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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter 5
kya entry marri hai nupur ne
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Posted: 13 years ago
edited my comment on page 15.
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Thank u so much..ya I know I m lazy I haven't rpled to u .. yet I am extremely sorry for tht…

Thanks for liking nupur's avtar…

Ruchiii(let-it-go) cant we have an OS pls.. I m terribly missing ur writings.. and thanks for reminding me abt this Ff to..

Chapter: 6

Mayank was sitting on beech with his laptop and was figuring out all he has too do, Nupur was also there along with Samrat and benji…

As usual he was checking girls, yet wht nupur was noticing he wasn't going towards them, yet they them self came , sat beside him, and was actually seducing him, and he was enjoying his part of attention.. with the girl..talking with her laughing with her, he bid her bye, kissing and winking her…and than again he was back at wht he was doing …

She went to him

Nupur: some one will be busy at night or still is on his plan of doing work..

Mayank: are u planning something… I am all free for u…

Nupur: wht u have thought of a car..

Mayank: its not bad to mix work with pleasure dear.. I was certainly not talking about car

Nupur: you have ur share of pleasure waiting for u… she pointed out to the girl just left… have it..

Mayank: its there share of pleasure that they cum to me to seek…

Nupur: wht.. and u donot enjoy all this..

Mayank: who says tht.. I certainly have loads of fun..he stretch his hand.. yet..pause its ..its.. pause…more like.. pause….I donot know…

Nupur: like wht..

She was too much surprised to see his logic to all this..

Mayank: u were saying sumthing about car…

Nupur: yup.. I have some cars at a junk area, wana see

Mayank: ya sure..why not…

Nupur: get in the car ..

Mayank: woo woo.. I thought I need to take it slow.. but …really we r going on a romantic long drive….

Nupur: ya baby u are in ur car with saint and ben…

Mayank: ouch.. not fair… u broke it again… sigh…

Nupur: hey bro..hey ben…

Samrat: hey sweety….

Ben: hey howz going…

Nupur: pretty well…. Get in the cars I'll take u to the car yard … there u can find an appropriate car , modifying is on u guys…

Mayank: okay…

Reaching there, at the junk yard, the cars that they found were obviously pretty bad in condition or if in ok they need loads of modification for race.. Roaming around the whole yard, mayank was now feeling a bit low, he has to find a car perfect for his race, he has to .. he just have too…

Nupur: what… not ur type… she chuckled looking at his expressions…they were actually cute

Mayank: not a single one, I have to find one, atleast good at engine, modifying is something we can do… he said highly irritated and disappointed..

Nupur: hmm… if modifying is not a problem than, what about that…

She pointed to a car, and mayank looked at it, Nisaan the body of the car was in terrible position..yet it needs work and will be okay…he smiled at it..

Mayank: its engine…

Nupur: perfect position.. need sum work and not much… rares, NOS, and other things, lets see we have to get them …

Mayank: he smiled looking at her… so u felt so good making this injured innocent man roam around this entire yard from past an hr…

He got the point that she already has selected this, yet she was playing along with him..

Nupur: was checking my analysis about you and it came so right…

He leaned to her ..

Mayank: and wht u thought now..

Nupur: wht I think about u previously… ur too shallow… cant see beyond the covers…. So taking it…

Saying so she went forward and he was standing there getting to her words…

Mayank: get a grip man ur planning to drown…he said to himself…. Yes sweetheart how can I saw no to your choice….its really amazing…

He try to pulled up the damaged bonnet but he shriek with pain… she moved forward and helped him open , he looked at her and smiled, she wasn't looking at him at all…

He was checking all the things… inside..

Mayank: hmm… have somework in it… but I can handle it for sure… when is the next race..

Nupur: next month..

Mayank: hm enough time…

Nupur: wht… you will take a month to recover.. how can u fixe this..

Mayank: have too… I will.. its not tht big injury.. I can handle it…

Nupur: really its small one.. u placed her hand on his hand slightly pressing it…

Mayank: ouch… doesn't mean it didn't hurt lady…

Nupur: oh really I though u can handle…

Mayank: sigh… I know this need time but I donot have time…

Nupur: why ..ur so crazy to get money huh.

Mayank: yup I am … have to clear the case.. so need money ASAP, plus I have some debits to clear too… he said thinking about Addy….

Nupur: wht u will too kill Addy…

He looked up to her surprised,

Mayank: hmm.. he leaned to her…. So someone is reading my mind.. I loving it..

Nupur: God.. its better to talk to u about business.. else u just get started …she turned away from her and he grip his wrist….

Mayank: I am not that person to kill some one or get murdered…but sigh… I am fearing here cums my first time… he said the last line dramatically referring to her.. and despite of herself she cant help to smirk at his cute way of doing all this…

Nupur: so ur getting people to kill him….

