~!! I hAtE u bT y StIlL I lOvE U!!~ a SWARON FF~

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Shailja

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
Superb charactersketch n nice picking up too..
Sharon-A DJ
Swayam-An Actor
Reyaansh Singhania--Choreographer
Kriya Ghai--A dancer as well as an actress

wow..its d way too excellent!!!!
Waiting for ur update!!!

really awesumm dear !!!!

new nd great concept !!!👏

do cntinue sooon nd PM me !!!😃

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Shailja

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

lorrryyy...

i just saw ur chap 1 right now...

silly me !!!!😆

well...coming to the update...i kinda lyked it !!!😃

but i thought the guy to be swayam...

if not him...pls don make it shivam or rey plsss !!!!😕

but...i lyked the suspense !!!😉

hope we get to know that guy sooon ...😉

waiting fr ur next update eagerly...😃

so whenever u update do PM me !!!😳

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nly4usharon

@nly4usharon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

nyc start!!!i likd it!!!
plz add me 2 ur buddy list i already sent u buddy req!!!
do cntune!!!m sure ppl vl lyk it!!!

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dn-star

@dn-star

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Wow really nice starting! Sharon sleeping on a soft round bed...just loved it, thats our princess 😉

But who is that guy if its not Swayam???😕

Plz update soon and pm me.

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Namrata Jadhav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: nly4usharon
nyc start!!!i likd it!!!
plz add me 2 ur buddy list i already sent u buddy req!!!
do cntune!!!m sure ppl vl lyk it!!!

ohh thnkzz a lot dear.. added u.. il pakka pm u on return keep on lyking ma post n commenting plz.. 😊

Edited by namratajadhav - 14 years ago

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: dn-star
Wow really nice starting! Sharon sleeping on a soft round bed...just loved it, thats our princess 😉
But who is that guy if its not Swayam???😕
Plz update soon and pm me.

thnkzz dear... ul surely like it.. do keep on reading liking n commenting.. il pakka pm u.. 😊

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha
lorrryyy...
i just saw ur chap 1 right now...
silly me !!!!😆
well...coming to the update...i kinda lyked it !!!😃
but i thought the guy to be swayam...
if not him...pls don make it shivam or rey plsss !!!!😕
but...i lyked the suspense !!!😉
hope we get to know that guy sooon ...😉
waiting fr ur next update eagerly...😃
so whenever u update do PM me !!!😳

thnkz a lot dear fr liking ma ff... even i loved urs u knw dat... il pakka pm u n u r gono do d same oders ill kill u😛...

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

So guyz here's d nxt chapter... hope ul lyk it n shower dis ff wid ur precious likes n comments...

CHAPTER 2

Sharon had shifted 2 New York after dat misundrtsnding gt created n dat fight wid SWAYAM... She was so upset n hurt dat her frnd...hr best frnd dint trust her... She tried explaining 2 him soo many tyms bt he juzz dint listen 2 hr.. Nvr luked at hr.. Weneva she called him, he juz went off nvr ever he met hr.. Being in d same clg she strtd feeling so hurt n so broken n on top of dat der was no1 to whom she could express hr feelings n she was feeling low after each passing day... She thot k nw nthngs left ovr here... Al hr oder frnds used 2 tak 2 hr bt nt as b4... It was like no1 trusted her n she was shattered...
SHARON alwayz thot 2 herself wneva she remembered her friends:- "V all were close frnds bt den 2 y dint ny1 trust me.. I knw and nly GOD knws k i dint do it n i was nt responsible... Only KRIYA was d 1 who trusted me even though dat happened 2 her.. I alwayz thot she's my enemy.. Bt c she proved 2 b a true frnd... N my frnds.. Even SWAYAM dint trust me y? GOD y did dis happen 2 me only... 1 day he'l cum 2 knw dat i was nt responsible fr dat n he'l realise his mistake.. I wont ever frgive him fr nt trusting me.."😭
She alwayz sobbed silent tears remembering d old days d fun dey had 2gedr as evry1 knew she was a diva so wont cry in front of ny1 n make dem feel she's weak.. she missed d cat fights between wid kriya... All seemed like a fairytale 2 hr nw... Her heart ached.. N nw der was no1 she could express her feelings 2... So finally she decided she should move away frm all of dem nw... She called up her dad n told him dat she wanted 2 learn DJ ying as it was her passion n she truely wanted 2 learn it frm hr heart.. Actually she found a vry gud reason 2 go away...2 go away frm a world in wich she lost hr frnds.. Deir trust.. Her dad suggested hr 2 go 2 NEW YORK.. She agreed and he did all d arrangements fr hr over der..

PRESENT

Sharon had her shower n went 2 d dressing table 2 collect hr belongings n wear her accessories...
After finishing she lifted d photograph..
SHARON(luking at d photograph tears begin 2 form in her eyes):- "Still miss u guyz.. Tumlogo ki jagah koi lehi nahi sakta...1 f9 day pakka u all vl cum 2 knw dat i wasnt d 1 at fault.. Pata nahi wen i'l cum bak 2 INDIA again.. Pata nahi aa paungi bhi ki nahi.. Bt miss MUMBAI n miss u people... Bt shayad m still nt ready 2 cum bak.. Nt yet atleast.. coz i still dnt hav d guts 2 face him 2 bare his anger..."😭
She kissed d photo frame n kept it bak..
She went down n den directly 2 d door... Open it wid a huge smile on her face n yes he was der.. Abt 2 ring d door bell.. Hands half way in d air as he was abt 2 ring d bell.. N shocked as alwayz..he put dem down n ...
XYZ :-" Hwww????Hw do u alwayz cum 2 knw dat m der even b4 i knock d door???? Hamesha i go 2 ring d bell n u open d door wid a huge smile... My chweet princess!!! " n he held both her cheeks in his hands n pulled dem jisase apni diva bahot irritate hoti he.. 😡
SHARON( wid irritated expressions):- NEALLL!!!!! arghh!!!!😡 Il kill u nxt tym if u do dis again... I hav told u hw much i hate sum1 pulling ma cheeks huh!!!😡 Go i wont talk 2 u nw!!!😡

So pata chal hi gaya hoga XYZ ka naam... Itzz NEAL KAPOOR...

Hmmm... Pata he ab joote marna chahoge mujhe coz suspense abhi khul hi raha tha tab tak mene chapter close kar diya... Bt kya karu i said i want atleast 20 likes 2 cont bt m nt getting dem so hw'l i knw hmm n i do remember me pm 20 se jyada logoko bhejati hu.. so nxt chapter only after 20 likes..i hav d update ready bt no 20 likes no update..😡 chry bt i 2 wana knw wedr u like it so dat i cn move further.. 😳n ny suggestion do comment den..n if u wan pm's do send me buddy request plz..!!😊

Edited by namratajadhav - 14 years ago