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Posted: 13 years ago
SAM WAS TRYING TO BE SO CLEVER, BUT ALL HER PLANNING FAILED

BUT WHAT IS HER NEW TRICK TO MAKE EVERYONE HATE GEET

HOPE SHE DOESNT WIN AS GEET HAS JUST FOUND A LOVING FAMILY
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Posted: 13 years ago
what has sam planned now??

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it graphics.
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing

is sam ki to me grrr
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear not receiving any pms, pls send me pms
lovely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update 😳
Sam 😡
update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 12

pratham opened the letter ,he started to read the letter so that everyone can hear..
pratham ji...yaad hai na ki main kaun hu..waise vulna thoda muskil hai..phir vi..bata hi deti hu,akhir umar ho gayi hai apki,sb iss buddhe umar me dimag me zaida zor mat lagaiye,mai wohi hu jisne sameera ke shadi me hngama machaya tha..aur jisne maan ko geet se shadi karne me majboor kar diya.
ab app soch rahe honge ki main achanak se apko letter kyun likh rahi hu..waise mujhe koi sauk to nahi hai,par geet ne mujhe majboor kiya hai..
o ho..app ko to pata nahi hoga,,to main hi batati hu..geet ne hi mujhe hire kiya tha apnni shadi maan se kar wane ke liye..
at this point all the head shot up to geet who just dumbstuck..it all sounded greek & latin to her..
pratham started to read again,
ha janti hu..ap log yahi soch rahe honge ki ye aisa nahi kar sakti,kitni masoom aur bholi dikhti hai..par apne to wo gana suna hi hoga..
bholi surat dil ke khote..
main vi kya baat leke bait gayi..wo jo vi kare ya uske saath jo vi ho usse mujhe kya,maine app ko is liye letter likha hai ki geet ke contract ke anusaar jitne paise mujhe dene the wo nahi diye,to mujhe app logo kodesturb karna para,wo kya hai na..mujhe pata nahi tha ki wo chalu ladki mujhe vi dhoka dengi..app log 2 lakh rupai cash niche likhe hue pate pe paucha dena,warna kavi vi apki parties me aake meh mano k samne phir se...samaj rahe hai na ki main kya keh rahi hu??
at this pratham crushed the paper with sheer rage,sameera smirked ,she thought ,chalo ek tir se do nishane,geet ki chutti aur mujhe vi thode paise mil jayenge maze karne ke liye...
while on the other hans geet was scared..tears were falling from her innocent eyes,at thattime only one question surrounded her heart & mind...will they abandon her??
all were silent for a moment then started to laugh..while pratham too smiled then glared at them..tum log has rahe ho..yaha itni badi baat hai..
vicky said..hase nahi to kya kare papa..ITNA SARA JHUT..he said dramatically..
dev to said between his laughing ,ha papa ye to koi ullu vi bol sakta hai ki ye kisine prank kiya hai...
main to pehle hi samaz gaya tha ki ye prank hai..said pratham..letter aya hai lekin na koyi naam na pata..chalo wo sab chodo..postcard vi nahi hai..aur to aur postoffice ki stamp vi gayeb!!
aur ye asamvab hai..kyu ki hamara letter box gate ki andar hai..harbar postman gate se bahadur se milneke baad hi chitti leke aata hai, aur koi..specially shilpa khud ise dene aati to bahadur mujhe khabar kar deta...
then pratham turned towards geet who was sitting on the floor by that time..are geet beta..
she was crying..now in relief..never in her life has she been so scared..not even whenher sam's mom gave her punishments ..or bashed her..it was fear of losing dear ones..fear of getting deprived of love..AGAIN.

geet beti app thik to hai na..are..!!app ro rahi hai
are beta app to ro rahi hai..isme rone wali kya baat hai??
wo woo..she managed to say only this through her crying
beta..ye kya baat hui.. app itni si baat ke liye rone lag gayi..chaliye chaliye..asu pochiye..pagli..he playfully patted geet's head..
he helped to stand geet up then made her sit on chair..aj apke papa apko khana khilayenge...app khayengi na mere haat se??
geet was overwhelmed with this love..she just nodded her head like kid with still tears in her eyes..
pratham fed her the 1st bite..then geet stopped him..

kya hua beta??
wo main app ko khilau..she innocently asked like a little 5 years kid
he chuckeled..neki aur puch puch??
geet fed him..then suddenly dev,meera & vicky said..hame vi apne bhabi ko khilana hai..
now geet was in trouble..all were literally stuffing her mouth..😆
she tried to say that she can't eat anymore..main ..main..
o ho bhabi main main baad me kijiyega..pehle kha lijiye..saying this dev stuffed another piece of paratha in her mouth..😆
while sam was seething in anger..she muttered..hmp!! nautanki..family drama..
all were busy feeding geet ,suddenly meera asked maan teasingly. & dramatically...areee bhai app bhabi ko nahi khilayengi??
maan & geet both became a bit embarssed..

precap- give me ideas guys..
Edited by Shilalipi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great part.
I was tense kahi phir geet na phas jaye.
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update dear
hey dear i wanted to ask u why u r not showing much about maaneet as in like maan and geet coming close and maaneet feelings for each other and maan getting better and all as his mothers health is improving why not his think about it dear and plz want some maaneet moments yaar plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n wonderful update...

thank god...nobody is serious abt d letter...i want onething...make geet strong to face sam...n make all knw abt sam n her mother's deeds...cant see geet suffering like dis...plz want to see positivity in geet's character...dont want dis much weak geet...little bit strong to face sam...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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