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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

omg on N recognizing A's shirt on Sid :) I must say you are using Sid in such a nice way, i have started liking him :) The boy who obviously is not yet aware of his responsibilities does have good heart.. he wants people around him happy and now that he thinks A and N might have something in past, he is helping way he could.. He isnt over the top either... He knows his boundaries and he is trying to make difference remaining in those boundaries.. All credit to you both for making this character so nice and so real. i liked him even more when he tries to tell her to smile. things can happen but life is to move on.. Its wierd how somebody so clueless about his own life can be talking so much sense into a girl who has lost her smile.. I like the way their relationship is developing.

it is also so amazing how you have shown those little things in sid's behaviour that kind of show how he is similar to Armaan in a way.. the small gettogether at A's house when A isnt around and then running around when A comes :) so when A tells her N likes sid because he reminds her of Armaan, it makes such a perfect sense from A's point of view. I like how you take care of these small small things :)

Red mark: I remembered Atul's red mark.. :) In his anger A can get to extremes soon. Its interesting how he is so professional yet when it comes to his anger, he forgets everything.. actually while trying to be so professional he is being too hard on Sid. He thinks way too much :) N is the one trying to be calm one here.. She has seen all this and whatever it is, she thinks is happening because of her. She doesnt want to be responsible for Sid's red mark nor wants A to do something that isnt right. I like how she stands up this time... shows how innocent and good N is by her heart..

The whole A N convo was brilliant.. They both were right from there point of view.. N calling Sid - Sid ,.. Sure adds oil to the fire :) Its all so complicated.. tangled personal, professional point of views.. N doesnt want their personal anger getting to her interns and A wants sid to understand his responsibilities, N to understand the professionalism.. One hot mess.. Glad they get to see each others vulnerable side.. Sure will make future a bit easier.. :) And A calling Sid - Sid.. Great to see A telling N that Sid is his brother :) Now how she is going to react.. what implications that has on AN .. time will tell.. hope you update soon because this is just way too good :) (And i liked length this time :) Wish all the updates are like these :) :))

@Pra, Mitzi: The length of my comment surely shows how i am liking this FF day by day even more :) You both are doing amazing job and in my point of view one of your best work :) 👍🏼

@Pri , this is freaking awesome , and in every way . Let me start by saying thank you .
OK , I have logged in just to complete my comment because I promised I would 😊.
And I'll go paragraphwise :
Para1 : Yes , Sid sure is someone who is very clueless about his life . We wanted to show him just the way he was , fun , sweet , caring and yet someone who isnt too pushy , which is exactly why Nikki does not mind his interference (After a certain point she realized Armaan's concern almost bordered on something that exceeded even simple over possessiveness , teh urge to constantly guard her or protect her , saying she is a child and all that paraphernelia . ) But Sid is different . Its never about him , its about her , he wants her to be happy , wants to see her smile . And so far seems like he has succeeded 😊 . Love how you got all these aspects of his personality so well .
Para 2 : What an observation ! I am amazed.
Para 3 : Yes , Abhi got Sid to Sanjeevani with his contacts ; but that's all that he is willing to do . Hence all that secrecy and compulsion on Sid to not disclose their relationship to anyone . He has sort of taken for granted that Sid will not learn his responsibilities that easily and that is why he ends up being so hard on him .
>>She doesnt want to be responsible for Sid's red mark nor wants A to do something that isnt
right.
Spot on ! It was a two edged sword and that was the reason she went out of her way to convince him.
Para 4: 😃 . Will try to keep all updates this length.
And finally . You noticed the shirt and understood all about it . Bravo !!! That was Mitzi's idea as she already mentioned in another comment . She is the queen of these nuances and details and its amazing how all these nuances end up making the complete picture actually complete . What is a whole without all the details that make it !!
I'll end by thanking you again 😊
Edited by pra19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@immamayurfan , thanks a lot . Glad you liked the part.
@sonarajasingh , hey thanks a lot and welcome to our thread . Hope you stay around to read all the coming updates
Edited by pra19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: pra19

Part 7

JP , dressed in a outrageously colorful shirt and light yellow pants

but of course. 😊
"OYe , stop staring at her . Its my birthday today ." , Naina chirped
so very Naina.

