GEAR UP, MJHT NEW FF 6/6..CHP:16.Pg57 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Thank goodness that mayank is fine...Thanks to benji...He ws a great help to mayank...par yeh mayank sudhrega nahi na...yaha bhi chalu ho gaya...😡
NO prb now my diva is coming to sudharofy him...😎😎
So he is going to miami for racing...Im really eager to know what will be nupur's profession...I dont wanna see her in some bholi-bhali avatar here..Hope mayank ke takkar ka ho...😆
Dii loved this part...
Now cont soon...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
interesting updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
awesome part...
loved it...so cool...
just waiting for nupur's entry...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
nic update di...
thank godnext update nupur will be there😉
waise di if i m not wrong u hv written nupur somewhere in the update
i guess there must be julia instead of nupur...
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Edited my comment on pg.12...😳
now API...plzzz update "GMYH" n "MY" :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
very nice update Fiza.

thank god mayank is fine ... warna adhi ne to puri taiyari kar k rahi thi😡

thanks to ben ... he is so helpfull ... he is grt friend to him.👏

per ye mayank kabhi nhi sudhrega ... hospital me bhi chalu ho gya ... uff iska kya hoga ... hospital me hai,phirbhi ... 😡

isse to koi nhi sudhar sakta ... nupur k alava😳

hmm...so now mayank goint to miami for racing ... off course yaar $10000 is not so small ... pay to karna hi parega.

I hope miami mayank k liye lucky sabit ho😉

waiting for something special😉

continue soon.

love ya🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
very nice update.
Thnx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Bow down to u for liking and reading whtevr I place infront of u, thanku so much'

@anu.. bachy i cant describe her look more than this u have to use ur imaginations more, i am too bad at writing a hot avatar

@kheya..parho parho acha hai' mera faida hai..thnku..

@Auro.. y really think Nupur will b bholi bhali' have a look at her'

@suja.. here is ur update'.

Chapter: 5

15 days have passed and now mayank was able to walk so he asked doctors and got a discharge

Hey mackz this hospital is goonna be so lonely without you

Mayank: ooh baby ..i am gonna miss you too dear..

He kissed her, biding her god bye'

'''..

Mayank: first thing first. Ben wanna see my car

He said walking inside his home,

Gosh I soo missed it'

Ben: there is nothing left in it..wht are u gonna see'

Mayank: I know but still'take me to there'.

Reaching there he saw it crashed completely nothing left in it, yet the rage that burn inside him gave him strength and new will to make it from the zero to the top'

Mayank: wht about a new car'.he was touching the body of his old car, lovingly it was his first love truly

Ben: I think it's better first we head towards Miami and there we shall find a car, in our budget'

Mayank: he laughed our budget'wht a joke'ben we don't have a budget..the money we had we paid hospital bills, clearing pretty much from the other damages, and we will be needing some for our survival ' were is money for a car ..man

Ben: we have'u remember on your every win you give me some amount

Mayank: don't tell me you have saved it'

Ben: yes amigo I have'so we do have some money, not too much, but we'll get a pretty much used, not so well in condition car'

Mayank: thanks dude god knows wht I had done without you'. doesn't matter, do u know any one reliable there who will guide us in getting parts and all'

Ben: yup I have'

Mayank: good pack ur bags we r leaving tomorrow'

Ben: u cant stay calm na'.

Mayank: the moment I am physically ready to drive I want myself back on track'ben u know wht It means to me' and I just want to show I haven't lost'

Ben: okay let me call Saint'

Mayank: saint?

Ben: yup a too much b***d'.and not at all a saint'.he is an indo American too, Samrat aka Saint'

On the hot and sizzling beach of Miami, boy was playing beach ball, are u kidding'he was playing the game he love the most, who cares its beach, public or what, no no, not even he is with girls all around,

Saint com on Saint common'u can to it common

Surrounded with loads of hot girl, youngster, it was the lounge of restaurant on beach. And the two men were playing Need for speed on PS'and here it goes Saint's car and he win'

The whole gang cheer and the betting money was placed on the table which he collected'his cell ranged and he pulled himself out of the crowd seeing the flashing name

Samrat: hello''my dear buddy, what a day today it is..u called me..

Ben: hey Saint how r u..

Samrat: I m fine and with your voice I am become more n more perfect'.

Ben: saint I am coming to Miami 2morow, will be needing your help in settling down there'and in many more things..

Samrat: ya sure anytime..evrything is cool at your side'

Ben: nah its isn't

He narrated him whole story'.and tell him why he is coming there

Samrat: don't u worry dude, just chill and u and ur frnds are always welcome..see ya 2morwo'

''''.

It was a bright sunny day and benji and mayank reached Miami , Samrat was there to receive them..

Samrat: hey dude'glad to see u here'

Ben: hey man'this mackz'

Mayank: hey... thanks for the help'

Samrat: com on man'wht are friends for ..donot be so formal..

Mayank: I bet u r gonna regret asking me not to be formal

Samrat: ahan'I will love to'

''

Mayank: saint we need a car, as it will take loads of time to upgrade it'

Samrat: hmmm'I need to talk to some people'actually my sister is more into all this..she is the one who is in street racing'so let's talk to her ..she will help u and will take u to people who can help u to have a car and all accessories..

