Hi, Bidz 🤗 : Just read your update! I was a bit taken aback with Mohan here...I did not expect him to lie to Baa...I mean there are limits to pushing the bad boy & 'the rules don't apply' attitude...I also thought it was a bit out of character for Baa to believe Mohan over her own grand daughter...Particularly since she knows how Kastur has been hurt by her own parents! I'm not saying Baa needs to shelter her, but a more in-depth conversation with Kastur would have saved Baa some heartache later...
I'm intrigued why Kastur went to the jail cell; to bail him out? Why should she care? She taught him a lesson, he got what he deserved! Why the bailout or the visit?
I love how your characters are well defined...I'm completely in love with this FF! Can't wait for the next chapter...Maybe Kastur plays an unwilling 'nurse' to Mohan!? 😊