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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you SO much for your patience guys. I am extremely sorry for not updating this. To be honest, I am having a writer's block regarding this story 😆 Res-ing for an update on the next page so DO NOT comment :P I might be able to finish up the next chapter tonight or the day after 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
JO! :D

You write beautifully, woman! :D
I love the way the story is flowing! <3
Well, I'm a sucker for those angst stories basically!
(Yeah, call me a sadist, Idc :P :D)

Arnav hurting Khushi, Khushi NOT giving in that easily, Arnav having to go through hell, EARN her trust back.. totally the type that I love to read!


First part was angsty! <3
I loved the way it was written!
How it was Anjali who was strong, and she actually saw through the facade of her husband!
And then that dialogue..about he was no longer her Chotey, or even Arnav for that matter, he was ASR...Stunning! <3
Yeah and the way Akaash intervened! <3
I loved the characterisation! :)
Oh and the last para ofc!
The BEST man! <3
Everything in it just got to me! :)

On to the second part now! :D
Khushi's independent? :D
Women power man! FTW! xD
And that letter part, about her trust being broken, AND that eyes part, the whole of it...Beautiful! VERY! <3

I love this! :D
Jaded love! <3
Now, just update this SOON! :D

Oh and I just saw that you have res-sed a spot already!
YAY! *woot* *woot*
Edited by Richie-Rich - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wooo !!!
I read the whole thing right now after the latest OS you had posted !!!
And I love this SS... Its just sooo amazing... I love the way Anjali instead of being the potrayed as the dumb person, finally appears as the one who makes herborther realise that it was Shyam wrong all along !! And Aakash speaking up to him , and that CD .. That was a scene I loved a lot... And then the broken Arnav the despair he feels on being unable to see his broken hearted sister, and on seeing Khushi also lost he goes blank... The scene was just amazing tooo

And the flashbacks... So 3 years and Khushi is finally to slowly let go of it ... It will take her time to trust, but I guess Arnav is strong enough to wait for her... I loved the way NK is potrayed here...the loyal friends, keeping up his wors and giving Arnav the letter... But but but what was there in the letter ?? Do we get to read it pll pll plll
And Arnav has met her already at the University and she did talk to him... No fight and 2 boxes of jalebi every friday ?? Khushi's just like the luckiest woman in your fic.. ANd what happened to Anjali ?? I know you'd answer them all when you write it, but im very curious...
Loving this SS Jo🤗


Im gonna add up the 3rd chap comment here itself !!
Edited by -Shobz.TaAnu- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
like this SS..N I like Anjali in this too...coz she is smarter than Arnav😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
Main late ho gayi :(
Res :P

Okay, I officially love this story, not that I didn't already, but this chapter made me fall in love with it all over again. Its so realistic, I love how they're both taking one step at a time because that makes it so much more exciting to read. Oh and I also love this strong headed, independent Khushi.
She's a boss forreeeall! 😛


Edited by reyabear - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww. you're still on the first page of the update :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
I know! I thought I was going to be on the next page, so yay! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Updated on Page 26 😳
Edited by ..Jojo.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res
Edit!!!
I loved this!!!especially the more confident,practical mature and strkng khushi!!!
You have portrayed her character soo well!!!!loved how she explained why she had to return the money...:)...the old khushi hasnot died but she has just grown a little...:)
The best part is they are not at eachother's throats anymore...they are much more mature and they understand each other...:)
Loved how khushi slapped that awesome answer on sharma's face!!it was like someone else took over her!!Mthe old khushi would have shed a few tears and would have given a similar retort but this one...nah...she didnt evn let a single tear out of her eye!!that's what i want to see!!!a strong woman like her!!!:)
Edited by DM1810 - 13 years ago

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