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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 14 years ago

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 14 years ago

I think i'm looking forward to this one!!

Update Soon! Khushi's is definitely getting desperate but her attitude isn't helping much either, eh?

edit*

Oh goody, i was all jumpy after seeing your PM!

Sorry for late comment! Its just that my Wifi on my phone doesn't work properly and i'm mostly out of the house.

Anyway, Arnav's either got a twisted brain or something! All khushi asked for is an apology, but duhh!! Ego, is a precious thing and he have to break it to get her. *Sorry Arnie boy, but i do know when to break my ego!*

Accident!!! just don't kill him, kay! i'll be happy to see him lingering between life and death and khushi/Darya going all 'What have i done!!' in Bollywood style but just don't kill him!

AWESOME UPDATE!! Loved it and waiting for you to Update!!

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Neha

@Khushi4Arnav

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

Yaayyy I am first to comment... I don't mind the PAIN as it is needed.. Please continue soon.. I love ur Writing...

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Paro Khan AKA Choti Ki Di

@P4RO

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Marybarton

Warning: I am quite cruel when it comes to love. In writing, pain makes love sweeter in my view. So don't be mad if I make them suffer. This part is not for the faint hearted.

I read the pre-cap and though "Oh wow"😍

Then I read the above comment and I went all 😲
I'm kind of a faint hearted person, when people write good stories I use my imagination so you can understand why my heart will be dhak dhakying , and my stomach cringing when reading your upcoming update😵

I'm looking forward to it, I know you'll end the story happily, all is well that ends well and patience is a virtue and all that😉

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: P4R0

I read the pre-cap and though "Oh wow"😍

Then I read the above comment and I went all 😲
I'm kind of a faint hearted person, when people write good stories I use my imagination so you can understand why my heart will be dhak dhakying , and my stomach cringing when reading your upcoming update😵

I'm looking forward to it, I know you'll end the story happily, all is well that ends well and patience is a virtue and all that😉

Ok read if you can take it 😳

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oops-whoops

@oops-whoops

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

just read the preview...awsme😃

but thn read the WARNING...aiyooo heartaches...😡

i will b f9 wth heartaches but dnt give me HEARTATTACK🤢

WAITING.

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Usma55

@Usma55

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

Can't wait please update soon

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Vanisha

@TheBlueAngel

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

pain makes love sweeter in my view.

hmm i fnk dat too..😳

eagerly w8in 4 da update😃

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realraul2307

@realraul2307

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

OMG the precap let them have a happy ending!! Your story is going awesome!!

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Sara

@SaraV5

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Posted: 14 years ago

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My sweet and lovely friend I hope you are well also for your family and your friend (s) I want to tell you it's makes me a very sensual and gives me a great sense of suspense and excited me and that I'm unable to wait i want to know how will they discover their feelings for each other? this is incredible jealousy& suffer I hope the end be happy one and I realy love she act just to get he's attention to her wow thi's sooo perfect and this is totally madness for me because it is emotional the love between Khushi and Arnav is a love the firt look he loves her too and they never forget their love for each other their eyes that speaks of love and passion even if there's trouble but the true love must be spent by some steps of unhappiness to come to find true love what is in reality Arnav & Khushi will find their way to live in happiness and joy forever

For me I realy enjoy because your writing gives me happiness by reading every word you put my heart and soul into another world and I want to read and read this is soo lovely & full of pleasant& sensual emotions which gives me so much pleasure to read with passion I love this cute khushi goo girl tell him that he's yours and don't be shy makes him yours again &again

Thank you so much for pm me and I have a question and sorry for this:

I'll wait for how much time for your next share? or

when will you publish your next share you may pm me please thanks again