Gar Mjhy Ko Yaqeen hota#2.last part ..pg 15..13/04

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vinan2050

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

heyy yarr awsm update awsm awsm awsm

u rockk yarr thanxx fr PM

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parul_bansal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

awesomest update di...

ufff i just hope i cn see the frndship of mayank n gunjan back as earlier...

just hope nupur ables to resolve the problem...

thanks 4 the pm

may god bless u

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

I thought that Nupur would share it with him.. that would have made things less complicated...
Thank you 😊

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ruchi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Ahan di...!

Too much work stressed I was and needed some thing to divert my mind and your update did it❤️

hmm..so about update...it reminded me of something...Mayank and nupur scene was very nice and sweet when he asked about his most fav and she replied Laptop...but he says no its you! I so love it 😍

and then I tried to express his feelings through words and finally said...😊

But still his behavior towards gunjan must be hurting her...I can well understand😔

Nupur should have told him when he was asking...lets see ab wo kuch batata hai ya nahi.

Waiting for next.

cont soon.

P.S. shayari is beautiful❤️

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mayuloveu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

to please nupur mayank is hurting his only friend. but mayank in his place he cant do anything. at one side he has his best friend, childhood friend gunjan other side he has nupur his life his soulmate

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TheLeo_M

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

superb update...

feeling bad for gunjan...it can be seem how much she got hurt by this behaviour of mayank...

hope everything will soon be sought out between them...

continue soon...

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

edited my comment on page 5 .

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bhargavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

nice updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Fiza.. As u said, I am waiting for this behaviour of Mayank to end... but overall, nicely written.. 😊 😊