Mayank: nah… his defeat will be when I'll be back on track and will win the race too… and than I will challenge him… and than… bTW u r not with addy nah.. why ur so interested in my plan…

Nupur: I just asked… why ur dying to tell me all…..

Samrat: hey guys… found sumthing….. oh man..its cool..

Benji: oh baby this is cool.. Mackz take it… we can make it rocking…

Mayank: taken dude.. I know we can…

Samrat: it parts are to expensive man.. how cum we will make it perfect…

Nupur: are u planning to buy them…

Mayank: ur borther is acting like a saint…. This yard is public property saint.. we can take anything form here..

Benji: but at night.. only…waoo

Samrat: are u sure..

Nupur: bro… pls grow up… not within two days.. the shift of the guard will change after two days so than.. else we will get in trouble…

Mayank: as u say my laday…

Nupur: I am planning to give u in hands of guard tht night..

………..

Reaching there place.. they all went to there room, but mayank was not feeling relax.. he got up and went to the garage. And opened light of there…. Nupur who was siting in garden, her attention was driven by the noise of the garage door..she rushed towards there fearing some one broke in…

There she saw him, dressed in tracks, and vest.. he has opened the bonnet and was now making the main engine free to bring out of body..she shocked her head, its strange about him, no matter how flirt he is, he never manhandle any girl, true girls get woo on him, why not, the sight she is see right now is worth watching… yet she has never get involved in any boy, its not simple to make her fall…

But this racing and getting back on track ASAP, is on his mind too much, as if something is burring and rage is driven him.. and he will make it by himself.. he will do it..

Mayank: beautiful I know I am to hot to take ur eyes off me… but don't u think u should help me in this rather checking me.. he said it with smirk Turing towards her…bring back her too..

Nupur: its amaizing to see a crazy man, god knows wht he is trying to do…

Mayank: wasn't able to get some sleep, so thought of strt cleaning and checking the engine.. but

Nupur: u cant pull it out with one hand..

Mayank: ya.. he pouted..

She move forward while glaring at him

Nupur: this all will make ur hand more in strain mayank

Mayank: ouch..

Nupur: wht happened..

Mayank: mayank.. why u have to call me this..

Nupur: why it isn't ur name..

Mayank: I wish it wasn't… he said turing back to his work.. and without waiting for her start pulling it through a chain..

She was bit surprised yet she ignored.. and moved forward.. standing beside him she griped the chain, placing her hands near his.. but mayank is mayank

He moved a bit back of her, almost back hugging her, placing his hands on her and start pulling it.. keenly watching her, pretty close to her…he was gazing at her, actually enjoying the sight so close to him

Nupur: u can't miss a chance to flirt…

Mayank: I am not flirting sweety… I am just making it abit easier for u… or my closeness make it difficult for u..he smirked

She looked at him and loss the chain, he immediately grip it with both hand else engine will fall and get damaged… and slightly shriek in pain… she hold it back and helped him locking it…

Nupur: donot mess with me got it…smiling wickedly.. and I think its better to leave it here.. do it 2morow…

Mayank: why r u caring for me…

Nupur: go to hell..

He laughed and followed her out side the garage..

…………

Benji: mayank u cant..

Mayank: I can.. pls benz don't argue on this….

Nupur: benz is right are u nuts or what.. u wont be able to handle it…. We need to be quick plus u r not in this position .. how can u handle it…

Mayank: nupsi I can do pls… plus I can't risk … its one time opportunity tht we will have to take all the things we want to….

Benji: so u don't trust us….

Mayank: I do ..comon dude.. why r u guys making things so big… I am fine.. stop behaving like sensitive, oh ah ouch family pliz…. Atleast benz u .. u know I have handle more than this…

Nupur: okay ..ur going to be on ur own… if u get trapped there we r not gonna help u out.. we wont trap our self….

Mayank: how mean nupsi..

Nupur: don't call me tht…

Mayank: okay sweet heart..

She looked away highly irritated and he chuckled….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
edited.

very nice update.

as nupur is toatally surprise package in this update ... now she is more surprising. the way she handle mayank was gret.

loved it.

mayank is so cute ... first he is too flirty ... n too much firlty towars nupur ... n other hand he is determind to win ... ont only for pay money, but for adi offcourse.

i think he has something in his heart... something deep down.

waiting for next upate.

continue soon

love ya




Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
mayank is difficult to undertand. nice part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its beautiful.very nice.loved my mayur in diff avtar.they r so cool.i enjoyed dis new ff. SIMPLY AWESOME UPDATE
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Posted: 13 years ago
hayeee loved the update...
awesomest...😳😃
wat's cooking in mayank's mind?????
wat he is upto...
wanna knw soon..
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow... I am lovin this whole track... Nupur came as a surprised package bt sumthing is surely more to her . Loved it jaaan ... n il try to pen down an os ... i dont think ..i have the same flow wid me . Thanx for updtin it... n nxt updt ..plzzz sooon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant update...
Loved MN convos here...
Cont...

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