Kya Pyaar hoga (FOURSOME FF) Chap 39 Pg 43

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First time I am posting a new FF. Hope you like it



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Character Sketch

Inderjeet Rajvansh: He is very rich industrialist in agra owner of Textile industry. He was in love with their Driver's daughter Kussum Mehta and married to her secretly without knowledge of family. On the other hand he was forced to marry Vasu kasyap due to power owned by Vasu's father. Today he has 2 son's Alekh from Vasu and Ranvir from Kussum. He loves his both sons Alekh and Ranvir but can't show his affection to Ranvir as he is bound with Vasu and Alekh who don't allow him to even look towards Ranvir. Even Ranvir don't want to do anything with Inderjeet.

Vasu Rajvansh: She is wife of Inderjeet rajvansh. She is Socialite, arrogant and shrewd lady can't take no as answer. She loved Inderjeet and knew about Inder and Kussum still to get Inder she played a dirty game with Inder and get pregnant with his child then forced Inder to Marry her.

Late Kussum Rajvansh/Mehta: She died when ranvir was 8 yr old. She was sweet lady with principals and self-respect when she heard about Inder and Vasu wedding she disconnected herself from Inder. She didn't informed Inder about her pregnancy and left the city to take care of Ranvir. But due to poverty she became ill when she saw her end is near she brought Ranvir in front of Inder and ask Inder to accept Ranvir which Inder refuse due to Vasu who gave him ultimatum either live her and Alekh or Ranvir and he chose Alekh and Vasu over Ranvir.

Alekh Rajvansh (21): He is son of Inderjeet Rajvansh and Vasu Rajvansh. He is compulsive flirt (within limits), drunk, status freak, arrogant, selfish, careless, don't take anything seriously. He was told by his mother that kussum cheated her and attracted his father in her beauty. He always remains rude to his father as he cheated his mother. He only loves one woman that is his mom. He hates Ranvir to the core and doesn't want to accept him as his brother. He has got power, fame and money from birth. He use them fully made him proud and doesn't believe in love and try to rule everyone comes in his way. He hates the word love.

Ranvir Rajvansh/Mehta (21): He is the son of Inderjeet rajvansh and Kusum Mehta and step brother of Alekh Rajvansh. He is arrogant, egoistic, ambitious, hard worker, with lots of attitude, selfish, completely cleanliness freak, bike rider, and love to take challenges and win them, live dangerous life, silence lover, loner (doesn't like to mingle with people), book lover. His mom died when he was 8 yr old he was left alone with a small house of his mother having no money. Even Inder also refuse to accept him. He studied on base of his intelligence, scholarship and hard work and hates Alekh Rajvansh to the core because Alekh had everything which he didn't have. He wants to earn power, fame and Money by hook or by crook as he feels power can rule anything. He is complete self-made person. He hates the word love, friendship and compassion.
Ragini Sharma (21): She is daughter of Prakash Chandra Sharma and Kaushlya Sharma businessman of Delhi. He has his own printing mill. She is arrogant, egoistic, with lots of attitude, proud, fame lover, try to look strong as nothing matter to her. Her parents share a very bad relation. They were married against their wish and never love each other just fight with each other. They were staying together because of ragini as they love her but never took time to show their affection to her. She uses to get all worldly toys, clothes, best schooling and college. She hates her parents and the institution of wedding most. She believes in show off and spends money like water.

Sadhna Malhotra (21): She is daughter of Keshav Malhotra and Seema Malhotra. Keshav is rich businessman of Karnal having big sugar mills under their belt. She is pampered, childish, Tom boy, arrogant, want to stand alone in male's world. She had seen this discrimination in her house where male dominates female especially in relation of husband and wife like her parents, chacha chachi or her 2 brothers and sister in laws. They are right even if they make mistakes and wives are wrong even if they don't make mistake. Sadhna was pampered because she was only daughter in complete house but still told her limitations like she was not allowed to argue, keep her POV in front of her brothers which she hated and become rebel. She hates marriage as she thinks her husband will also rule her.

These are 4 individuals who hate the love and marriage. What will happen when these 4 will meet will they ever know the meaning of love, friendship, marriage, sacrifice and happiness or all they will do is to hate.

