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Posted: 14 years ago
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Realization

They are talking about my wedding without even asking my opinion… i am defenitly not ready for this now…I need time to trust Maya again, to feel the togetherness again and to feel….to feel the love again…thought Virat thinking…

since Maya and he patched up again something he felt that something was missing…he always thought he just needed time…but the thought to spend the rest of his life with her made him feel sick…to see her makeup plastered face every morning…her annoying talk about herself all the time…the way she talked, walked and dressed annoyed him…like now she didn't care what his family or he wanted for the wedding…she was just manipulating everyone to do her will…should his married life be really like that…bringing a selfish woman into his family and destroying everything he had…

and not only that…Virat has discovered that not Maya was the one who wrote the letter…no it was Manvi…and all the things Maya did to impress him was Manvi's plan…but Virat knew that his partner was not acting…she really loves kids…thinks always about others…loves his family like her own…enjoys the life to the fullest without hurting others…took everything very easy…he could tell million things that he loves about her…and whenever someone mentioned her name in the house his eyes would always look for her… when he thinks about he couldn't stop smiling…her cute talks, sweet antics and mischievous pranks she played…wait…what was he feeling…no that can't be why his heart starts to beat fast thinking about her…why he felt this craving to be with her see her face everyday…shouldn't he be feeling this for Maya and only Maya…not even with Maya he had this strong feelings…was he? No that's impossible…but is he? Is he in love with Manvi?

That must it be…love…true love must feel like this…and the realization that he fell in love with his bhandariya made him feel relived and happy…now he has two things to do…

  1. Stop this wedding
  2. Tell his cutie that he has fallen irrevocably, madly and unconditionally in love with her…

But then a fear overcomes him…what if she doesn't feel the same…what if she loves someone else…no that can't be…if she loved someone else he would know…but still what will he do if she rejected him…then what he will stalk her and persuade her still she agrees…he can be stubborn if he wants something…

And it will be fun to fight with her…

He went to Maya and tried to explain that he doesn't feel anything for her…and maybe they were not made for each other…

First she cried that tried to emotionally blackmail him…then tried to make him feel guilty…but who knows her tactics better than him…he apologised to her once ad said goodbye forever…

He was on his way to Manvi with mixed feelings…he knocked on the door and waited…

Dhabbu opened the door…Virat saw that he had cried…

Virat: dhabbu what happened…why are you crying…did you fight with Manvi again…by the way where is she now? Normally she is the one to open the door…

Dhabbu started to cry loud: MAnvi di is in the hospital…

Virat: what? What happened to her? Is she allright? God dhabbu open your mouth?

Dhabbu: who she is very serious…operation…

Virat's whole body shivered…he stood there like a statue…

hope you liked it...

lots of LOVE

sonali

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it to the core...last part brought a drop of tear in my eye...good writting...

continue pleaseee
Edited by lakshm - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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reaaaly liked it!!
now i wait for virats reaction! :)
please PM me when you continue it !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very good pm please when you write more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pls pm me wen u update. Gr8 start. Waiting fr d rest...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Waaooo nice Start and Plzzz continue

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great start plz pm me

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow that was awesome !!! Love it 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ah.. continue please,,,and pm me also
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good start
please cont soon
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