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Posted: 13 years ago
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Na bole tum na maine kuch kaha... Loved dis part... Gud 1... Waiting 4 next part...!!
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Great..!
Loved the Manvi VS Maya scene..!
Amazing..!
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Wow, Manvi couldn't stand Maya taunting Virat... I really enjoyed this update
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Nicely written, maanvi as virat's fiance cool,waiting for the nxt ,i am to see wht happens at the party.
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one of the best updates so far!! cant wait 2 c wat happens in the party now!!!! pm me!!!
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wow... Manvi couldn't stand Maya taunting Virat cool...😉😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I have read this in one day and by god you are amazing you should be the writer for the show!! Sach mein tussi great ho yaar.
Please pm when you update im on theedge here!
Thank you for putting up such a great story!!!
All the best for your future pieces!
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Hayye i
Luved the sherni maamvi continue soon and please pm me when u do
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Wow that was very sweet please PM me when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys, thank you so much for liking part 13 and for your amazing comments.

PART 14

THE NEXT DAY…

(IN VIRAT'S ROOM)

Manvi and Virat were walking to and fro in Virat's room , thinking super hard .

Manvi : Virat tumne kucch soccha ?

Virat : Nahi yaar . Dimak mein koi idea nahi aa rahi hain .

Manvi : Dimak hoga toh idea aayegi naa…

Virat : Shut up .

And then they both again started moving to and fro. They both were thinking on how to make Rohan and Kiya come together. Kiya had confessed it to Manvi that she liked Rohan and Rohan had confessed it to Virat that he liked Kiya and now Manvi and Virat were playing the Jodi joiners .

Manvi : Idea…

Virat : Kya idea???

Manvi : Virat kyun na hum letter likhe ? Tum Rohan kii taraf se aur main Kiya kii taraf se .

Virat ( looks deep in her eyes ) : Tum pagal ho gayi ho ??? Tumhare issi letters kii idea se already do bar problems hui hain aur ab tum hattrick marna chahti ho .

Manvi : Matlab ?

Virat : Kyun yaad nahi , tumne joh letter likha that Bhabhi ko Dr. Manan kii taraf se usse kitna problem hua tha aur phir woh letter joh tumne Swamini bua ko likha tha Bhai kii taraf se…unn dono letters se kitni problems hui thi aur ab tumhe teesra letter likhna hain . Jodi joiner ho ya Jodi breaker?

Manvi : Toh ab kya ?

Virat : Socch ne do…

And then they started thinking again … and then they got the perfect idea at the same time .

Manvi : Mujhe solution mil gaya .

Virat : Mujhe bhi aur mera solution tumhare solution se zyaada hain .

Manvi : Nahiii mera zyaada accha hain .

Virat : No Manvi , mera zyaada accha hain . Dekho hum unn dono ko ek kamre mein akele chod denge taaki woh dono khud baat kar sake . Waise hii jaise humne bhai aur bhabhi ke liye kiya tha .

Manvi : Haaaw…Virat maine bhi bilkul yehi soccha tha … wow kya tuning hain humari .

Virat : Toh ab hum unn dono kii tuning bhi acchi kare .

Manvi : Haan .

And then they went out of the room .

IN THE EVENING…

Virat and Manvi were standing with Rohan and Kiya .

Manvi : Kiyaa chal na library mein chalte hain…tujhe koi kitab dekhni thi na wahan .

Kiya : Um haan…

Virat : Chal Rohan hum bhi library mein jaate hain…I want to show you something .

And then the four of them went to the library .

IN THE LIB..

They all four had come in the libraray and then Manvi and Virat put their plan to action. Manvi was showing Kiya the books and Rohan was browsing the books himself when Virat faked a call . His phone started ringing.

Virat : Oh…um mere dost ka main bahar jaa ke baat kart a hoon yahan par signal nahi milta .

And then he went out and right five minutes after he called Manvi on her cell and she made the same excuse and went out leaving Rohan and Kiya alone.

Manvi and Virat looking from outside that what was brewing in the library.

IN THE LIBRARY…

Rohan and Kiya were looking at each other . Rohan recollected what Virat had said to him once . Virat had told him that whenever he got a chance to be alone with Kiya he should profess his love to her and on the other hand Manvi had advised the same to Kiya .

Rohan ( going by the advice ) : Um Kiya mujhe tumse kucch kehna hain .

Kiya : Mujhe bhi…tum pehle kahon na .

Rohan : No…pehele tum kaho.

Kiya : Nahi Rohan tum pehle kaho .

Manvi and Virat were getting impatient outside .

Rohan ( closing his eyes and then goes on his knees ) : Kiya…Tum meri bahut acchi dost hon . You understand me from in and out and know I have understood that which life partner I was finding , that's only in you … I love you Kiya.

There was silence all around … Dhak – dhak … dhak – dhak…Maniv , Virat and Rohan's hands were beating super fast . What would Kiya's answer be ???

