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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

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Posted: 14 years ago

That was so simple, yet so elegant and beautiful, Rae. I loved how Arnav was noticing even the smallest of Khushi's gestures...

Thanks for the pm... :) <3

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -_-harsh42
That was so simple, yet so elegant and beautiful, Rae. I loved how Arnav was noticing even the smallest of Khushi's gestures...

Thanks for the pm... :) <3

Harshu, Thank You! :)

But I think there is something wrong with this...not to sound like a stuck up...but so many views, so little likes and just one comment?! O.o :p

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Addie07

@Addie07

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Posted: 14 years ago

u said it all... Arnav's gradual realization of Khushi's innocence.. the way he is puzzled at her behavior and even after all this he cant stop loving her,,, him marveling at her childlike innocence,,,her carefree attitude.. n then the song that added beauty to the entire os

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Zania

@zaniax

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Posted: 14 years ago

awww..tht was soo sweet & beautifully written . Loved the way Arnav silently admired her and rmbrs the smallest details.😍

Fabulous piece of work..it was a pleasure reading it. :)

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Smita

@..Smita..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Fantastic OS!Loved how u co-ordinated the lyrics of the song with the story!👏

M a fan of ur writing yaar,u write awesome stuff!

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

Rae I read this without seeing the PM Honest judgement ; D -It drew me somehow and it didn't disappoint.Just a single word-WOW! I am on my phone so can't quote lines but will do so later.It is just so tremendously heart-clutching that you feel sad -WHY oh why does this happen to two beautiful people in love? You penned it so beautifully I am spellbound-reference to yellow,the sunshine in his life Brilliant!😳Best of both worlds-indeed she is a child and a woman at the same time!Loved how you portrayed that she isn't a gold digger.Love how he smiles despite everything.Just beauutiful😆