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bhargavi

@gopi06

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

awesome updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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drmaha

@drmaha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

first of all dear many congrats for the second thread...🤗

wow its just amazing... GMYH is one o f my fav ff...

mayank is thinking so mch he shouldnt do this...

he let himself to feel guilty which is not good...

anyways i just loved it...🤗

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Mayank's behavior to all this ends with this chap.. im back pretty quick...
pardon errors

Mayank: tum kyun itni bhag rahi hoo…
She was lying on bed and pressing her head, she was feeling headache due to late night planning and involvement in preparations and morning shopping tours..
Nupur: mein kaha bhag rahi hoon….
She pouted and took medicine from his hand receiving a glare from him..
Mayank: nupur… rest kero bus.. tum buhat zayda stress ker rahi hoo khud ko… asa lag raha hai Samrat ki engagement nhi shadi hai… tum log itna sab ker kyun rahy ho
Nupur: aray… tu kya hua.. dekhain life ny ek cheez tu sekhai hai.. jo mil jay us ko full enjoy kerna chahiy..tu so ker rahi hoon
He sat beside her..and asked keenly
Mayank: nupur tum ko jo kuch bhi hua us se koi shikayat hai, mjhy se koi shikayat hai…khabi bhi hoi ho..kuch bhi.. he spread his hand lovingly on her head, trying to make it easy for her
She looked up to him in suppress…she fumbled abit in answering him, should she say it, no forget it no I should…...he wants to ask her this, if she say yes and if she confess all that than he can talk to her, but he didn't want himself to question her from front, it may change the whole way he is looking at situation ..she may be feel embarrassed and guilty
Nupur: nhi.. mjhy… mjhy kya shikyaat hogi… ap asa kyun poch rahy hain…
Mayank: asy hi… chalo so jao… rest kero..
…………….
Mayank: uff… he dropped himself on sofa… resting his head on head rest… ainda teray sath shopping per nhi jao ga… kitna ghomata hai tu
Samrat: acha tu mein kya kero mjhy kuch acha nhi lag rah tha..
Oho baharoo phool barsoo..
Mayank opened his eyes smilingly to see gunjan cuming, and nupur giggling at smarat dramas…
Gunjan glared at him, came and sit next to mayank.. and he moved a bit away leaving some space between them… though she frowned a bit yet she came close again..
Gunjan: kya kya liya….
Mayank: he moved away more… pora bazaar..
Gunjan: moved more towards him, and no he has no space to move away… tu dekho na.. she moved his hand above mayank almost leaning to him… do idhar do…
Samrat: nhi dekho ga abhi nhi
Gunjan: nhi abhi do..
Mayank: kya gunjan… aram se door nhi bhait sakti hoo kya… pora char jao..
Gunjan: kya.. pagal hoga hai kya tu,.
He stod up and went and sat on the other sofa leaning him self a bit low….
Mayank: bhait jao ab …
Gunjan: tujhy kya hoa hai… aj kal kcuh zzayda touch me not nhi hogaya hai.. mjhy koi shuk nhi hai..
Nupur: aray tu ab kyun lar rahy hoo… Samrat kya liya hai…
Samrat: bhabi hum tum bad mein dekhy gay… is k samny nhi… tum usi din dekhna…
Mayank: aur dekh ker shock se behosh hojana….
Gunjan: laal rang k tu kurta nhi kareda..
Sarmat: nhi.. mayank k sath gaya tha kasay red askta tha ghar….
Gunjan: aray tum ko nhi pata…
Mayank lie closing his eyes, while nupur blushed a bit knowing was is cuming…
Gunjan: bhi.. kal koi shopping per gaya.. biwi k sath aur kamal hoa… red dress aya hai bhi… woh bhi pora sir se pair tak…
Samrat: kya baat ker rahi hoo… pretending to fall from sofa…bhabi… is sadu ny… wah bhi wah…kya yeah sach hai mayank…and recvied a cushion right on his face…
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Mayank: nupur mjhy aj late hojaay ga… aj ek dinner meeting hai.. tu tum kahan kah layna…
Nupur: thik hai…
Mayank: meray clients hai aur Gunjan bhi sath hi hogi… hum office k bus walay restaurants mein jayga.. Around koi 5 bajay… gunjan wahin se join kerly gi… aur shayd 9 baj jay mjhy atay atay… tu raat hojai gi tu mein gunjan k ghar jao ga us ko drop kerny .. us ki car kahrab hai tu mjhy hi jana paray ga… islyan bus..
Nupur: ji… she said in super confused look..in question rather exclamation
Mayank: okay bye… aur apna bhi kayal rekh… is sab mein… he kissed her forehead and left , leaving behind a total confused nupur….
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Nupur: mayank gunjan aur Samrat ko gift kya day.. gunjan k kiya pasand hia sab se zayda
She was resting her head on him, and he was stroking her hairs..
Mayank: uff not again… tum ko pata mein buhat irritated horaha hoon. In sab se
Nupur: woh mjh pata hai… per ap elawa itna kareeb se gunjan k aur koi nhi janta.. tu bolay
Mayank: mjh nhi pata.. tumharay baray koi pochy tu bata skata hoo.. us k shayd perfumes pasand hain..
Nupur: lay.. woh tu mjhy bhi pata hai… acha wasy.. mjhy sabse zayda kya pasand hai han..
She raised her head placing her chin on his chest…asking curiously…..
Mayank: he smiled….tumhain sab se zayda.. choryain( bangles ) pasand hai..
Nupur: she was shocked,… apko kasy pata..
Mayank: mjhy sab pata hai.. I can see it… jasay ap match ker ker k pehan rahi hoti hain.. hila hila ker.. roz subha .. un k awaz buhat familiar hai ab tu meray liyan…hiana
She smiled fully… and noded in yes..
Nupur: per gunjan tu reh gain a..
Mayank: mjh us bara mein baat nhi kerni.. bus…mjhy sach mein nhi pata …. aur mjhy kya pasand hai
Nupur: mhhh,… laptop..
He giggled
Mayank: nhi.. mjhy sab se zayda tum pasnad ho…
He said caressing her cheek.. Kissing them.. rolling her off him softly…
Mayank: nupur.. he said huskily
She opened her eyes finding him looking at her passionately..
He thought of holding it but then he was determined to use words now..
Mayank: I love u… I really do… always believe it
She placed her hand on his cheeks..
Nupur: I know mayank..
…….
It was hell hectic week going on, he has to mange it all, plus at home even the preparations were making him tired, chachi want it to be grand, and he knew she is right at her place, his wedding didn't came as expected so atleast Samrat celebration should be grand, but in all this he was feeling again he isn't giving time to her…. That can lead again to distance…His extra carefulness has stressed him too, though she was with him all this week and that so almost evry min yet he still want to do sumthing…just meant for her….
Today as chachi has no plans for him he thought this evening he can be utilized …he text her..
Sham mein ready rehana, we will have dinner out…
She looked at the text surprise, it wasn't new that they have spend some time alone, at time at beach, at time having dinner, or at time at her house whenever she felt like… after his business was stable enough he always loved to, and he has spend pretty quality time with her. But today, she knew he has been be pretty tired and if he has some time he should be given to himself.. he needs it, gosh why he can never think about himself first than anything else, it even didn't cum last in his priority list..
Mayank dinner per kyun, ap rest kero, ghar jaldi arahin hai tu
With this her cell rung
Mayank: kya hua.. koi aur plan hai
Nupur: nhi.. per
Mayank: per kya.. mjhy bhi break mil jay ga… tu ready rehna .. jab mein arha hoon k tu text kerdo ga..thik hai
Nupur: thik hai…
It was 9 pm, and she was relaxing knowing now they can't go , or rather they shouldn't be going, but just than she received text..
I am cuming in to 15 mins, get ready…
Are u sure… is waqt
Han baba just get ready..
It was a very pleasant evening for her, he made it as special as he can, not too much was done, yet it was simple and worthy as he was with her.. his presence has always let her feel so special, his unique ways of affection care and being always so honest with her.. a simple dinner with her chats and his listening, but adding some lines here and there, at time making her completely speech less, at time making her blush..
But today she felt bad to, she didn't knew the reason why he wants to go out so much today, yet she can feel he was so tired yet he didn't showed it a bit..not a single time…
Moving out from the washroom after freshen up the sight made her heart ache, he was lying on the bed without even removing his shoes, she shocked her head, she knew he was tired, removing his shoes, his glasses.
Lying beside him, she was wondering these days sumthing has change, surely, his out of the way efforts has made her think… but then she shrugged all things off, and slept moving close to him