Sister'ahaa'that actually made mayank to smirk'.yet he hid it knowing he is thinking to much in front of her brother'.

Mayank: so shall we'

Samrat: now now'

Mayank: ya'now..

Samrat: okay'she is on beach lets go..

Mayank: where is she'.i cant see anyone like a sister here'.

Samrat: one thing I will warn u'.donot mess with her'.

Mayank: wo brother'

Samrat: nah her brother wont to anything she herself will'

Oh there she is'

Mayank: where'he wasn't actually listening to samarat as his eyes were glued on someone else'

Samrat: there'.

A girl on quartz bike was cuming there way'dressed in white shorts and off shoulder yellow top, exposing her dusky skin, making every one wanting her'. her hairs flying in air.. her face do have droplets of water on it, getting evaporated on her smoking hot skin

she was looking dam hot and gorgeous' '.he couldn't help yet to scan her'

Stepping down from the bike, she was walking towards him like angle.. wht angel mackz, since when u have start seeing such hot chick as angel'.and he has his eyes dreamingly looking at her, she is a pure dusky beauty, beauty eyes, with a gorgeous face, and checking her fully he can only came up with an adjective perfect.. , standing in front of him was a girl he so want to know, with an irritated look she was actually glaring him as he was still looking at her like an idiot'

Nupur: man..lost MR mayank Sharma'

His name actually made him come out of his dream world where he has gone too far with her

Mayank: woo woo'no body called me that'its Mackz

Nupur: why ur ashamed of urself Mayank Sharma'.thts why changed ur name'

Mayank: that's certainly not ur business'but the name is mackz.. that is it..

Nupur: nupur'

Mayank: hey nutz'ur hot'

Nupur: I know that'.and its nupur'got it'I am not like u who is ashamed of his identity and hiding it in something else'.

Mayank: fine..Nupurrr'.

Nupur: ur eyes donot have x-ray so no use gazing me'shut ur mouth and let's get on work

Mayank: the work wch wouldn't minus need of x rays'..he said with smirk'

Nupur: she checked him'.ur leg is broken ..what about I broke ur neck to'

Mayank: he bow down and said'pls..Gorgeous..

Nupur: a sick and old flirt'u have to do more than this and u donot have that to waoo me ..so better for u'.get on work ur here for'

He smiled and followed her, it will be dam interesting know her, closely he added and chukled'

''

Nupur: what happen to u'.

Mayank: got an accident..

Nupur: so shifted to Miami ' she raised her eyes brows'

Mayank: as if u donot know' was trapped so cant race in NY, but I have to pay money so need to race, plus I want to be on track back'

Nupur: ur were trap.. ur cho cheet little boy.. that u cant see things'.

Mayank: watch ur words gorgeous u still donot know me..

Nupur: even I donot want to.. so were u wanna race.. wch track'

Mayank: I have no idea about any track here'. So first I will be needing a car.. can u help in tht..

Nupur: ya I can.. how much money do u want to win

Mayank: 10k ..atlest

Nupur: phew man' let see how good u r at road, than will decide where u can race' though there is a race here, 3 set of, and with evry passing round u get and increment of money, almost 15k the winner get..

Mayank: that's gr8'. I m gonna do it..

Nupur: if u are capable of driving such.. I have a reputation here..wont be ruining it for u'.

Mayank: here I am ready to ruined my life for u and u are fearing for ur reputation'

She looked at him as .. get sumthing new'.

Nupur: really.. she came close and trace his chin' and I am planning to make ur life hell.. she said hell removing her finger sharply from his face, making a small cut there..

Mayank: ouch' such a new way of giving love marks..i like.. this is nice'

Nupur: ur sick'.

Mayank: to much' help me '. Pls I m dying..pls' he was acting dramatically..ur my only savior and she couldn't help but to smile yet hided it well'.

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
edited.

very nice update Fiza.

u knw, whn u first started this ff, i was amazed to see ur talent of writing, but now i have no word to say about u .😃

u just write too well. u knw i was reading ur ffs quite long time, n i knw this ff is most difficult ff to write... bt i also knw that u r doing this diffcult job with so much ease.👏

hats off to u.👏

now coming to updte.

wow ... fiza, nupur ne kya entry mari hai yaar ... mindblowing ... mackz to pura bowled out ho gaya😆

u mk her too hot ... baat kya hai?? aajkal itna hot likh rahi ho??😉 kiska asar hai ya?? batao batao😉😛

ye samrat na naam saint hai???😲 😆OMG ye samrat kab se saint ban gaya??😲😆

ufff ... mayank n his flirt😡 ... wo kabhi nhi sudhar sakta. ab aisi nupur ko dekh kar ye bhi nhi keh sakti k nupur usse sudhar degi😆

ab to Bhagwan ka hi bharosa hai😳😆

continue soon.

love ya ... 🤗



Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
yarr ammazing update i hv read so many FF's But this Maynak is most Flirty amng all othrs awsm
thanxx fr Pm

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