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Posted: 13 years ago
already commentdWaiting for the next part now plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful n mastiwale update...

d bonding b/w d frnds n mainly b/w our three masketiers is really amazing...d way dey make aaadi n his frns fool...its really superb...


i loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey hiii dearies...
iam here to inform u all that i may not able to update for 15 days as my final exams are very near😭😭..but i'll defo try whenever i'll get the time..so plz bear with me and ha dont forget me and my ff's..i'll be cmng online but i may not able to update as i have to concentrate on my studies now..sorry for that...
love u all
-mona
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii guys how are u all?????me back with update after so many days...i hope u all remember me...

hey guys this is the last pm for this ss from this account..if u want further updates plz add "monachweetie" to ur buddy list..or else tell me in ur comments..i'll add u...

hey updating now...

anybody is here????
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Posted: 13 years ago


[banner credit goes to sakshi di😊]

DOSTI YA PYAAR

part-3



Three of them drove back to their places…



Maan and aadi slowly entered the house on tip toes…maan however entered his room and closed the door…he switched on the light and shocked to see his dad standing there with crossed arms…


Maan gives a weak smile to him and fumbles papa…wo..mein..golu…geetu



"Party mein gaye the..right!" dad completes..



Maan smirks at him not knowing how to react…


Dad comes to him and says"happy new year beta" while smiling…



Maan smiles back at his dad and hugs him.."happy new year papa"wishes back..



"beta it's not good to go in late night parties" says lovingly while cupping his face..



"sorry papa.."says with pleading eyes while holding his ears…



Dad smiles and hugs him..



Maan:papa iam feeling very sleepy…good night now says while yawning..



Dad:hmm..but before that you have to eat something ok…



Maan:how do you know that I didn't eat anything…asks confusingly….


Oh geetu informed you na…i know her..



Dad smiles while nodding….



Maan:no papa don't feel like eating anything now…I don't feel hungry…I just want to sleep…



Dad:ok beta good night..

Next morning:

"geet beta wake up …it's already late now..dont u want to go college?" says rano while struggling to wake up geet…




"mama plz sone do na..i didn't had enough sleep"mumbles while hugging her teddy more tightly…




"hmm…if you spend whole night in the party then how can u have good sleep ha??"



Geet gasps and wakes up immediately…..



"mama aapko kese pata??"asks rano in a shocked state…



"hmm…you forgot that my beta is with you…how can he forget to inform me..ha.."says rano while smiling…



Geet smiles back at her…"are wah my maanu became very responsible"



"ab chalo get ready soon..u have to go to college na.."



She's about to get up from there but geet hugs her tightly and says"happy new year mama"



Rano wishes her back while hugging…



Geet gets ready as soon as she can and then reaches maan's house..(KM)



As soon as she entered inside the KM she finds maan's dad there…she immediately runs to him and hugs him side ways…



"good morning uncle and happy new year"



Dad smiles at her and kisses her hair.."thank u beta and wish u the same"


Geet:"uncle where is maan??"


Dad:beta he is sleeping…


Geet:what!!!!abhi tak so raha hai…uncle we have to go to college..it's already late now…wait I'll wake him up..




She then enters maan's room just to find him sleeping fully covered himself with quilt…geet glares at him while placing her both arms on her waist.."abhi tak so raha hai"




She goes near the bed and removes the quilt just to find his legs in place of his face..



"uff…ye maan bhi na kabhi teek se nahi sotha hai…"



She then removes the quilt fully and finds maan sleeping like a baby on his stomach….



"maan uto…"calls him lovingly…



But there is no response from maan instead he pulls back quilt and covers himself again…



"maan wake up..it's already late…college nahi jaana hai kya??maan…."she continuosly tries to wake him up but maan still sleeps peacefully..



Geet then moves near his ear and shouts maan…in his ear..



Maan immediately gets up and looks at her with terrified expressions….



Geet laughs out loudly at maan….maan glares at her but for geet's surprise he smirks and falls back on bed…



Geet:maan…not again…maan plz wake up..



"geetu sone do na…"mumbles maan


"no maan..it's already late..wake up now"literally shouts but there is no response from maan…



Geet:ye maan bhi na…I think maan will win over kumbhkaran if we conduct a sleeping competition between them…


"ab mein kya karu…"literally scrathes her hair not knowing how to wake up her kumbhkaran…


She smirks as she takes out her mobile and dials maan number…


"maan ur phone is ringing get up and attend the call"looks at maan hopefully..but dissapointing her maan just mumbles"golu ka hi hoga tu answer kar"





Geet makes baby face as she fails again..suddenly one more idea clicks in her mind…she again dials maan's number from her mobile…she acts as if she is attending the call



"hello..ha sameera bolo"



That's it! maan opens his eyes wide in shock….



Geet smiles when she found maan in shock and continues.."ha u want to talk to maan…."



Here maan had terrified expressions on his face and pleading geet silently not to tell about him…



"maan..!maan toh yaha" looks at maan with raised eyebrows…



Maan is continuosly pleading her not to tell about him…geet smiles at his plight..



"ha sameera maan yaha toh nahi hai…but he's coming to college..we'll meet there ok bye"




Maan takes a relaxing sigh and is about to sleep again..