INDEX
Chapter 1- page 1
Chapter 2- page 2
Chapter 3- page 3
Chapter 4- page 4
Chapter 5- page 5
Chapter 6- page 6
Chapter 7- page 6
Chapter 8- page 7
Chapter 9- page 8
Chapter 10- page 9
Chapter 11- page 10
Chapter 12- page 11
Chapter 13- page 12
Chapter 14- page 12
Chapter 15- page 13
Chapter 16- page 14
Chapter 17- page 15
Chapter 18- page 15
Chapter 19- page 16
Chapter 20- page 18
Chapter 21- page 20
Chapter 22- page 21
Chapter 23- page 23
Chapter 24- page 24
Chapter 25- page 25
Chapter 26- page 26
Chapter 27- page 27
Chapter 28 - page 29
Chapter 29 - page 30
Chapter 30 - page 31
Chapter 31 - page 33
Chapter 32 - page 34
Chapter 33 - page 36
Chapter 34 - page 38

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woweee yr ur ff sounds sooo mch kool
nd wndrful. Chrctr sktch of all esp awsum 4sum
is grt 😃 😉 luvd it so mch nd u reprsntd
alevir in so diff style niceee
waise yaha v vasu arrognt 😆 gud alekh itna
badhmsh woww 😃 nd likd sadi's thnkng
abt marriage 😆 grttt pls cont soon.
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amazing rachu. you always think amazing OS AND FF. I am waiting for this continue soon and good luck
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CHAPTER 1

Its bright sunny morning, roads are full with people and everyone is doing morning chores. It's 8:00 am in the morning. In the city a big mansion is shown all the servants are busy making breakfast. Servants were carrying breakfast in a room. This room was a very big room which is equipped with everything Double bed, big almirah TV, Music system, Football net, Jim on one side. Though this was big room but was messy Walls were filling with posters of girls, Dumbbell fallen on floor, towel hanging on tread mill, jacket and skates were fallen on the floors. One of the servant falls due the skates.

A boy was sleeping on the bed unaware of his surroundings and suddenly he hears the voice of someone falling down he looked towards the person irritated and threw something on the servant and got up with jerk and shout "get out of my room, don't show me your face". His face was shown he was Alekh Rajvansh. He hates when someone disturbs his sleep. Servant carrying food tray left the place. Vasu saw him going stopped him and asks him to leave his breakfast and leave. She enters Alekh's room and ask him "Good morning beta".

Alekh" Good morning Ma, what kind of servants have u kept in the house they disturbed me early morning".
Vasu "Early morning beta it's 8:00 am. Today your result is coming and u are still sleeping. Get up today your result for entrance exam for best management college in Delhi".
Alekh "Why are you worrying ma. I will top these exams too like I always top my college with your influence and that Ranvir is always behind me."
Vasu "Alekh this is not college exams where my influence will work it is entrance exam of the university where u have to score at least 50% then only they will give you admission that too because of my power else they don't take students below 90% . If Ranvir enter that college and you don't get there through then it will be your biggest loss. You can't loose from him son you can't loose from him".
Alekh "Don't worry ma I will never let that ranvir to win from him. He is here to loose and I am here to win always. I have never let him win and will never let him win."

Both Vasu and Alekh came down and Vasu asked servant" where is Inder".
Servant said "I saw him going out half hr before".
Vasu says "Where inder went in such morning. Today there is no meeting".
Alekh "Mom where else he can go he must have gone to meet him. He doesn't care for me all he cares about him".

Far away from the mansion there is a small house. The house has just a room kitchen and bathroom. Room is very neat and clean is equipped with single bed, table chair, a self with nicely placed books; Almirah with clothes properly pressed, wall had just one pic of lady with garland.

A boy came from shower wearing tee-shirt water was dripping from his hairs he drying his hairs with Towel. He removed the curtain of his room and turn around he was Ranvir Rajvansh no Ranvir Mehta. He loves cleanliness too much and can't tolerate little dust in his room.

He was looking at the pic remembering how his mother died, how he refused any help from Inderjeet Rajvansh that name he hates the most, how he struggled in these years. He had done so many menial jobs for living, how he studied day and night to come to fulfil his dream. Today the result of this entire struggle is going to come and he was waiting for the result of Entrance exam. He knew once he gets admission in this college all his dreams will be fulfilled. He was about to sit for study suddenly doorbell rings.

Ranvir (to himself) "Who is there in such a morning. It's just 8:00 am."
He opened the door and saw a man. His expression changes to bitter and he left the door open and turned his back to the person.
Ranvir (rudely) "Why are you here?"
Inderjeet "Beta today your result is coming and I am here to give you my bless'."
Ranvir "Don't even dare to say this word. I don't need your blessing whatever I got I got on my own with my hard work. Now I also I will become successful on my own. By the way did you ask your dear wife and son before coming to meet me?"
Inder "I know you are angry with me beta but'."
Ranvir "Why would I be angry with you. You get angry with a person with whom you share any relation. I don't care about u so why would I be angry with you. You don't exist for me. So kindly leave the place before I forget last bit of decency. I am getting late as I have to go and check my result."
Inder gave the last look at Ranvir and left the place disappointed. Ranvir too left from there angrily to go to Internet cafe to check his result.