Kiya : Rohan kya tum khade ho jaoge ?

Rohan stands up .

Kiya looks deep in his eyes and then hugs him .

Kiya : I love you too Rohan

Virat and Manvi were on cloud nine at that time , their plan had worked , they had played the role of Jodi joiners . Manvi's face lighted up as soon as she saw Kiya hug Rohan . Virat wasn't less happy . They decided to leave Kiya and Rohan alone now and so they went and started doing some decos of the house as it was Viren Jeevika's wedding anniversary the next day .

IN THE PARTY NEXT DAY…

Virat and Rohan were ready and were waiting for Manvi and Kiya to come and then they came both looking equally gorgeous . Manvi in a purple suit and Kiya in a blue one .

Manvi and Kiya came and stood near Virat and Rohan . Virat couldn't get his eyes of Manvi … she was looking beautiful .

Manvi felt Virat's gaze on her and tried to divert his attention .

Manvi : Di aur Jiju kahan hain ?

Virat : I know abhi taka aye nahi .

And then the couple of the night came . Jeevika in a red saari and Viren in blue sherwani . Both looking stunning .

Manvi went to Jeeviak and hugged her : Wow di aaj aap aur jiju acche lag rahe ho , agar mera bas chalta toh aap dono kii abhi yahan par doosri shaadi karwa deti .

Jeevika blushed while all other laughed .

Virat : Accha aur phir kya aap iss baar bhi missing rehti ya phir gate pe pooja kii thaal sajaye humara welcome karti .

Manvi : Main na gate par ek bada sa board leke khadi ho jaati jis pe likha hua hota kii yahn par chep logon kaa aana sakt mana hain aur phir jab tum woh board dekh U-turn lelete tab main shaadi enjoy karti .

Virat : Accha , toh phir main wahan se jaata hii nahi…wahi pe aapke saath khada rehta.

Manvi made faces at him and Virat smiled .

Viren : Phir se shuru ho gaye tum dono kabhi toh shaanti banaye rakha karo .

Manvi : Theek hain jiju sirf aaj ke liye aapki persnol request samjh kar main aaj Virat se jhagda nai karoongi .

Virat : Main bhi .

Viren : Thank You so much both of you . Ab chale .

They all went and started enjoying the party .Viren and Jeevika were talking to all the guest and Virat and Manvi standing together and then Virat saw her come in the Vadhera house .

Virat ( in mind) : Yeh yahan sacchi mein aagayi … merit toh lagi , wait sirf meri hii kyun Manvi – meri fianc woh bhi ab phas gayi . Very nice sab Manvi ke wajah se hii hua hain .

Virat saw Manvi smiling...she hadn't noticed her come and so Virat thought of bringing Manvi to the notice .

Virat : Manvi , tumne mall mein Maya ko invite kiya tha na party mein aane ke liye .

Manvi : Haan but don't worry woh nahi aayegi .

Virat : Aur agar aa gayi toh??

Manvi : Toh dekh lenge…joh hota hain woh hoga.

Virat : Toh dekhna shuru kar do .

Manvi looks at him with confused eyes and Virat with his eyes shows Maya, who was standing at the door , to Manvi .

Manvi's face smiles fades and her eyes widen .

Manvi : Yeh yahan kya kar rai hain?

Virat : Manviji agar aapko by, any chance ,short term memory loss kii bimari hain toh main aapko yaad dila deta hoon kii Maya ko aaphi ne invite kiya tha .

Manvi : Mujhe kya pata tha kii Maya sacchi mein aa jayegi .

Virat : Par ab kya kare woh aa gayi hain .

Manvi : Main kucch karti hoon , tum bas mere saath chalo .

Virat : Tum kya karne waali ho ?

Manvi : Challo na yaar… and then she took hold of his wrist and they both went to Maya .

Manvi : Hi Maya…mujhe bahut khushi hui kii tum mere kehne par pary mein aa gayi , Thank you so much.

Maya smiles…Virat kept silent , he didn't want to interrupt Manvi .

Manvi : Waise Maya , Rishab nahi aaya?

Maya : Nahi woh usse thoda kaam tha toh….

Manvi : Oh…

Maya turned her attention somewhere else and Manvi started whispering to Virat .

Manvi : Virat tum kucch bol kyun nahi rahe ho … sab kucch main hii bol rahi hoon .

Virat : Main kya boloon… yeh sab tumhari idea thi .

Manvi : Aisa samjho kii Maya kii jagah par main khadi hoon aur tumhe mujhe taunt karna hain , toh tum kaise karte…aur phir waise hii taunting tone mein Maya se bolo .

Virat : But why should I imagine you in place of Maya ?

Manvi : Arre kunkii tum mujhse nafrat karte hon…humesha mujhse ladai karte ho toh theek waise hii iss baar Maya ke saath karo.