…………..
Gunjan: mayank chalo meray sath…. She griped his hand and he softly removed her hand away.. she look a bit surprised yet ignore it…
Mayank: mein kahin nhi jaraha hoo… I am to tired pls gunjan.. Samrat ko lay jao..
Gunjan: wah nupur tumhara pati.. Samrat k guft lyan ny Samrat k sath hi jao..
Nupur: ohooo… kya lay na hai…
Gunjan: woh hi tu samjh nhi arah hai.. chalo mayank uth jao
Mayank: gunjan mein nhi jaraha hoon..
Nupur: chaly jay na.. us ki help bhi hojay gi…
Mayank: thik hai tu tum bhi humray sath chalo….
Gunjan: ahy hay.. kyun biwi k baghir nhi jao gay..she hit his shoulder with hers….
Mayank: han nhi jao ga… nupur tum chal rahi hoo
Nupur: mayank mein tu chachi k sath decoration check kerny jarahi thi..tu aplog jaly jao na
Mayank: tu mein akela tu nhi jaraha hoo.. gunjan bad mein chaly gay…
Nupur was shocked to wits.. it never happened that mayank react such while going with her.. he wasn't tired.. he came back home early and slept for an hr… and it was about samrat's gift.. Form the day the engagement process strt he was moving away from gunjan.. she is sensing sumthing change between them.. he was actually avoiding being with her.. though he was very happy and it showed when he is with samrat.. arranging his dress, and even went with him to help him bought ring for gunjan… but than wht happen with gunjan…
Maybe I am again thinking to much again..
Nupur: acha tik hai mein chachi k sath bad mein chali jao gi… abhi tumharya sath chalti hoon… per ap dono ja sakty thy na
Gunjan: chalo bhi tumhary pati ko shak hai mjhy per… lol..
Nupur: thik mein chachi ko bata ker ati hoon
She said n left
Mayank: ek kam kero tum dono chaly jao…
Gunjan: mayank tujhy problem kya hai mjhy ek bar mein hi batadoo… deemgh karab hai… koi pershani hai.. mein ny kuch kaha hai ya kcuh aur.. tum ko hua kya hai.. itna weird kyun behave ker rahy hoo….
Mayank: mein ny kya weird behave kya… zaroori hai k mein aur tum akelay jay….
Gunjan: nhi… nupur k sath jany mein mjhy kyun problem hogi.. tu itna complex kyun hora hai.. kis uljhan mein hai…
Mayank: mjhy kuch nhi hoa tum over react ker rahi ho…
Gunjan: mein over react ker rahi hoo.. I know u mayank… fine… per khud solve kerlay tu over stress horaha hai ..kuch hai
Nupur: chalo chalein…
The whole shopping tour mayank remain almost indifferent towards wht Gunjan was doing or asking, only when she use to scold him and ask him to look and help her he use to join nupur and her. His behavior was too hurting Gunjan, yet she ignored this, knowing sumthing is definitely in his mind. He isn't a man not to care for other feeling and specially her's.she can see he was there yet suddenly he wants to move away from her.. this was not like him..not at all..this isn't him at all…. yet Nupur was having fun with gujan and somhow her husband behavior was covered by her…yet Nupur herself was very worried for him..now it was hard to ignore wht actually he is doing and why tht so only with gunjan around…
Is he has any problem towards this engagement, but what, no I cant go again there, he is work stressed maybe.. I will ask him..

