DOSTI VS PYAAR - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

interesting...at d same time awesome,fab...like d whole part...😃👏

thnxxx 4 d pm.😊..janagi...keep it up...👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awwiiiee sucha fantastic part...do update soon sweet😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
I just loved it!!keep it up!!!😉😉god bless!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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RAAAHHHUuulll????


nice updt dear..
finally things r solved...
good..
do cont soon..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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but plzzz add an index
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I HAV ADDED AN INDEX UNDER ROOPALI DI'S SUGGESTION IN THE FIRST PAGE, SO U CAN READ IT MORE COMFORTABLY EVEN U DONT FOLLOW IT REGULARLY!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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DOSTI VS PYAAR

12th began very well, janvi was appointed as School Pupil Leader (SPL) by the principal, the authority gave the reason, her talents, contribution, leadership ability, confidence, good status among her teachers made her the natural choice, and she deserve it too. Krish was very happy to see her friend in a responsible post. But she was bounded in administrative duties, she conducted many events, gave her ideas in suggestions, she was very busy in both studies and duties. No time to spend with her dear friend who gave a new life to her, but he understood it. Everything was going fine, a problem burst like an earthquake, one day, they were chatting in phone, krish's mother noticed it, she didn't like that, so she plucked the phone from krish's hand, she started shouting at janvi, she said "y r u disturbing my son? What u want? U r disturbing him. U r diverting him from his studies, find some other person for ur entertainment, leave my son" saying this she have cut the call in anger, janvi was shocked to hear this, but she couldn't bear that, krish asked, "y r u behaving like this ma' she is my friend"
"stop it krish, I knew everything, I am watching this many days, ur sister is supporting u right? I can inform ur father but I wont if u do what I say, u shouldn't talk with her" said his mother.
Krish replied "but why ma? She is my friend, we didn't do anything wrong, why we shouldn't talk? I cant do what u say, I'll talk with her". His mother got angry and shouted, "krish''..do what I say' decide u want ur family or ur friend" krish tried to convince his mother but couldn't, she informed everything to his father, his father also said not to talk with janvi. He was crying like a child saying everything to his sister kavya; she tried to calm him down but everything in vain. He was confused how to prove his friendship to his family, and then he entered his father's room, took the sleeping pills from the cupboard and went to his room; he ate all the tablets in the box, at that time kavya entered his room to give him lunch, and found that he consumed sleeping pills, she shouted, "ma''.pa'..come here,''look at him'" they came and saw their son in a pathetic state, they called the ambulance, and took him to the hospital. Kavya phoned janvi, she picked up and said "hello didi'..". kavya replied "janvi, I don't want to say but..., krish consumed sleeping pills, come here dear, plz'" she kept the phone saying the hospital name. janvi was dumbfounded, she was bounded in shock, she ran and went to her father, "papa'..krish is admitted in hospital, we have to see him, plz dad'.." geet couldn't understand what is happening there, so she suddenly came out from her room, her mother also came out from the kitchen, but her father said very coolly "why should we?"
"Dad, what do u mean?"asked janvi. "why should we go and see him, I don't believe krish, he is phoning u, messaging u, chatting with u, this is not fair, I didn't like him, I don't think he is a good boy, so just forget abt him and look after ur studies, go inside dear" said her dad very coolly.
Janvi shouted "what a human are you? U cant believe even ur daughter? He has admitted in hospital? I don't know even he is alive or not. Just listen, u suspected my friendship, so I don't want anything to hear from you, I am leaving, I am having two legs, I can walk and go"
"stop janvi'"
"Mr. Vaidy Singh, I am leaving here just as my krish's friend not as ur daughter, u have no rights to stop me" said janvi and left from home. Her parents were shocked at her act. Geet tried to explain them everything, "papa'..dont worry. Be calm first of all. U know abt ur daughter. But I know abt my sister more than u. nobody is like her, nobody cant be like her. U are seeing her from her childhood, have she spoken a single word against ur decision? But today she did that, u should atleast try to know abt the reason. That's fair. They are friends, they are very good friends, today she threw up her daughter's status and she went to see him just as his friend, u could have understand her affection, u should understand her affection, do u all remember she have arthritis, she shouldn't weep, because she will get hypertension, it might after her health, she is still taking medicines, she is walking now and she is alive now only because of krish baiya, his confidence cured her not ur medicines or money, I don't know u need ur daughter or not, but I need my sister, plz let her do what she wish, she didn't go to see her friend, she went to see her life, they have been friends, they are being friends, they will be friends, plz give respect to human feelings papa'." Geet started crying saying this. Her dad went out suddenly. Geet saw him with a shock. "I'll drop her" said her dad. "Thank u dad" said geet. He kissed her forehead and took his father, geet too joined him. Janvi was walking in the pavement road, he went and stopped his car by her side, she saw her father, "can we go and see ur friend beti?" asked her father, she was very happy to hear this, geet asked her to step in. she too stepped in and they all reached the hospital.
COMING UP: KRISH'S CONDITION??
HIT THE LIKE AND POST UR COMMENTS IF U LIK IT😊😊😊
Edited by JANAGI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it thanks for the pm!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVELY UPDATE JANAGI...

very well written...waiting 4 d next update

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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
loved the part when janvi said i have 2 legs and can walk!!😆 realistic😉

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