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PART 31b

geet was either running or walking hurriedly to find someone...been outskirts she only found very few people...she was relieved when she saw a tata sumo at a distance with none nearby...
after reaching nearer she saw a man talking on phone with coconut in his hand...she assumed him to be the owner of that vehicle..

i will send money when i get it
try to get that in ur head
n DO NOT buy any gold now

uncle..i want lift to hyderabad...please uncle its very urgent...

john eyed her from top to bottom...she had loads of jewels on her...he thought he had a chance...he immediately told on phone

my dear wife...u go ahead n buy anything u want

he gave the coconut to geet to hold it and he opened the passenger seat for her
he took it back n made her seat comfortably

thank you uncle

***********************

here near the marriage venue maan khanna n maan khurana were tied to a same pole...

everyone was shouting to answer their questions...

try to listen to me...actually...

n maan khanna was getting irritated...

maan khanna...EK MIN

everyone became quiet at once

maan khanna...speak one at a time...clarity

goon1...who r u?

goon 2...whats ur name?

maan

goon 3...whats ur name re? [indicating to maan khanna]

maan

goon 3 slapped him very hard...

goon3...uska naam kyon bolta hai...saale..

my name is also maan...lift there n see...not there...here...my id card...

goon1...chal sidhe sidhe ye bata...ki geet baby ko kaha chupa rakha hai?

sir...ye actually kidnap nahi hai...

maan khanna got furious...

ek min...y r u telling lies brother?

he turned to the goon who was nearer to him

ye toh ek full proof kidnap plan tha

maan started hitting the back of his head to the pole in frustration...

once i commit myself,
i will not betray my profession

groom opened his mouth for the first time...the so called groom

its of no use now uncle...call the police

haan haan...call the police...
ACP...ACP...yashvardhan
9848032919

everyone were astonished...but then became very scared

maan was shocked to see that he even told the phone number of ACP...he thought he might know the person

brother...do u know ACP?

kya baat kar rahe ho...not only me...everyone knows him...
john...

maan was confused how did he know that kidnapper...
his brain started over working

john...john abrahim...ACP yashvardhan...force...

goon2...arey tu humme picture ki story bata rahe tha...

n hit maan khanna

sir...i m in no way connected with him n this kidnap...

again maan khanna went furious

ek min...
how dare u back out now?

he turned his head to the goon near him...

oye tu...idhar aa

that goon came near him

question number 1...did u invite us to the marriage??

everyone nodded their head to a no...

question number 2...what was he doing in the bride room?

maan again started hitting his head
everyone had question mark on their faces n turnedtheir heads to see each other

ye kya?
saare sawaal mein hi puchu?
tum log kuch nai puchoge?
pagal insaan

he turned to face maan

logic tha na mere bhai...

goon2...aur kitne log hai tumhare saath?

good question...5 the

goon 3...5?

goon2...phir baaki 3 kaha hai?

YAHA

goon 4 came out with the other 3...

goon4...ye 3 saale...chup chup ke bahar ja rahe the...maine pakad liya...

yash romeo n pinky eyed maan with sorry written over their faces

if u guys r here...then who kidnapped geet???

maan felt his life was gone...

see...they did it

hello brothers...PLAN SUCCESS

goons came towards all 3

pinky...i think we r finished

*******************

john took her to a completely deserted area n stopped his vehicle

geet was confused

he took out his gun n pointed his gun onto her head

she was afraid

give me the jewels

drop me till hyderabad n i will give u all my jewels

oye...i said give me the jewels

geet started crying

aye...sshhh...dont cry...

she started crying more loudly...

dont cry i say

but she did cry more n more loudly...

he was frustrated now and kept his head on the steering wheel

its always like this

john turned to see her

whenever i want to meet maan...i m always in trouble

maan?

neither i can tell...nor he can tell
when i wanted to tell first time...sam ki pic thi waha...

she turned to see john...

uske bedroom mein...

again she cried remembering that incident

sam??

john was getting totally confused

she cleared the tears on her face

second time i saw sam with magalsutra in his home
what am i supposed to think?

john was trying to connect all the links

forget it
this will not happen
kill me

when john didnt respond...she turned to see him n shouted

i said KILL ME

kya??