Virat : Par tumse kisne kahan kii main tumse nafrat karta hoon ?

Manvi ( turns to look at him- little frustratedly) : Nafrat nahi toh kya pyaar karte ho mujhse ?

And then she realized what she said…she saw it in his eyes that he was telling the truth , he didn't hate her at all . She turned to look away from him .

Manvi : Maya aao main tumhe meri di se milaati hoon .

And then she took Maya to meet Jeevika and on the other hand Viren came to meet Virat .

Viren : Virat woh Maya thi na ? Woh yahan kya kar rahi hain ?

Virat : Kya bataoo bhai … and then he told the whole mall story to Viren and Viren started laughing after hearing the whole story .

Viren : Sirf Manvi hii aisa kucch socch sakti hain .

Virat : Dekhiye naa bhai … humari dosti ko engagement ka roop de diya .

Viren : Sirf dosti…

He could have said more but then at that time Swamini bua called everyone for the cake cutting . Everyone went and Virika cut the cake…and now everyone of the family was giving gifts to them . Everyone gave gifts and now was Manvi's turn .

Manvi ( giving the love band's box .) : Di aur Jiju , yeh meri taraf se aapke liye ek chota sa gift . Main aap dono ke liye kucch bada lana chahti thi par mujhe waisa kucch mila hii nahi . Sorry .

Viren ( after seeing the bands ) : Manvi tum aisa kyun socch thi ho kii yeh gift accha nahi hain . Yeh bahut accha hain aur ek aur baat . Tumhare har gigts bahut special hote . Agar woh size mein chote hota hain na tobhi unnmein tumhare dher saara pyaar hota hain joh uss gift ko special banata hain.

Manvi totally surprised looks at Virat and then Viren .

Manvi : Wow jiju aapki aur Virat kii soch kitni milti hain… mall mein jab maine Virat ko love bands ke bare mein bataya toh ussne bhi mujhse same chhez kahi joh abhi aapne kahi hain .

Viren goes near Virat

Viren : Haan toh kyun na ho , akhir bhai hain hum khoon ka rishta hain humara .

Everyone laughed…and started enjoying the party .

After some time .

All the couples , including Kiya and Rohan , were dancing when Maya came near Virat and Manvi .

Maya : Tum dono dance nahi kar rahe ho ? Afterall ab tumhari bhi shaadi hone waali hain .

Manvi : Huh…um , woh … actually woh kya hain na… Manvi didn't know what to say…she was stuck but Virat wasn't . He thought that this was the perfect time to make her realize her stupidity.

Virat : Haan Manvi hume bhi dance karna chahiye na…and then he took Manvi's wrist and they went to the dance floor .

Virat pulled Manvi near him and wrapped his hands to her waist and started dancing . Manvi was surprised…she didn't have time to react at Virat's action and now she found herself looking in his eyes and dancing .

Manvi ( silently) : Virat tum yeh kya kar rahe ho ?

Virat : Kyun Manvi , couple hain hum … hume toh dance karna chahiye .

Manvi : Nahi Virat….

Virat : Shhh…

And then they kept dancing .

Tu hi meri hai saari zameen
Chaahe kahin se chaloon
Tujhpe hi aake rukoon
Tere siwa main jaoon kahaan
Koi bhi raah chunoon
Tujhpe hi aake rukoon

Tum mile toh lamhe tham gaye
Tum mile toh saare gam gaye
Tum mile toh muskurana aa gaya
Tum mile toh jaadu cha gaya
Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya
Tum mile toh maine paaya hai khuda

Tujh mein kinaara dikhe
Dil ko sahara dikhe
Aa meri dhadkan thaam le
Teri taraf hi mude
Yeh saans tujhse jude
Har pal yeh tera naam le

Tum mile toh ab kya hai kami
Tum mile toh duniya mil gayi
Tum mile toh mil gaya aasra
Tum mile toh jaadu cha gaya
Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya
Tum mile toh maine paaya hai khuda

Din mere tujhse chalein
Raatein bhi tujhse dhalein
Hai waqt tere haath mein
Tu hi shehar hai mera
Tujhme hi ghar hai mera
Rehta hai tere saath mein

Tum mile toh mil gaya humsafar
Tum mile toh khud ki hai khabar
Tum mile toh rishta sa ban gaya
Tum mile toh jaadu cha gaya
Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya
Tum mile toh maine paaya hai khuda

That was the song playing . Manvi and Virat kept dancing…at the end Virat made Manvi half drop and held her waist tightly not allowing her to fall . They kept looking in each other's eyes . Manvi didn't know why she couldn't tear her gaze . They were bought back to reality on hearing the loud applause of everyone and it was then that they found themselves alone on the dance floor and everyone else just looking at them .

Hey guyz that was part 14…hope you all liked it…please post your amazing comments . Love you!!!

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