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Posted: 13 years ago

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Yaaay FIRST PLACE!!...and yes this was a race...😛

Okay so first of all i love the drowning darkness that is seeping out of the words babe, the sinister edge to the normalcy that is so much more than normal. And the metaphor it's so - how do i put this - it's the childish naive bit to their complex relationship that grounds it. That makes it seem like there is always hope...

I lubhing lubhing dis!!

anyway i'll be on update pestering duty from tmrw so be prepared!!!😆

Much Love,

Your Bubbbaaa!!!

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Hey Chinnu, a new OS!! Yay! But my humble request would be please honey, update regularly!

It is very different, nothing like ur previous works!

Started off very happy but ended with a suspense!

Pleasant thing being they are fighting it together😊

What is the past that is dreading them??

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Posted: 13 years ago

I adored it!!!!!!!! n you knw that but its like reading again anew.
The rawness of their love. its like they love each other and hate that fact with a will.
the saudade feel of what could be but is not there...what they hoped n what actually happened is so elemental.

Who got into you sesky?...i hope not too much samosa!!!!
But if it does this to you i aint complaining your going MIA on me.

Loved it sooo much!!!!

P.S- Dedication buba. We're just adorable!!!

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dhivy

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice start.. its different nd nice tooo... do continu it yaar...

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice start waiting for more

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome start! Can't wait to read more😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome start... chotta khushi and her chana antics were so childish and so cute... 😊but the present it got so much mystery😕 looking forward for this SS

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Oh my god! that was so well written Chinnu!

But I am so confused about what's going on 😳😆

Arnav and Khushi are married, but there's something wrong? 😲

I wonder what's going to happen next, continue soon! ⭐️

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