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Reaching home Nupur thought it is high time that she has to question wht has actually happened to him…
Nupur: kya baat hai mayank… ap gunjan k sath asa kyun behave ker rahy hain,..
Mayank: kasa behave ker rah hoon mein,..
Her tone was rude and a bit irritating to and he was taken a back on her ways.it was the first time she is actually talking this way…
Nupur: ap us ko ignore ker rahy ho, us ki koi help nhi ker rhay ho, apko koi problem hai kya us se… ur behavior towards her is so weird…
Mayank: asa kuch nhi hai nupur.. tum janti ho shopping per jana mjhy wasy bhi pasnd nhi.. mein tumhary sath hi kitna kam jata hoo, aur yeah larkiyon ny kiya socha mjhy kasy pata bus islyn tum se kaah tha..
Nupur: mayank mjhy nhi pata k apko problem kya hai.. per koi tu problem hai apko isn sab se…jab se engagement ki baat shoro hi hai tab se hi apko problem start hogai hai…
Mayank: nupurr… mjhy in sab se kya problem hogi… tum yeah kaha na chah rahi hoo k mjhy gunjan aur Samrat se
Nupur: … pata nhi… per ap ajeeb hi behave ker rahy hoo… us din bhi mein ny kaha unk gift k liyan tu baat dal di…
Mayank: nupur tum ko pata hai .. gunjan ko break diya hai mein ny… islayn office mein akelay mein handle ker rah hoon… in sab mein mjhy in cheezo k time nhi mil raha hai… bus… tum itna strees kyun horahi hoon.. relax kero .. sojao thak gai ho….
He said all this very clamly and. rapidly lye down to bed, her question hurt him again, he felt all that cuming back tht he though will never cum again..he will make sure about it…
yet nupur was still quite angry ad true she was thinking the other way why mayank has strted reacting such only after there engagement as if he has no relation with gunjan… wht has been his problem … Gunjan doesn't love she knows that, did mayank .. no it cant be… as kuch nhi hai … but than wht has actually happen to Mayank why he is behaving so much different.. the whole week he .. and even today he didn't answered me and just slept like this…
Morning was similar, mayank was normal and was clam as he didn't want to fight with with the way she questioned him.. yet his fear increased more…
He was standing near his draw and pulled out his ticket from there, yet than place it back, seeing it keenly she just heard him saying so
Mayank: it is the only way, I have to do this…
He came out of dressing room and nupur was again in trans wht he was saying there she couldn't get to know…
Mayank: nupur… he stopped her as she was moving out of room after handling his things… I am sorry agar unknowingly mein ny khabi bhi tum ko hurt kiya hua, ya khabi bi meri wajah se tumhain takleef hoi hoo… I promise asa tumhrai zindagi mein khabi nhi hoga dobra…
He has her face cupped in his hand, and he was assuring her as much as he can, but yes he was tracing and absorbing her too in him, she can clearly see a little pain in his eyes.. yet she still wasn't able to figure out this pain was of wht…
She has nothing to say as her apprehension was still unclear, she just nodded in yes, and he left with a smile to his work..
Sitting on the swing she was again going back to all, and was getting tangled in her thoughts more and more… just than he remembered that chachi ask her to bring her dress to go and shop for jewelry for her, so its better she do so…get busy, as she just can't ,make her brain stop again by thinking that it isn't because Samrat and Gunjan are getting engaged
Reaching her wardrobe.. she opened it and pulled out her cloths, just than her eyes went to her diary, and gosh she always though she will burn it, as she never want Mayank to read it, she knew very well that he is gonna get hurt way to much reading so, plus he may fel disgusted of her, her such low thinking and may start to hate her…
She pulled it put and her hand shivered, she feared as she looked at a crumbled page in it, she has this habit of having all pages in her book always in proper shape, she hates even one someone use to fold pages in their books for marks, so than how cum this pages is turned….
Her brain started to work and she was shocked till wit, did Mayank… her body shivered at the thought , Mayank read it, yes Mayank read it, his whole changed behavior is because of this , this is the reason .. oh God, he hates me, or he is…. Wht he must be feeling about me….
Standing there numb she wasn't sure wht to think.. the only think she remembers was mayank words in the morning…."this the only way"…
She searches his drawer keys there and found them, opening it she found a ticket of Rome, she looked inside it wasn't a returned ticket, named Mayank Sharma… dated just after the engagement…
The ticket slipped from her hand she fall on ground, he is going away from me, he is going away, he is leaving me, Oh god he hates me…. She knew he has work in Rome, and he was saying Samrat jokily he will send gunjan there for an year or more than tht as they have to detail many thinks there… this means he is going there himself
I won't let it happen no I won't let it happen… .. she moved out of the house, walking completely not in her sense towards his office, she thought of taking public transport but then it was the day of strike… she took out her cell and dialed his number…
He was surprised to received her call this time, he was in a meeting out side his office, with gunjan and Samrat asking them to please take care of business after engagement as he wants to take Nupur out for sometime, she is getting stress out in all this, and somehow he has never given her .. her time.. they both teases him a lot and happily agreed, yet there laughter's were subsided as mayank frowned loking at the number flashing