Geet:maan no..go and get ready for college..otherwise….i'll call uncle.."



"accha!u are threatening me ha…I don't want to come to college now"



He is about to sleep again but geet threatens him saying"maan if u'll sleep now I'll call sameera again and ask her to come here directly"




"no!!no!!dont call her..it is better to get ready than bearing her"says maan..while getting up irritatingly..



Geet smiles"that's like my maanu..now go and get ready"


She somehow suceeds in mission 'wake up maan' and then both headed towards karan's home…




As soon as maaneet entered karan's home…they found karan's dad questioning him something…



"karan iam asking you something..where were you last night??"



Maan intrudes saying "ab kya kahe uncle...hamare professor ki biwi ki mauth hogayi thi..so we went to console him(pretends as if he is very sad)..




Here karan continuosly signals him not to say anything but maan fails to understand him..



"oh! koun hai o professor??" asks dad very seriously…

Maan:aur koun shreedar malhotra…bechara he was very sad yesterday….(pretends again)



Karan again signals him to stop but maan wont look at him and continues…



"and uncle his wife was very good lady..she used to call me her son…but..god is very cruel..he took her away..bechara shreedar sir"(makes almost cry face)



When maan is busy in himself geet notices that karan is signalling maan to look behind him…she confusingly looks back and shocked to see their professor there standing behind maan and continuosly glaring him….



Here maan is busy in building his stories and karan's dad is listening to him seriously…


Geet and karan are looking at each other with terrified expressions and not knowing how to stop maan..geet finally says"good morning..shreedar sir"




Maan is shocked to hear that name..he immediately turns back to find him glaring…



Maan gives a weak smile to him.."good..good morning sir..kese hai aap??mein aap hi ke bhare mein keh reha tha..hai na geetu..



"oh! what you were saying??"asks while adjusting his spects…



"mein…wo mein…ha…I was saying that you are best professor in our college and…


"shut up!!"he says…


maan looks at karan's dad who was looking at him and then his sir…


"maan tum bhi na.."his sir says while laughing out out loudly…karan's dad also laughs out loudly who already noticed him coming inside and stood there…



"tumhe bahana banana bhi nahi aatha"says still smiling at maan…



Karan maan and geet also smiles…


"btw my wife passed away 5 years back…not yesterday"


Maan:sorry sir..wo mein..


"hey don't be sorry..i know I know..even I used these type of tricks during my college days..so take it easy my boy"


"sir aap yaha??"asks karan's dad..


"ha..i have some work with you"

Then both of them goes to discuss their work…


Maan settles himself in the couch relaxingly.."uff..thankgod!"


Geet slaps him on his arm.."maan u'll never change na..why u'll do all these things??if sir would have taken it seriously then what??u'll never listen to me na…


Maan:bas bas…ab bas bhi karo teacher ji…plz don't start again..sir didn't said anything na..then leave it…aur waise bhi mein ye sab golu ke liya kaha na…to save him..but my plan backfired this time…no problem next time we'll never do any mistake in forming bahana…kyun golu"winks at karan…


Karan smiles and winks at him…


"maan…"

They turns to see karan's mom there…


Maan goes to her and hugs her.."hey hiii sexy…missed u"


She slapped on his arm"badmash…how many times I said not to call me like that…if anyone listens this..then what they'll think??"


Maan encircles his arm around her shoulder..and says"they'll think that my sweet heart is looking really sexy" winks at her..


"haww…shaitan…tuje chodungi nahi.."she starts chasing him but stops after few minutes as she is tired now..


Maan comes to her and says sorry while holding ears..

She smiles and hugs him…

Maan:hey sweet heart iam feeling very hungry.."asks her making baby face…

"accha!chalo we'll have breakfast" says with concerned face...

Then all of them had breakfast pulling each other legs…sometimes geet pulling maan's leg saying about sameera and both pulling karan's leg calling him golu which irritates him...finally they finished breakfast and started to their college…

Precap:

College masti….

And geet saving maan from sameera…


hariks's entry...

Hey guys I know this is fully pakav update…plz forgive me for this..i wrote this to show their bonding and maan's masti attitude… plz plz bear with me this time…

Iam really very very sorry once again…



hope u guys like it...please press like and do comment...

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love...

-mona

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Posted: 13 years ago
update maan bahaana sareed sir sameera ka phone



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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update...
Nd tnq tnq tnq 4 da pm ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
party n returned home late.Wah Maan ka style.Very sweet.Geet idea really good.Bechara Maan he got slapped.😲.Wah new year day per college.Us din to holiday hita hai 😆.so why they go to collage.Pittne k liye 😃.Loved the update.But sarra silliness Maan he karega 😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
mona... 🤗
awesome awesome awesome update..
loved it to the core...
i really really enjoyed reading it...
wow... maan came late from the party n his dad is too cool yaar.. he wished him n asking him to have dinner...
ahhh geet's way of waking up maan... hehehe sameera... lolzzz i was laughing on maan's plight...
n what a bahana yaar... poor sir... maan bach gaya... hehehehe...
yaar i am in love with is cool maan... he is too good yaar... i love u maanuuu... muahhh
yaar continue soon...

love u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You For The PM

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