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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: twila

Great Scene...Shruti. 👍🏼

All of you have kept the essence of INSHI intact and still managed to give us something Fresh... Looking forward to the Nok Jhonk and Banter b/w them now. 😊



thnx twila 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear for new scene...i really loved it❤️

keep it up😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
shru padhke batati hu kaisa laga..abhi padha nahin mene..
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Posted: 13 years ago
shru its a wonderful update..finally rishi ghus gaya SN me..😆
i loved the last part MMji and kiraydarji wala..well done..👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well done shruthi...i love the scene.👍🏼

sorry for the late reply...

keep rocking ...this thread..
Edited by Bharti_k - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
NEXT SCENE

after so many days i am writing..forgive me for mistakes..😊

Ok time to reveal something

Ricky is living a separate life because he doesn't get along with his parents,they always ill-treated him and his parents have already separated him from them.So, he decided to live a life on his own...That's why Ricky has removed Diwan from his name and like to get called as Rishi Kumar..Only those who are close to him call him by the name Ricky like sanjay.

Back to scene

Rishi took the broomstick from her hand..

R: chal beta rishi,kaam pe lag ja..

Who fatafat puri room saaf karta hai and finally khush hota hai khudka kaam dekh kar..and he goes to take shower..

Indu comes upstairs, She knocks the door of barsaati, but Rishi doesn't open as he is taking shower. She sees the door is open, so on not getting any response she opens the door and looks around..she finds, he has only cleaned the room but everything is messed up. at the same time Rishi comes out half naked (towel rapped around)😉😆..Indu's face is opposite to him.

R: excuse me

I: (looks at him and immediately turns her face) aapko sharm nahi aati aise ladki ke samne aate hue

R: hello, aapko sharm nahi aayi, ek akele ladke ke kamre me ghuste hue😉

I: ye ghar mera hai😡

R: ye room mera hai..😆

I : alright alright pehle aap pure kapdo me mere samne aaiye..

R : in full clothes..kahiye ki aisa kya kaam tha ki aap ek akele ladke ke room me ghusi chali aayi😉(flirt and naughty)

I : Hello, mene knock kiya tha, par aapne darwaja khola nahi

R : toh iska matlab ye hota hai kya aap directly andar aa jaye..meri izzat toh daav pe lagi thi aaj😆😉..agar me aapke room me aise (cut by indira)

I: (shouts) bas..aapse baat karna bekar hai..me bas rules samjhane aayi thi..

R: toh kisne roka hai..samjhaiye..😆

Indira explains all the rules to Rishi, Rishi doesn't pay attention but only nods..Indira sees that..

I : aap sun rahe hai na me kya keh rahi hun..(he is still nodding)

Indu keeps quiet for a min purposely..after a while Rishi realizes she has stopped talking..

R : MMji chodiye na yeh rules..me follow karunga..lekin insan hun bhagwan nahi..rules toh break hote rahenge..aapse bhi hue honge kahi baar..hun..toh jaiye aur chill kariye..😆

I : what?

R: just chill hitler..dimaag ke liye itna gussa acha nahi hota..aapka dimaag phat jayega ek din..😆

I : meri chinta aap mat kijiye..bas aap mere rules ko follow mat kijiy phir dekh lena me kya karti hun..

R: (low voice) aakhir hitler aur kar bhi kya sakti hain..😉

I : kya?

R : kuch nahi..ab aap jaiye aur mujhe kaam karne dijiye..mujhe aapki tarah hitlergiri karne ka time nahi hai..😉😆

I : gets annoyed..jald se jald aapko nahi nikala na toh mera naam badal dena..

R: smiles mischeviously..sure..ab aap jaiye aur barf dimag par rakhiye..hun..milta hun baadme..ab toh milna hi hai har roj..😆

I : (gets really annoyed)..kaise kiraaydar ko rakh liya mene..(and leaves..)

Rishi smiles and goes to his room and calls sanjay.

This was a short update just to proceed the story..hope you all like it.😊

Edited by mithsi_22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm mithi to tu idher busy thi main aur shru tujhe idher udhar dundh rhe the 😆

chal read krke batati hun kaisa hai😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhima-

hmm mithi to tu idher busy thi main aur shru tujhe idher udhar dundh rhe the 😆

chal read krke batati hun kaisa hai😉


😆 😆
ok padhke batana..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
bahot accha laga itne dino baad FF padhke mits

god job 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
ahem ahem rishi in towel☺️
good start ...😆
inshi dialogues is very real mithi...just chill hitler..dimaag ke liye itna gussa acha nahi hota..aapka dimaag phat jayega ek din..😆..
awesome dialogues...puri tarah inshi pe fit ho rhe hai...
continue soon..n start luv track😍leap le lete hai yar...accha idea hai na😉

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