Mayank: shh chup… I donot want k us ko pata chaly… chup
Samrast: mein tu batao ga… tum itna romantic bhhi hsoatay
Mayank: chup ker…hey nupur…
Nupur: mayank pls meri baat suno … mayank ap meri baat suno gay na
Mayank: nupur… he freaked out listening to her shaking voice.. kay hua hai bolo.. tum thik tu ho..
Nupur: mein arhi hoon ap kahin nhi jao gay…. Meray pass reho gay….
Mayank: han mein hoo.. tum asa kyun bol rahi hoo… tum kaha hoo… he can heard cars sound around her…. Tum ghar k bahar kya ker rahi hoo…
Nupur: ap k pass arhi hon
Mayank: mein office mein nhi hoo.. mhjy bato kaha ho mein khud ata haoon..
Nupur: nhi ap nhi aagay mein… Pace mall k round about thak ai hon mein arhi hoon ap meri baat suno gay..
She was walking completely not knowing where she is , the only think that was cuming in her mind was his rejection , his hatered.
Mayank was nearby the signal, he rushed out the coffe shop and looked around, his breath got stacked in his throat when he looked at her the way she was walking on the road… he run between the car and Samrat and gunjan also stood up from there chairs to follow him…
He run and called her name but she didn't looked back,
Mayank: nupur rukho… nupur….
She was in the edge of the road, and didn't saw tht signal is now green, she was about to step down when he puled her back …
Mayank: nupurr….but yet he losses his balnce and was about to fall on road when get hited by a high speed car cuming form tht way…
She screamed loud his name, he was lying far away from her, blood strted to cum out of his head, Samrat gunjan who were a bit away , run towards him and so as nupur, Samrat turned back to take his care with him…
Nupur: mayank… mayank… she taped his cheek and he slightly opened his eyes, he raised his hand and touched her cheek lovingly… smiling in between his tears.. he just could whispered as his eys were droping..his breath was fainting
Mayank: I love u nupur… belive…he had seizure..and closed his eyes
Nupur: mayank… mayank…
Gunjan was there and was calling his name again and again.. nupur tears weren't stoping at all.. Samrat came with the car and with help of sum people the shifted him in, rushing to hospital…
Nupur was sitting out of the OT, with gunjan hugging her tightly as she was shivering badly, the only words that were echoing in her ears where.." I love u..belive.. " me he might want to add yet, destiny didn't allowed him to say so…
Doctor came out of the Ot, and said sumthing to Samrat and he droped himself on the chair and couldn't hold his tears now too…
Nupur as looked at him went near him..
Nupur: Samrat bolo na maaynk kasa hai…bolo samrat…she grip his color and shouted shaking him…
Samrat: zindna hai.. per… comma mein hai…. Pata nhi khabi jagay ga k bhi nhi.. brain damage hoa hai… woh zinda ho ker bhi zinda nhi hai… he said all this looking in vacuum…
And she fall on the floor getting fainted…
As she opend her eyes she found herself lying , with chachi in tears in her eyes were stroking her hairs,
Chachi: beta ankhein kholo na… psl beta…. 3 din hoga hain… tum asa kero gi tu mayank ko waps kaun lay ga….aur dekho ab tu us ko ana hi paray ga…. Janti ho doctor ny kiya kaha…. Mein dadi banwali hoon…she weeped a bit..
Nupur didn't reacted a bit, yet her tears rushed down her eyes rapidly.. she was dead, a complete dead soul….
Chachi: kuch tu bolo beta.. tum janti hona mayank ko waps sirf tum lasakti hoon… sirf tum…. Janti hona woh tum se kitna pyar kerta hai..sab thik hojay ga..
Nupur: she strt crying badly hugging chachi tightly… really did she knows how much he loves her, did she really know wht she is for him, did she ever realize all he did always was just for her…so much tht he is dying her death, just if she has trusted…things would have been different…
Gar mjhy ko yaqeen hota……
Chachi: beta asay nhi chaly ga… hum sab ko mil ker mayank ko waps layan hai… asay har nhi many ga…

11 months and 10 days later.

Nupur: hey mayank… uthy nah mjhy se isko akelay nhi sambhal jata …dekhy nah …
She said it making there son lye beside him touching his body, he was still in deep sleep, maybe too tired to handle anything… it was the first time he saw his son, felt him, nupur's weaknees made her delivery pretty complicated, yet she survie..maybe because he still hasn't died to pray for her well being..
Doctor 's were hopfull when they saw a tear rolling from his eyes, when he got the news about nupur's mother hood….and too at moment when she said all truth to him.. Yet nothing happen after..it was happening very slow..
The little fingers of his son, were caressing his hand, with her loved filled stroke warming him as always…she was watching her son asking his father to hold him.. yet she knew he is too mad at her, nothing will melt him…
Nupur: mayankkk… her eyes went wide, and her face break in a huge grin…he slightly moved his finger.. just for a flick of second…and yet again as if he was trying to hold his son
Rashing to doctor she told them.. and thy said there positive about him… maybe slowly but he has shown life, towards her always…
It has always been about her believes, now she will believe that she will get him back this time with her trust on there love and bound… she will make it… make it happen…
The end

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago