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ash08

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Posted: 15 years ago

That was beautiful.

The way Geet hid her feelings for Maan, the way he makes her confess... was so nicely written.

I wish it was a bit longer. Write more dear.

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Swati Chowdhury

@MishtyShona

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Posted: 15 years ago

I really hope something on simillar lines happens in the show... Y don u write it on facebook for the CV's to c... It looks logical n completely suits the characters n their possible reactions....

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Pickachu

@pickachu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Beautifullllllllllll os.Plzzz write more maneet os.I really likeeee the confession scene.

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harshiji

@harshiji

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Posted: 15 years ago

really awesome( dialogues , emotions), i really luved it... keep going n i want the suite plzzzzzzzzzzz

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice bt quite short. Loved it:-)

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x- afreen-x

@x-affy-x

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Posted: 14 years ago

The OS was great

Your brilliant at it, it had the maneet element to it

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Dove..

@Dove..

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Posted: 13 years ago

very well written 👏

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