Koi Baat Aisee Gar Hooee Keh Tumharay Jee Ko Buree Lagee
To Bayan Say Pehlay Hee Bhoolna Tumhain Yaad Ho Keh Na Yaad Ho
Jisay Aap Gintay Thay Aashnaa Jisay Aap Kehtay Thay Baawafa
Main Wohi Hoon Momin-e-mubtalaa Tumhain Yaad Ho Keh Nah Yaad Ho

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

edited.

very nice update Fiza.

first love mayur scene ... very beautiful ... mayank tried to starts a convo to her abt that matter. bt both stuck in their emotional turmoil.

their were vulnerable ... actually they cant hurt each other. so its better to cant say anything, but they should clear their miscommunication ... its not a misunderstanding, bt a totally mis communication.

loved the scene when nupur said, he loved his laptop. ... n mayank said he loved her the most.

awww ... its so cute ... loved it.

his behavior was not right towards gunjan ... its not only hurting gunjan, but himself too. as she is his childhood friend ... n now he hurting her without reason. his fear is more powerful than his friendship n silence.

very well written.

continue soon.

love ya ...

very nice shairy.

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago

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Anila

@-Anila-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Awesome update API...
loved it lodsss
Beautifully written.
well...i loved d way Mayank cared for Nupur..
i wish Nupur cud tell Mayank abt her doubt..sigh!!!
bt his behaviour towards Gunjan is really hurting...
i hope ke Nupur jaldhi khud se bol de...
waise loved d cute moment between MayUr...
loved Mayank's confession...
n loved d way he said dat he loves Nupur more dan anything...
waiting for d next update...
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

Edited by -Anila- - 14 years ago

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

res

its just update!!!
thx a lot for early update!!!!!! jug jug ayse speed pe update karte raho!!!!!

u again found mayank cute 😆
but felt bad for gunjan 😕 hope nupur will read his hiden silent n sort out everything .

Edited by kheya-mayur - 14 years ago

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Lovely part dii...🤗
Poor mayank nd gunjan...Kya ho gaya hai mayank ko.😒..Wish nupur tell him all soon so that he can behave with gunjan like before...
Cont soon dii...😳