Inder enters Rajvansh house dejected on seeing him Alekh got angry and taunted "how was your trip to that man's house he insulted u na. Still u will go and meet him knowing he is so arrogant."
Inder to Alekh "he is my son like you are I want to bless him."
Alekh "Today even my result is coming out you didn't thought to bless me when I am in same house but u went to give him your blessing who even don't care to talk with you properly." He left the place angrily.

Inder was sad and disappointed to think though he has 2 sons and people feel I am lucky but none of them is ready to understand me. Vasu came there and said "This only happen when people sail in 2 boats they tend to stuck in between the boats". She too leaves leaving him alone.

Meanwhile Ranvir in internet cafe checked his result and he topped the exam and called for interview day after tomorrow. He was happy that finally he got selected and now all his dreams will be fulfilled. He left cafe and was going home. A car came from back and stopped just behind him. He turned around to see Alekh was there.

Ranvir (Tauntingly) "Someone has forgotten his way and came here. What happened did your company go bankrupt and you are on roads?"
Alekh "Hello I am not here to talk nonsense with you. I have come to warn you. Don't try to come in my way else you will repent."
Ranvir "Oh so you came to know I once again topped the exam. What happened didn't your Mumma's power worked here and you couldn't change the result. Don't worry Alekh Rajvansh this is just the beginning after this you will face so many defeats now onwards."
Alekh "What you think by topping exam you will get through the interview and get admission in the college and I will not get the admission then I am sorry you are underestimating our power. I will definitely get admission in the college."
Ranvir "If you have so much confidence then why you are so scared and why are you here."
Alekh "I just came to warn you else your heart will get broken once you don't get admission there."
Ranvir "Oh my god I am moved how much you care for me. We will see who will get through and whose heart will break. I have a habit and can handle my heart so don't worry about me just worry about your heart as your week heart will not be able to tolerate a heart break. Now if your stupid discussion is over can I leave? You don't have any work but my time is precious."
Alekh to himself "This much attitude ok so you are out for competition come to college I will see you there only one person can win the race and that person is me Alekh Rajvansh."
Ranvir to himself "You have always won by cheating but now I will make sure you will never win Alekh Rajvansh. This admission is my dream and I will never let anyone come in between me and my dreams now."
Edited by Prishna_DBPS - 13 years ago
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Thanks for liking the CS. It was on Moni's insistance and ever her inputs are there in this FF. You can say she is writing along with me.
Edited by Prishna_DBPS - 13 years ago
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OMG amazing first chapter. Full of fights and anger but yet amazing. Love the chapter. I thought I am watching a show not reading an FF.

Its amazing. waiting for coming chapters

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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all sooo Shoolllyyy For so delay in commenting . Soo Sooryyy .

Ok Now My Twiinieee . What 2 say .🤗 U started a mindblowing FF my sweetu . n Wowww CS of every1 is Fantastic and Superb . Exactly What We all wanted 2 see . Amazingnly Written 👏 .

FIRSTCHAPTER . OMGGG Wowww Beautifully Written and Kya dhasu hottt Entry Di jaan tune Alevir ko Wowww mazaa aa gayaa .Ranvir from Shower 😍 😉 Just 2 2 2 Good . haiii Kya gussaa hai Ranvir ka , Just 2 hottt , I can very well imagine Kinshuk as hott angry young man 😍
Ur dis line Ranvir (Tauntingly) "Someone has forgotten his way and came here. What happened did your company go bankrupt and you are on roads?" made me 🤣 . Too Good 😆😆

Jitna bolu utna kam hai , Simply outstanding . Very Very interesting . Watnggg eagerly for 2nd chap . Jaldi update karna 😉

And Atlast Thanks a lottt for starting the FF .This FF gonna rockkk . I am damnn sure . n Every1 gonna lovee it n I hope RS chooses exactly this FF and CS for B2 . 😃 .

Edited by moniluvskinshuk - 13 years ago
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I know i am bit too much..but next chapter pls...you are fantastic...
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WOWww bombastic chaptrrrt totallyyy
👏 👏 Marvellousss amazinggg
Yr u made alekh totally hotty nd soo much
attitude one!!!! Evn i likd his room
description superbbb ⭐️ mindblowing
when he shoutd at servnt he mst b luking
so angry young man omg m dyinggg
Lovd d alevir fight sooo so mchh
plsss yr cont sooonnn
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Wow I am loving this FF already first chapter is awesome so the rest is bound to be. 😃

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