ya...but kill maan after that...
what can he do with out me?

ek min...ek min

geet eyed him with a questioning face

u r geet?

how do u know?

geet...maan...sam???

geet nodded her head

but who are you??

john became very emotional all off a sudden

ye kya?

i am ur elder brother dear...

geet was confused

what??

but emotional john...literally started crying

geet thought she had a chance

********************

everyone was hitting the five people thinking that they kidnapped geet...

but suddenly a gun shot was heard silencing the whole place

maan was happy to see his life standing there...but the look on her face shut him up n he was confused as to why she was behaving so...in her own place...

geet came near maan n untied him...when everybody started protesting she silenced them pointing gun...

she pointed john to take them out of the city as soon as possible

john stopped the sumo near by a lake

geet pointed gun towards maan n indicated him to get down

as soon he got down john wanted to escape from this crazy place

sister...if u return my gun...i...i will leave

she became furious n pointed gun towards him

ok...ok...as u wish...u please...carry on...

she again pointed her gun towards maan

u know what i want...so tell me...

we met the first time...ya...we met the first time...n then the second...second time...

geet was irritated...she pulled the trigger...

hey...ok..ok...i am telling
ek min...

actually i wanted to tell u at the railway station itself...
but then deepak came
n i committed a mistake with sam

oye

john started laughing

u did it with sam...
then y didnt u tell me about it??

n he continued laughing

such a chupa rustham u r

geet was on verge of tears

geet...plz dont think so low of me yaar

he turned to face john

n u stay away...got it

he tried explaning geet

i said i made a mistake of thinking i loved her...thats it

meanwhile john got a call from his wife...

excuse me sister

but maan continued n john left them n walked some distance for privacy

infact my friends said geet is no good n a bit short too

geet was shocked

not mine dear...its their feeling
in my opinion u r no less than angelina jolie...drew barrymore...vidya balan

U R BECOMING LIKE VIDYA BALAN...FAT...
U STOP EATING

SHUT UP

sorry sister..its my wife

kill him...it will be over once n for all

hey...sorry bola na...i will reduce the volume
u people carry on

tel me

i will tell
i dont know how to say peotically as in films
jab pehli baar tumse milla..i didnt have any feelings for u
atleast maine aisa samjha tha

he was trying hard to explain it to her

he turned his back to her

wen i couldnt propose to sam or simran...maine socha mujhme problem hai
but i realised i never loved them
i thought i loved them

he turned to face her

abhi bhi i dont know how to tell it to u

but life would be fine if u stay with me

she lowered her gun

if u talk with some random boy...i feel extremely jealous

geet had a small smile at the corner of her lips

i feel like telling lies to impress u
i just wanted to do anything..anything to stop ur marriage

she was just staring at him

i feel like i want to fight with u always

she smiled

i feel like giving u some sense whenever u wear short skirts

blush crept her face

i never knew i had negative shades in me until i met u
its really love...

geet had a big smile on her face

leave all that...bas ek baat bolu...i am very very crazy about u
i just cant live without u
i will take very good care of u...maa kasam

keeping his hand on his head

promise...

geet ran n held him

tell me those 3 words...
just say it

mein

means i

tum

you

YOU ONLY
I AM NOT GOING TO CHANGE CHILD'S DIAPER
its a ladies job u know

geet n maan hugged eachother listening to the funny convo of john

what shall we do?

lets kill him

she glared john and pointed gun towards him

they made him sit in the sumo with his hands n legs tied

hey...john...chal sing a song

i am a professional singer...not an orchestra player

hey sing man..


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AKrzWlV1OV8&list=PL9E6A51F1809BF278&index=9&feature=plpp_video[/YOUTUBE]

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n thats how it ended...without an "I LOVE U"

thanks to each n everyone of u esp my best-est buddy silky...it only because of her that i keep writing inspite of very few likes n comments...

thanks for being a part of this story

hope to see u in Journey Of MaanEet

thanks once again

take care
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Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago
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really awesome part sai dii..
missed u and ur updates from long days..

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Hi thanks 4 a wonderful Maaneet FF! thanks 4 da pm n superb update!

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