

It was yet another day Maynata woke up only to find two maids at her side already. She hated it, she hated this part of being a yuvrani she always liked doing her stuff on her own but now that she was a yuvrani she had to act like one. Although at times she would find a way to get them out and do everything on her own, but that was very rare.

Mayanata got ready ofcourse by the help of maids. They did her hair, nails, washed her feet with rose water got her outfit ready. If it was up to the maids they would help her shower and dress her too but only she knows how she has managed a way to make Daadi sahib agree that she ll do that on her own.

Maynata went downstairs only to find everyone at the breakfast table already. She glanced at her wrist watch the one Akash gave her; she never took that off no matter what. She thought maybe she got late but when she looked at her watch she realized she was on time, everybody else was there early and she wondered why. Every one even Udhay, Unati and their father, everyone but Jai.

As soon they all got done eaten Uday's dad asked DS if she stills remembers her promise, DS's expression changed she went from calm to being worried. Maynata wondered what was he talking about. He asked her if she has talked to Maynata about it. Mayanta was curious now she wanted to know what's up, what are they talking about.

She asked DS about it and while she was questioning her Uday's dad spoke up

Mayanata: DS yeh kya hai jo humey pata nahi hai aur humarey barey mein hai. Uncle kis baat ki baat kar rahe hai?

Uday's Dad: Beta Maynata app unsey kya pooch rahi hai hum hi appko bata deyte hai, appki DS ney hum se waada kiya tha ke job hi Jaipur ki Yuvraani baney gi un ki shaadi who humarey betey Yuvraaj Udhayveer sey karey gi.

Maynata was shell shocked, she looked back at DS only to find her not looking back at her she was now looking down. Maynata didn't say anything she was way too shocked to react. Pictures of her and Aksash flashed through her mind. Suddenly those words sunk into her mind and she came out of her trail of thoughts. She had a lot of unanswered questions and she wanted answers for each one of them.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2

Mayanata: Yeh kya kehey rahe hai app? App sab jaantey hai ke mein Udhay se nahi Akash se pyaar karti hun.

Mahraja: Maynata yeh janti hai app kya kehey rahi hai? Ab app sirf Maynata nahi balkey Jaipur ki Yuvrani hai. Aisi baatein appko shoobha nahi deyti.

Udhay's Dad: Hum jaantey they yaha aise hi kuch honey wala hai, humey appse bilkul yehi umeed thi Yuvrani Maynata iss liye hum ney iss baar appki DS ki zaaban hi nahi unse papers per sign bhi liya hai. Takey who aain waqt per apni zaban se mukhar na jaye.

Maynata: yeh kya kehey rahe hai app. DS please kehdejiye yeh sab jhoot hai.

DS: SILENT

Maynata: DS app chup kyun hai kuch boliye na.. kehdejiye yeh sab jhoot hai. Please…Pleasee DS jawab dejiye..app chup kyun hai…jawab dejiye..

Finally DS broke her silence and spoke

DS: yeh sach hai Maynata..

To say Maynata was shocked would be an understatement; it was as if the whole world has come crashing down towards her. She felt she has been deceived again and yet again by the same people. People she called family her family.

Maynata now lost all little patience that she had; she went back to being Monya.

Maynata: App aisa kaise karsakti haii…appko koi haq nahi haii..yeh meri zindagi hai..appko kis ne haq diya meri zindagi ka itna bara faisala mujhse behgheir pooch kar leyne ka..kis ne..She shouted on top of her lungs. App jaise rishtedaaron se achaa tu mein anaat hoti.

As soon as those words escaped her mouth she felt a strong had on the left side of her face, SLAP. She was least expecting that. She went completely numb for a moment and when she finally realized what just happened. She turned her head to find her mother's angry eyes staring back at her.

Maaynata only managed to say a single word, she never expected this from her mother, and she always found her so understanding she couldn't believe what just happened.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 3

Maynata: Maa?

Komal: Mat kahiye humey maa…kya kaha app ney humari jaisi maa se acha app anat hoti. Himat kaise howi appki aise baat kartey howey aur who bhi DS sey. Who app ki daadi haii…sirf appka bhaala chahti. Aisa kya kardiya unho ne. Sirf yeh ke app k aaney wale kal ke baarey mein soocha ke appki shaadi paaki kar di…kya ghalat kiya?

Nobody has ever seen komal so angry before and that too with maynata, everyone was shocked.

Mayanta: kya ghalat kiya? App sab jaante hai k mein Akash se pyaar karti hun aur phir bhi app pooch rahi hai kya ghalat kiya?

Komal: Kon Akash? Kahin app wohi Akash ki baat tu nahi kar rahi jo appko buhat pehle chor kar chaala gaya hai..ya woh Akash jis ka 6 months se kuch aata paata nahi hai. Aur kis pyaar ki baat kar rahi hai app. Agar Akash app se pyaar karta tu who kab ka aa chukka hota, naa ke appko yaha akela chor deyta. Jis pyaar ki app dohiyaan deyti phirti hai kya uss ke baaarey mein kabhii soocha bhi hai. Yeh kaise pyaar hai jaha app ki kismet mein intezaar ke ilawa aur kuch nahi likha howa. Yeh kaisa pyaar hai..

Maynata was in tears now; all she wanted was her mother to stop.

Maynata: Bas kejiye maa bas kejiye..

Komal: Hum bas nahi karey gey app bas kejiye. App bas kejiye apna yeh pagal pan, app bas kejiye akash ka intezaar karna, app bas kejiye apni zindagi ke sath khelna. Bas kejiye Manyata ab bas bhi kejiye. AKASH CHALA GAYA HAI, AB WHO KABHI LAUT KAR NAHI AAYE GA…samjhi app…ab bas kejiye..bas kejiye bas kejiye..

With that komal burst into crying she couldn't see her daughter like this, she knew she has been too harsh on her but it's about time she face the truth. It has been 6 months and there was not a single news of Akash. He was gone and Manyata had to accept it.

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