"So guys lets get the party started . I know you all were waiting for me , weren't you ?" , he said with an air of honest self importance .

so very Sid hehehhe
I did , but he did not pick up my call and I am not calling back again."

"Good , then lets get started ."

hehehhe

"Sid , please call me Sid at least when we are out of the hospital ."

Nikki was taken aback at that frank request .

"I can't call you Sid ."

"Why ? I am not in Sanjeevani and neither are you . You could call me just what you want to . But then , I'll leave it to you . If you still want to hold onto the superiority you hold over me in Sanjeevani , there isn't much that I can do . You probably think I am too pushy or too desperate . But , I am not , I can assure you that . This is just the way I am ."

Like Sid's attitude here
.

i alos like how Sid instigates Nikki to make her open up and get in touch with her inner fire.

Suddenly Nikki noticed the shirt he was wearing and pointed her finger towards it .

"This shirt '"

"Its very nice , isn't it ? I just picked it up today morning ."

Love it love it love it ! ab main jyada nahi kahoongi ... I just love such thing when Nikki notices A similarity between SId and Abhi ... etc..
No wonder he was still unattached . Finding a woman who could meet all his standards must have been next to impossible . 🤣

Naina who way too curious to find out who this brother fellow was turned back . hhh naina

Nikki was furious at the scene she had ended up witnessing . Abhi was so wrong and he did not even let poor Sid give his explanation . And was that a surprise ? At least not for her . She had a whole lot of unpleasant memories raise their surface .
so true ... at least i get nikki's world ... but that dsnt mean i will stop siding wid Abhi ...

".

"Misjudged ? Really ? How ?" , he said acerbically and then presented her with an even more acerbic smile .😊

"Sid" , that was all that stayed with him . Jealousy flared through him as he recollected all those times when Sid had expressed interest in knowing more about her and of the time when he had seen them sit together in the cafeteria. And in no time at all , Nikki was out showing so much faith in his capabilities , taking up his cause and then calling him Sid . He felt agitation build inside him .😊

Her heart began to beat rapidly at that sudden proximity . She could not bear the heat his angry gaze caused in her whole body .

How she wished she could explain to him , what his touch did to her . How she wished that he understood her .

Helpless and defeated, she finally raised her eyes to look straight back at him . There was no anger or bitterness in them , they were full of the love she felt for him , full of the love that was waiting to be , at least recognized , if not accepted.

i like hoe nikki holds no anger for Abhi...

""And do you blame me for that ?"

sadu sadu sadu

"Yes , Sid is my brother . My useless and incompetent , good for nothing brother ." love this line

Edited by mitzification - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: mitzification

bechare Abhi ke saath aisa kyun hota hai ... Nikki always makes friends with every one real fast except ABhi ...

i agree with u mitz bechare abhi dukhiya koi theak se baat bhi nahi karta is se but isi mein maza hai b/c sadu akdu abhi zada hot hai 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Mitzi 😊 .
@Jibsi , next part coming soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yes yes Jibs and rucha ... its dificult to befriend abhi and ... sadu abhi is hot
and yes neha ..love how Abhi treats nikki ... like he owns her ... remb the rajstahn scene jahn pe he pulls her towards himself and her churi breaks ... hai
waise sid is the only person besides Nikki who can go beyond Abhi's temper and reach the real Abhi ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mitzification

yes yes Jibs and rucha ... its dificult to befriend abhi and ... sadu abhi is hot

and yes neha ..love how Abhi treats nikki ... like he owns her ... remb the rajstahn scene jahn pe he pulls her towards himself and her churi breaks ... hai
waise sid is the only person besides Nikki who can go beyond Abhi's temper and reach the real Abhi ...

@bold , which scene was that Mitzi ? I don't remember :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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arey Prash .. its scene bfor Nikki is kidannped , abhi is talking wid some ladies n nikki is lukin at him door se, su's dad is presuuring him for su , so he goes to her n says , Niiki mujhe tumse baat karne hai and he is pulling her and her churi's break ,,, later he sees the churis on the ground and feels nikki might have been here ,,,
even in all the mess CV's still had some brains left at that time too ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow super awesome update cont soon

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