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too gud waiting for next update

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yaar plz try that priya GIVE positive response TO ram romanceing talk with same romantic mood but awasome
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where r u Dear? Missing ur lovely raya scene post. I had saved ur story link in bookmarks n browsed it today once again. Why aren't writting raya scene post? Plz plz continue it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi how r all firstly sorry for not updating for so long
here is the another update

Scene 27:

Recap:

Ram comes close to her and kisses her on her forehead and looks down Priya closes her eyes at his touch and slowly opens her eyes and he looks towards her lips, Priya sees this and pushes him

Priya: aap bhi na chaliye abhi kaldi wahan woh sab wait kar rahe honge

Ram: tum bhi yaar thoda bhi romantic nahin ho farm house jaane do dekhta hoon main tumhe

Priya smiles: dekh lijiye pehle chaliye tho sahi with that they leave towards Vikram's house and all leave towards farm house

Update:

During the drive to farm house Ram tries to steal glances at Priya

Vikram: Ram tere liye ek aur surprise hai

Ram: kya

Neha: Vikram tumhare peth mein koi bhi baat thik nahin sakthi na

Vikram: arreh ab maine kya kiya

Neha: Ram ko abhi batane ki kya zaroorat hai

Ram: ye ye kya ho raha hai pehle batao ki surprise kya hai

Vikram: woh surprise ye hai… but Neha cuts him

Neha: fatty abhi hum farm house pe paunch ne wale hi hai tho tumhe khud pata chal jayega na jaldi kya hai

Ram: Neha tu nahin bata rahi aur Vikram ko bhi nahin batane de rahi hai ye kya hai

Neha: thoda tho intezaar karo fatty

Ram: tu tho batayegi nahin main hi ponch ponch ke thak jaunga

Neha: isiliye gadi chalao and they reach farm house after some time and were about to enter the farm house

Ram turns towards Neha: ab tho batado meri maa ki kya surprise hai

Neha: abhi yahan tak tho aa gaye ho tho andar chalo khud hi pata chal jayega as soon as they step into the house they hear laughter sounds. Ram sees Karthik, Nuts,Rishabh and Ayesha there.

Vikram: Ram tu hamesha chahtha tha ki puri family holiday jaye tho maine socha ki sab ko bhula loo par bhi bhulaya hai Sudhir ji aur Shipra ji nahin aa paye tho unhone Karthik, Nuts aur Ayesha ko bhej diya maine tumhari maa aur Sid ko bhi bhulaya hai par unhe kuch kaam tha tho Rishabh aa gaya par Daadi nahin aa sakhi sorry

Ram thinks yahan main ye soch raha tha ki Vikram,Neha aur baccho se kaise durr ja kar Priya se saath waqt bitao par yahan aur bhi log hai ab mujhe waqt kaise milega iss Vikram ko bhi na abhi bhulana tha kya inn sabhi ko and looked at Priya making a sad face, Priya could stop smiling seeing Ram's face this made Ram angry and he looked at other side.

Rishabh came towards them when he saw them: bhai kya hua itna dher ho gaya hai hum kab se aap ka intezaar kar rahe the

Ram: kuch nahin woh…

Vikram: humari gaadi kharab ho gaya tha tho Ram humhe pick karne aa gaya iss liye dher ho gaya hai

Ram: aur tu mujhe ghar par nahin bata sakta tha kya ki tu bhi aa raha hai

Rishabh: sorry bhai woh bhabhi ne mana kiya tha

Ram: matlab Priya jaanthi thi and he looked at her angrily

Priya: sorry aap ko surprise dena chathi thi

Vikram: arreh chod na chal enjoy karte hai

Ram: tu bhi iss plan ke baare mein jaanta tha

Vikram: ab chod chal na and he dragged Ram with him into the farm house

All were having good time but Ram was still angry as no one told him anything, he heard Priya saying to Neha that she was going to their room so he made some excuse and followed her.Priya was about to leave the room when Ram was entering he pulled her inside the room

Ram: ye sab kya hai?

Priya: kya hai matlab… main kuch nahin samjhi

Ram: tum jaanthi thi ki yahan sab honge phir bhi tum ne mujhe nahin bataya

Priya: maine aapko nahin bataya… sorry main bhul gayi thi

Ram shocked: bhul gayi thi?

Priya: kya hua… aap itna gussa kyun kar rahe hai

Ram: gussa nahin tho aur kya karu

Priya comes near Ram holds his hand: kya hua… aap itne pareshan kyun hai

Ram put his hands around her: maine socha ki yahan pe tumhare saath thoda romance kar loo par dekho kitne saare log hai yahan pe… maine socha ghar se bahar hai tho thoda tho waqt milega magar nahin…

Priya: hum ghar se tho bahar hi hai na

Ram: haan ghar se bahar hai lekin poora ghar tho yahi hai na I mean ghar ke log aura b humhe time kaise milega

Priya: aap bhi na chodiye sab humara intezaar kar rahe honge

Ram: arreh thodi der who intezar nahin kar sakthe hai kya main bhi tho kab se tumhara meri baaho mein interzar kar raha tha

Priya: acha… kitna dher hua hai

Ram: jab se hum ghar se nikhle tab se

Priya: ji nahin Neha ke ghar jaane se pehle bhi tho aap ne aur… aur who bhi and she realized wht she said and lowered her eyes.

Ram: wahi tho kitna dher ho gaya hai dekho and brings her close

Priya: bas… chaliye na varna koi aura a jayega and suddenly door opened both Ram and Priya moved away from each other Vikram's daughter entered: aunty aap yahan kab se hum aap ka wait kar rahe hai chaliye na aap Ram uncle se baad mein baath kar lijiye and dragged Priya with her Ram just stood there watching Priya going out of the room he tired to stop Priya but was vain as the little girl was not ready to listen and he has to give in. there Ram stood watching Priya turned back to him and said "good luck next time" and Ram gave her a killer look.


i ll try to update early this time hope u enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Will comment it after reading
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok will comment again after reading it
but so glad ki u r back...a warm welcome from BALHians🤗...plz keep giving us frequent updates..plz

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